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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update very well written
continue soon please and thank u for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh nooo!! Khushi got engaged. Well I think this will be a reality check for Arnav.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ooo! Quotes!

She's engaged. Nooo! Arnav grow a pair and do something about it!

Can't wait to read more! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Farha, you write beautifully.

The update was painful and touching. Half way through the update I wa skind of frustrated with the pace and a lot more with Arnav for being a jerk! If you can't give the woman what she deserves then leave her alone! Dont play with her feelings!
And for God's sake she is not a social experiment that you will try and then see whether it changes your thoughts on commitment or marriage!! I was totally pissed off with him for being so self-centered.

I hope now he feels the pain as Khushi is engaged - the similar or much more pain that Khushi felt when he talked about she not being his type, about dating lavanya and giving Khushi some hope simultaneously , kissing her only to break her heart!
And no apologies from him either to the poor girl. Sorry for my rant Farha but I am totally disappointed in this Arnav. He is no teen to need time to sort out his feelings. He is emotionally stunted but why play with poor girl's feelings?

I hope I didn't offend you but your writing is very touching and it evokes strong emotions(and tears) in me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I liked the update.. Especially the end Arnav needed a reality check just because he is not the marrying types his lemon and lime will not be left hanging in the branch..
Somebody else who believes in marriage will value her and marry her..
It brought back memories of ipk.. Engagement revelation...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hawww she got engaged... oh no... loved the update... she is behaing indifferently with him... hai poor Arnav ab tmhin smajh ayay gi wht she was asking and y?
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb chapter...
she is engaged...how when??
seriously poor arnav...same feeling for khushi...
awesome chapter as always...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..amazing story, read all parts in one go.
Felt really bad for arnav at d end. I thnk dis goutam is payal fiancee. Anyhow i hope it clears soon..cant c him in such a state for long
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh God...What an update this was Farha di👏👏
The way u wrote their emotions and their small hesitating convo in the car was Awesome👏
I wanted him to open up to her and he was ready for that but what was that Fiance Bomb😲Never expected this twist😭
His world is crumbling down and he is thinking everything is Over...😭
Loved it to the core the Di🤗Waiting for the next update eagerly😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor arnav...why can't he open up???update soon

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