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Posted: 12 years ago
3 & 4th both the parts were extremly cute... 😳
it was so beautiful I loved it ❤️
u wrote it so cutely 😳
I am loving it...
do update the next one soon!!
anxiously waiting to read it...
thank u for the PM 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prakriti4u

3 & 4th both the parts were extremly cute... 😳
it was so beautiful I loved it ❤️
u wrote it so cutely 😳
I am loving it...
do update the next one soon!!
anxiously waiting to read it...
thank u for the PM 🤗

thank u dear... will update as soon as the next chapter is ready 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vurshiii

<font size="5">sounds interesting..


<div></div>plz continue...</font>


Thank you 😊 yes surely will 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
just loved the swaron convo
sharon only wanting tohave lunch with swayam
n last ka suspense ...
this mysteries nly make me curious to read more
loving this
thanxfor the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi

amazing update

just loved the swaron convo
sharon only wanting tohave lunch with swayam
n last ka suspense ...
this mysteries nly make me curious to read more
loving this
thanxfor the pm

Thank you 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update!!! [chp 4]
swaron was super cute n swayams concern was aww
n jealous swayam...!
this was an amazing update
n this is making me more anxious to read further
update soon
thanx forpm
so far i am loving this ff

Edited by vrushanharshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

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veryy nic update...

swayam jelous ha ...

only sharon can clam him

btw ur a good writer... plz update. asap

tnx 4 pm


Thank you 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys, firstly a big big thank you for all those lovely comment... please keep on showering your feed back like this... really helps in writing ahead 😃
Here is the next update



Chapter 5

The sun rose and was finding its way into the sky'.. The gaps between the curtains were mildly lighting up the room'.. The morning blow of the wind was playing with her hair on her cheek'. The slight tickle got a smile on her face'.. Actually no I guess she was smiling because she was dreaming about Him'. Whatever may be the reason but suddenly the smile was disturbed by a buzz'. She being a light sleeper could sense even a whisper around her'. Her hand automatically travelled to the side table to fetch her cell as she had received a text'. She half opened her eyes and as she read the text, she was wide awake'. Yes it was His message "Good morning Love"'.. She slowly moved out of the bed as she didn't want to disturb Simmi who was sleeping right next to her'. While going into the balcony she called him up'.

Phone convo:

Sharon: Hey, Good Morning!

Swayam: Good morning, You up so early?

Sharon: Yeah! Out of excitement!

Swayam: Ok, so let's go to the beach for a walk and then breakfast, what say?

Sharon: Ok, kool! See you in 20!

Swayam: Ok!

Both hang up' After 20 mins'.

Sharon slowly got out of the room as the rest of the girls were yet asleep'.. She walked up to the lobby to meet Swayam'.There she stood in a colourful stripped beach dress ending just a few inches above her knee' It was simple but yet gave her a diva look'.. He was not there yet so she was just fiddling with her mobile when she heard someone talk to her'.

Karan: Hey, a very good morning Sharon!

Sharon: Good morning, Mr.Malhotra!

Karan: Oh please, call me Karan! So' ( just as he was about to start up a conversation he saw Swayam coming towards them)

There he walked up in snow white pants and a sky blue shirt with just the bottom two-three buttons closed' he was flaunting his perfectly toned body and his hair wet and messed up'. Karan gulped looked at him advancing towards them'.. Sharon followed Karan's gaze and just smirked at his reaction'.

Sharon (clearing her throat): So'?

Karan: ummm'. So'. Mmm'. Uhhh

Just then Swayam came forward and held Sharon by the waist and pecked her on her cheek'.

Swayam: Hey love!

Sharon (lightly blushing): Hey! (to Karan) Mr.Malhotra you were saying something?

Karan (nervously): Uhhh' Ya' So Ms.Rai Prakash who is the co-ordinator in your team,with whom I can stay in contact throughout the event?

Sharon: For that you can talk to Taani, she'll be taking care of the formalities and stuff!

Karan: Oh ok! Ok so I'll see you'll at the venue, have a great time!

He rushed out from there before they could indulge into a conversation'.. but Swayam found this behaviour a bit weird' Whereas Sharon was having a good laugh over it'.

Swayam: Isn't this person weird?!

Sharon: Haan tumhare kal ke reaction ka asar'.

Swayam: Kya?... Anyways woh sab chodo'. Waise someone's looking breath-taking!

Sharon (blushing): You're looking hot and handsome today!

They both were walking up the beach hand in hand' feeling the morning rays'. Fresh breeze'. Soft sand'. Beautiful melody of the waves'. And to their luck the beach was a private one owned by the resort itself'.. Both removed their footwear and let their skin feel the soft and cold sand crystals'.

Sharon: Swayam, tumhe pata hai I'm so so so happy today! Really excited about this event' Aaj hume kitne saare log milenge' we'll meet so many different dancers from different places'. Kitna kuch dekhne milega'. Experience karne milega'. And itne bade event main stepping as Chief Guest is such an honour'..

Swayam: I know baby!

She was expressing her excitement just like a small kid who is excited about their 1st day at school'. Swayam was admiring her cuteness because that is what he loved in her'. Her innocence that the world ought to see'. This Sharon was only known to him'. We can say 'iss Sharon pe Swayam ka copyright hai''.. She shared her deepest feelings'. Behaved like a kid'.. Was a normal girl who wished to fulfil her dreams'.

All throughout the walk they were talking about the GDF'.. Soon they went up to the resort and got seated in one of the shacks for breakfast'. Just as they were sipping their coffee entered their friends'.

Simi: Good Morning Lovebirds!

Swaron: Morning guys!

Rey: Tum dono itni jaldi?

Swayam: Jaldi kahan dude 1 ghanta ho gaya'. Hum dono walk pe bhi jaake aa gaye'. You'll are late!

Nil: Yaar hum logon ko bhi utha deta' (winking at the gang) Hum bhi walk pe chalte!

Amar: Haan yaal! (haan yaar)

Swayam: Aare woh'..

Simi: Haan Sharon, tumne bhi nai bataya! Tum pehle bol deti toh main bhi saath chalti!

Sharon: Simi' woh baat aisi thi ke... uhhh'.woh' main'uuhhh

All of them burst out laughing'.

Rey: Just look at your faces!!!!!

Taani: Relax! Hum sab Mazak kar rahe the!!!

They all have a good laugh teasing the couple and having a nice healthy breakfast'.. And now according to plan they all had to get ready and leave for the venue'.

They all were welcomed by the participants and a huge crowd at the event'. They felt like celebs as they walked in through the crowd with a few crew members surrounding them in a circle and the crowd hooting and shouting'.. The venue was huge'.. it was adjacent to one of the famous beached in Goa'. There was a huge stage right opposite the entrance'.. The program was a day long and the team had to be present throughout the while'.. there were a number of platforms everywhere allotted to a different dance style'. There was a corner for solo performance and another for group acts'. The team walked up to each platform and saw atleast one performs there'. They all were a bit nostalgic as they remember the initial days of their struggle'. The way they had barged into the India fest where they had actually started off as a professional group'. Their struggle during college as they had to concentrate on their college and also their professional group'. Soon as time passed'. It was getting darker'.. the crew members lead the D3 team to the main stage and got them seated there'.. They had a number of acts performed by dancer from all over India'. Soon the host announced a special performance by the Chief Guest'. The gang got on the stage and mesmerised the audience by their performance'.. It was fusion and the gang had performed on a number of dance styles every person was a master of'. They had included a few couple chunks that were led by "The couple"'..They proved it that they were worth the higher hold at the event'. As it all wrapped up the host announced a party for the following evening and invited the participants too'. The gang was hell tired and headed back to the resort'

They all freshen up and got seated in the restraunt to have dinner'. All were exhausted but planned to have a small chat before heading to their rooms'. All of them moved to these individual cottages with a table in the middle, mainly for large groups to sit and chat'. All as usual the boys were seated with their girls'. Sharon had her head resting on Swayam shoulder and his hand holding her by her waist'.

Bharat: Yaar, bahut thak gaye hai yaar'.

Simi: But this was seriously worth it!

Taani: By the way guys, aap logon ne bahut hi mind-blowing performance di!

Vicky: But performance ke full credits Swayam, Rey and Sharon ko jaata hai!

Aashi: Haan aap logon kya mast choreography types ki'.

Rey: Thank you guys! But sirf hum teeno ne nai hum sab ne mehnat ki hai' So three cheers to D3..

*Hip-hip* *Hurray*

*Hip-hip* *Hurray*

*Hip-hip* *Hurray*

They all continued chatting, laughing and having their fun as usual'.

Same evening in Mumbai'.

Person 1: Who is responsible for this mess?

Person 2: Sir, he is not in town'.

Person 1: How can he be so irresponsible? Doesn't he know how important this is for us?

Person 2: But sir, he said that this was completed and no point was left out!

Person 1: I don't know anything; I want him here by lunch time tomorrow! I don't know how you do it!

Person 2: Yes sir!

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Firstly guys sorry for chotu update... And secondly I know maine jyada Swaron moment nai likhe but the reason is that 1) story ki demand and 2)I don't want them to be those mushy-mushy kinda couples jo har waqt sirf romance ya fight karte rehte hai... I want Swaron to be a bit realistic but yet with the esence of their love...I promise aage story main you'll get to see more of Swaron... So please bare with me

Please leave in you comments and let me know how it was!

Next update Coming Soon...

Edited by smartypantstanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyy veryy nic update...

karan ki ho gai asi ki tasi...

btw ye 2 person kon ha i think swayam ke office ke ha... yr aisa suspense pe matcroka karo...

egarly waiting 4 nxt update
Edited by smartypantstanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is freaking awesome!!
Sorry comment for previous chapter.
Read both chapters in one go!!
Both were equally amazing!!
loving this one!!
Thanks for the PM.

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