T2-ariya ss-tu meri jaan hai. part18 - Page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...poor riya and rathore is angry and arjun wants riya to stay there...waiting riya's desicion...update soon...thanx for pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome,fantastic ,fab dr

Rathod Ayesha and Arjun knew the feeling of Riya


Omg Riya kya karege?????

Bhae care her

Gifts r very swtt

Thanx4 pm me such wonderful.,outstanding update

Update soon

Can't hit button some prob dr

Love u and ur work

Mishti
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Posted: 12 years ago
Terrific update...

Loved it so so much.

Poor Riya was in so much pain... arjun's love for her is on full test nw...



ur write up on their emotions is amazing..


Wow Rathod n Arjun heard the convo btwn Riyasha.

All the gifts r realy nice.

Loved Arjun's reaction whn Rathod wanted to take her away frm him.


waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional updates..


arjun and rathorre heard riya's pain...


rathore care and anger on arjun...


please riya shouldnt leave arjun...


waitng for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb updates...


emotions, drama evrthing mindblowing...


ariya's relation...


rathore's concern...everything emotion beautifully highlighted


waiting for updates..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plzzz dr if possible update today.

Its going great n cant wait more to read it further.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...!!!
riya's feelings insecurity emotions everything has been described beautifully...!!
aisha and riya's talks were very heart touching...1!!!
wow sameer and arjun heard them... and arjun feeling guilty... hope he makes everything okay soon...
godbharai rasam was amazing...!!!
and sabke gifts were very lovely...
omg sameer wants to take her home... and arjun doesn't want to go...
ab kya hoga?
continue soon...!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
wow riya's godh bharai gr8
poor riya she thinks arjun doesn't love her
gifts are so nice
arjun has only 10 min
hope he ll tell the truth at least now
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update love it pls clear the misunderstanding b/w ARIYA pls continue soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 16

riya was gng in the roomm, arjun was behind


her'suddenly riya shouted holding her belly'


arjun held her.


riya: aahhh arjun arjun mujhe bohot dard ho



raha hai' bhaaaiii, ayeshaaa..



arjun immediately took her in his arms and



placd her on the couch'


arjun: riya riya yahan lait jao.. ayesha riya ke



doc ko phone karo jaldi'




ayesha dialed the doc.. arjun snatched the



phone.. while he was caressing riya 's back'



arjun: helooo doc this is arjun riya usko bohot



dard ho raha mujhe mujhe samaj nahi aa raha



mein kya karon



(he spoke too fast that even doc couldn't



understand anything)




doc: arjun pehle calm down'mujhe dhere dhere



se batao kya hua.?




Arjun told doc everything and she advised



arjun to bring riya to the hospital'arjun




immediately picked up riya and led towards the



door..




Arjun: hospital bulaya hai..(to all)




Rathore was driving.. arjun was with riya.. her




pains increased, her whole body was sweaty'





Arjun: riya bas 5 minute aur rathore jaldi'.



Riya was crying in pain'holding her bellly'.



Arjun: baby mumma ko itna tanng kyon karte



hoo.. mein apse kaha tha ki mumma ko tanng



mat karna..




They reach the hospitall.. riya still in arjun's



arms'put her on the stretcher.. Doc:



examining riya's pulse and heartbeat.. nurse



glucose jaldi' inhe andar le jana hoga,,,aap sab



yahin rukiye.. Bt arjun was nt leaving her hand'




so doc decided that let arjun be' They took




riya inside..examining starts.. riya crying in



pain..



Doc: dekho arjun ab tumhe bahar jana hoga



dnt worry we vl take care of your riya'




Arjun came out'feeling the pain riya was



suffering..



I mean just trying no could even understand



that pain'



others worried abt riya shooting glares at




arjun'blaming him for riya's condition..aftr



smetime doc cmes.. all worriedly go to her..




Will ariya lose their baby? Will this affect



ariya's relation? will riya's fear about arjun



leaving her come true?


scroll down for more

Edited by pinkerbell - 12 years ago

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