T2-ariya ss-tu meri jaan hai. part18 - Page 27

Awesome update...
Choree,Ayesha and Ariya went for movie and dinner...
That was sweet...
After dinner,all of them had ice cream,but,Arjun again scolded Riya in front of ChoRee and Ayesha...
I m worried for Riya...
I hope everything becomes alright...
Hope,Raesha and Choree will do something to help Riya...

What?????
3 din tak no updates...
Nahi... *dramatic scream*
aisa zulam maat karo hum par...

that was such a lovely update :) loved it

How come i didnt come across this beautiful story of urs???

Sorry for not commenting on the previous updates...

Pinku,u really write very well.Through ur words,u try to bring out the emotions really well..
It seems like,as if I am reading a real story.It feels like as if everything is happening infront of me.
Good job,Pinku...

Well...
What to say...
The updates were just fab.
Riya ne jo bhi kia,was out of her duty and love.
Good that she told abt her state to Rathod bhai and Ayesha.
Aww...
Rathod bhai considers Riya as his own little sister...
Yay...
Arjun accepted Riya and his baby...
Arjun really cares for Riya.
Arjun aur Riya apne apne jagah pe sahi hai.
Arjun thinks that it is best for him to stay away from Riya in physical means.
But,jaise Arjun Riya ko har kaam se dur rakh raha hai,i know,it is the feeling and care of a to be father,that makes him behave like this.
He should behave with Riya in such a way that will make her believe that,Arjun really cares for Riya and his baby and doesnt want to get herself stressed up.
He should make her feel like she is being taken care of,balki,he should not scold her in this state,and,also infront of others.

I know,main thora zyada bolrahi hu and ur story doesnt demand any of my words,but,still,i wrote what I felt.

Take care and update soon.

Read both parts.
Awesome update dear.
Arjun scolds riya.
And now he try to manofying her.
Ariya, choree and ayesha went to see film.
Aww arjun is care for riya.
He again scolds her.
Continue soon.
Eagerly waiting for next part.
Aaj update karna.
And thanx for pm.

Arjun hvn multiple personality disoder ?one minute he vl b all lovely dovely 2wrds Ri nxt moment angry young msn is bck... uff bt loved their nite out... updste soon

Fantastic update dr.

hey so sorry for the late comment

sorry for the late comments

eagerly waiting for the nxt part.

loved the updates... awesme parts... waitng for next update