SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#811

OMG arnav still silent...

damn it...

khushi is perfect in her position...

arnav should admit he loves khushi...

i hope it isn't late...

update soon...

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rupamudra

@arshirupa

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#812

wow beautyful story

loved it

plz update soon

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#813

oh common arnv...
atleast now, do something to get ur lady love...
awsm update dear...
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tnxxx 4 pm...

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#814

Fabulous update...

Arnav's inner turmoil r very well explained... all over the update i was so curious to see what's gonna happen next,u really held me to the story upto the end... very well written..

Hope atleast now Arnav wil be fast & clear enough with his feelings...

Eagerly waiting for next part..Cant wait to see whats gonna happen next

Update soon

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#815

That was an amazinggg update!!!

Soo this beautiful love story is finally progressing towards its happy ending!!

Loved how you penned down arnavz fight with his feelings,affection,love for khushi and himself

Anjali indeed is the only person who can reach that hot headed man

The way he blurts it all out in a daze if helplessness was so well written

The way khushi asked appko kya farak paratha hai and his answers to it ib his inner self

So last chapter,m sure its not khushis wedding jus have to wait fr story to unfold

Plus the secret of lime will also be revealed

Amazinggg update!!!

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#816

arnav is all tensed coz she is engaged and now is acting all happy and he cant do anything to stop the ache in his heart...loved this update...what will he so now..

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#817

You are a master at writing Arnav's feelings! Its bang on!! EVerything that the Arnav on the show felt! Just bang on! I congratulate you for writing Arnav so well!!!

This chapter was probably your best :) I can't wait to see what Arnav does to get her back!!!! :) Please update soon! :)

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Sanchita

@Sanchitaarshi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#818

Go ASR go... Go & confess ur feelings... There is no time to break down... Plz continue soon dear... Eagerly waiting for the next... Thanx for the P.M