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@saima4744

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

OMG brilliant post.

how he pick and rop her from her repactive.

how he wanted to hear his nam ARNAV JI from her mouth.

is she engaijd someother 1.

what's up next.

tf pm me.

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819504

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Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Emotinal update...
Beautifully pen down each n evry emtn frm arnie going through...
Is khush really got engagd..?
Do cntinue soon...
Thanx fr the pm

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awaww

@awaww

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Oh my God she's engaged! Arnav you stupid idiot you should've asked her out when you had tbe chance not play games. I really want to see how he gets her back.

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

omg wat is happening?
who is this gautam?
did she engaged to him?
why khushi took this decision?
waitng for the next update

Edited by barbiebala - 12 years ago

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Poor man, finally he decided to give this thing a chance only to have his world crumble at the sight of the engagement ring. Was she forced into this or did she simply give in after he said he won't change his views? Well I am a believer of Devi Mayya's reflection that nothing is over yet. Go win her back you silly man!

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riti4u

@riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Finally an update...i missed you..😊Poor Arnav😭...this update was more from Arnav's POV..I loved the way ...you showed arnav's hesitation...and his attempt to try it one more time..for khushi's sake... even to think about marriage ...if it was all she wanted... Ok...so fiancee part was surprising... you revealed that quite well...i loved last scene you described ..with arnav realising what it was to let go off that lemony scent from his life... Ahh Devi Maiyya gives hope...Nothing is actually over till it is actually over...

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Superb and brilliant update, simply outstanding.

Loved the update from Arnav's point of view, you wrote down his feelings and emotions so well.

Awww the part where he wanted to remove her Pom poms for his own fantasy was superb.

It was so sweet Arnav tried making a conversation with Khushi, even she was shocked.

I can't believe Khushi has got engaged, poor Arnav was distraught when Khushi confirmed it.

Hopefully in the next update Arnav does speak up and tells Khushi that he wants to give there relationship a try.

Devi Maiya has hinted it's not over, I'm happy with that.

Loved the update, a brilliant read.

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

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Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Nice turn of events! Can't wait to read
further!

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Sanjana Seth

@sanjanaseth1994

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

awesome update dear...!

just hope nothing is really over...!

feeling very bad for arnav...! 😭

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nidinanisam

@nidinanisam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#530

continue soon.i love this story

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