SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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SA_nimk

@SA_nimk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#821

tht was amazinggg!!

loved it so much

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rini_kat

@rini_kat

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#822

nice update...Hope some sense get into these two stubborn's heads...

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#823

Oh no!! There is gonna be another chap for lemons? thats all? :(

Alright! so whats gonna take place in the next one!!? cant wait to know!

I somehow feel its all a ploy! staged by Anjali... La ... and offcourse Khushi! to get him to thinking and act fast! Haina? :)

Well lets see what you got! :)

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

Should I reserve Here or on the new thread 😛😆.

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#825

OMG

are you gonna end this

plzzz connn man

m so much in love with lemonns now

plzzz

loved the update

it was awosomeee

plz plz plz plz do con soon plzzz

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crackerszone

@crackerszone

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#826

The first few lines which describes how khushi fondly plays wid da ring n shows it to everybody just does not match...I am now so eager to know whats going on in khushi's mind...she must be experiencing more pain dan Arnav...loved Arnav's perspective too..da way he is suffering n changing along wid it.its written beautifully

Plss dont take too long before da next update...I really wanna read what happens next

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desilover101

@desilover101

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#827

omg i love love love this series!!!! <3

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cool_zephyr

@cool_zephyr

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

Arnav's anguish and pain is beautifully written...Hope we get a happy ending😛

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bs_deeps

@bs_deeps

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#829

Originally posted by: Nehasupnfan
You are a master at writing Arnav's feelings! Its bang on!! EVerything that the Arnav on the show felt! Just bang on! I congratulate you for writing Arnav so well!!!
This chapter was probably your best :) I can't wait to see what Arnav does to get her back!!!! :) Please update soon! :)

this comment made Farha super happy..she too loves to believe that she understands ASR 😊

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#830

So only one last chapter left? I think u have dedicated this chapter fully to Arnav. U have perfectly narrated the emotions of a complicated personality. Will give a detail feedback in last chapter.

Will definitly miss this SS. Ur version of Khushi , Arnav and the ultra modern Devimaiyya who mutters Dammit.

I really hope u will start a new SS or FF based on Arshi soon.

Edited by ramyarn - 12 years ago