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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
nice updatee =)
karan and flirt...hmm...rey ka competition...LOL =D
but really, the update was really amazingg =)
and hope karan changed, i mean, doesnt put taani in trouble now...
excited for the next part...update soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 5

*taani goes out n meets karan*

Taani – kya hua kanu?? Evrthng ok?? Kya emergency hai??

Karan – arrey motti tune who side wala pani puri khayi hai kya jo mere ghar ke samne hai?? Its really good..so we should go dre..my treat..toh chal

Taani – kya?? R u mad kanu..pani puri ke liye mujhe bahar bulaya?? Pls main jaa rahi hun andar wapas..i cnt bunk or miss any classes

Karan (holding taani's hand) – oye taani ruk na..chal na khane chalte hai..it will b like old times aur bahar ghumna health ke liye accha hota hai😳

*meanwhile rey and swayam are looking from inside d class..dey cnt hear anything but they sure can see wat ws happening*

Rey – wth.. hw dare he!! isne taani ka haath kyu pakda..aur kya baat hogi jo itne pass pass mein baat kar rahe hai 😡

Swayam(suspiciously) – uummm rey weise yeh mera line hona chahiye since im d brother na??aur itne bhi pass nahi hai woh..but wait a sec, tera toh break-up ho gaya na taani se toh tujhe ise kya?😲

Rey(nervously) –uummm..haan break-up hua hai par woh..u knw,taani GS hai aur main assistant hoon..

Swayam – haan toh?

Rey – haan toh..uumm..toh mujhe as her assistant have to know everything about d boss..khabar rakhni padti hai boss ke bare mein..aur weise bhi she is ur sister n ur my frend na toh I shud help u..u know as a frend..haan yehi hai reason..aur kuch nahi

Swayam – oh god rey..tu aur tera logic..bt watvr it is I think vp sir ne hi bulaya hoga taani ko ya ese kuch hoga..i knw my sister well..woh ese ainvayi bunk nahi karegi toh chill

Rey (to himself) – yaar swayam tujhe keise samjhau..taani pe toh mujhe bhi confidence hai ki yeh ese kuch nahi karegi par I dnt trust mr.watvr here..he is so annoying!! Oh god usko abhi entry karna tha?? Mere aur taani ke patch-up hone ke baad nahi aasakta tha who

*outside d class*

Taani – kanu we r nt kids anymore..school mein toh u used to fail all d time but ur father used to bribe d school n tu pass hojata tha..but dis is collge n main GS hun toh mere bohut saare responsibilities hai dat I cnt ignore..aur classes toh main bilkul bunk nahi kar sakti😒..toh lets go in n collge ke baad chalte hai na

Karan – haye bhagwan motti!!! Ab tu lectures mat de yaar..pehle bhi deti thi lekin koi asar nahi pada toh abhi kyu de rahi hai..idc we have to go out now..aur chill maar yaar, aggar fail huye toh Mr.malhotra hai na to d rescue 😉

Taani – haye krishnaji iss ladke ko sambhalo..hahahaha..u r absolutely mad!! Fine lets go but we have to come back coz I have loads of things to do..chal😃

*taani and karan leaves..d whole day rey cudnt concentrate as he ws too anxious n worried for taani..as college ended, taani and karan were nowhere to be seen..rey den decided to go to swayam's place to find out whre taani was..both swayam n rey tried to call taani but her phone was switched off..now rey was really worried n pacing around d living room..den d door bell rings n taani enters*

Rey(shouting) – TAANI TUM KAHA THI? U KNW WATS D TIME NOW..N U MISSED ALL D CLASSES TOO..PATA HAI I GOT SO WORRIED!!😡

Taani – dekho rey yeh dikhaway na band karo..i know dat ur a very good actor but pls yeh dikhawa mere saamne nahi..aur aggar aapko yaad nahi toh main yaad dilati hoon ki humara break-up hogaya aur uss din se aap mere liye kuch nahi aur main aapke liye kuch nahi..ab yaad agaya?😡

Rey(was really hurt but he kept his charade) – haan mujhe sab kuch yaad hai taani..main toh ese bol raha tha coz tumhare karan swayam kitna worried ho gaya tha..tumhare karan hum practice bhi nahi karpaye..tumhare karan maine apna time waste kiya hai aur tum toh bahar enjoy karke aarahe ho uss Mr.kamal or watvr ke sath😡

Taani – uska naam karan hai!!😡

Rey – like I care

Swayam – enough guys!! Pls tum log shuru mat hojana..n taani seriously we were really worried..tum kaha thi??aur tumhara phone bhi off tha aur tumne classes bhi bunk kiya..ek fone toh kar sakti thi na

Taani – sorry bhai..actually main karan ke sath thi bahar..hum pani-puri khaane gaye aur Mumbai ghume..aur mera fone ka bat low ho gaya tha isiliye off..im so sorry bhai

Rey – aur uska fone kaha tha??kutta ne fone ko khaliya??😡

Swayam – rey

Taani – uss bichara ka fone uske ghar pe reh gaya tha isiliye I cudnt use it..aur weise bhi rey, ek behen aur bhai baat kar rahe hai toh ajnabees r nt welcome..darwaza udhar hai

Swayam – taani pls dnt start again n rey ws only helping me..accha ab taani u look really tired so u shud sleep..but promise me dat u wont do anything like dis again..main bohut pareshaan ho gaya tha aur collge mein bhi VP sir ws searching for u bt maine bahana diya ki u r on a sick leave n u knw hw much I hate lying

Taani – yes bhai..sorry bhai n I promise main ese kuch nahi karunggi in d future..gn den

Swayam – rey its quiet late so i think u shud go home too..n kal subah- subah rehearsals bhi hai

Rey – yeah ok fine..anytime dude..c u tmrrw

*d next day in canteen*

Karan – toh swayam ne kuch nahi bola??😲

Taani – bhai bohut worried ho gaye the bt he just took a promise from me dat I won't repeat it again..par

Karan – par kya?? It's a gud thng na dat swayam ddnt shout at u n tu promise bhi acchi tarah se nibhaegi na toh??

Taani – arrey woh nahi..kal bohut ajeeb hua..bhai se jyada rey hyper ho rahe the..unhone toh mujhe dantha bhi aur yeh bola ki he ws getting worried..so im confused wethr yeh sach tha ya it ws all a drama

Karan – hhmm..its simple motti..jitna tune mujhe rey ke bare mein bataya hai I think it ws all an act..u know swayam ke samne toh he had to act all worried n all lekin andar se usko kuch farak nahi pada hoga..ese hi hota hai break-up ke baad😕

Taani – hhmmm..dat means I ws rght..esa hi hai..i cnt blve rey esa hai..maine itna galat socha unke bare mein😕

Karan – accha chod na yeh sab baat..sun aaj raat ko bahar chalein?? N no bunking I promise

Taani – hahahaha..ok bt kaha??😃

Karan – I heard abt dis new club..its pretty good..toh waha chalein?

Taani – club?? Kanu, bhai toh clubbing jaate nahi..toh its impossble

Karan – yaar motti kya humseha bhai bhai..lets go just d two of us..mere frends bhi aarahe hai n dey will meet us dre..toh challein??

*den rey enters*

Rey – kaha jaane ki plan ban raha hai?

Karan – oohh rey hey..watsup?

Rey(annoyed) – yeah hi..uummm kavya rght?😛

Taani – its karan nt kavya!!😡

Rey – same thng..toh kaha chalne ki baat ho rahi hai?/

Taani – woh..

Karan – woh actually main motti, I mean taani ko ek restaurant ke bare mein bata raha tha..its new n really good toh shayad hum lunch ke liye waha jaae

Rey – nahi nahi tumlog nahi jaasakte..woh aaj bohut imp rehearsals hai toh tani cant go..tumhe aggar jaana hai toh u shud go

Taani (to herself) – restaurant?? Rehearsals?? Yeh dono ek dusre ko jhut kyu bol rahe hai

Karan – accha? Arrey nahi nahi its ok den..hum canteen mein kuch khalengge😃

Rey – ok den..accha ab chalo guys its time for class..u dnt wanna b late

Karan – yeah ok u go n we r cuming

*rey leaves..as taani n karan r walkng, dey continue their convo*

Karan – god yeh rey ka problem kya hai?😕 Uufff accha watvr it is..toh motti aaj raat ka plan..on??

Taani – tum pehle yeh batao y u lied to rey abt clubbing??

Karan – arrey yaar aggar main rey ko batata toh he will tell evry1 n den club mein sab log aajate saath..n I dnt want dat..im just inviting u n my frends..toh ur cuming rght??

Taani – oohh…nahi kanu!! Ur mad..aggar bhai ko ya tauji ko pata chalega na toh mujhe pehle ulta karke marengge phir mujhe zinda hi burry kardengge!!

Karan – hahahaha..ur so funny motti..ese kuch nahi hoga pagal kyunki im gonna ask swayam for d permission

Taani – tum bhai se puchoge?? Ahhahaha..ok den fine..aggar bhai ne haan boldiya den main zarror chalunggi

Karan – fine den..promise?

Taani –promise 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
nice story...
karan's charactr s mysterious...
is he gud or bad????????????
totally confused...
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Its really superb nice udate n thnxx a lot for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Jealous Rey is too much fun lol, I love his explanations to Swayam on why he care so much about his Taani after their breakup lol
Hmm Karan is a bad influence on Taani, first bunk class and now Clubbing hmm
Love how Rey kept on using wrong name for him lol
Awesome updates, I love both parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Awesome update
But Karan's character is very confusing...
Can't understand if he is good or bad
Update soon
Already waiting!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
interesting story..
but ye karan uska kuchh samaj nahi aata.

loved to see jealous rey..
do cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Loved loved loved the update nrey jealoud part was jus fab n loving karan he making go clubbing n stufff loving it update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
okay...chap 5 nahi padha...LOL =D
the next part is awesome too...
karan taani ko marva ke rahega...
excited for the next part =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
hey !!! nice update ...luking forward to more of taani-rey n obv kannu ! lolzzz...plz update soon n ya thanx for d pm😊

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