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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Omg this is sooo sad omg they gna separate oh no no no I feel like crying omg 😭

Pooor arshi n asr see wat u did when u gt angry oho

Now will kushi accept to marry the guy rohan will choose omgnplz say no plz plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Finally you're back...
And what an update..
It gave me goosebumps all over with the intensity of the situation and everything that followed.
I wish Arnav had started telling Rohan first that he loves Khushi than his belief in marriage.
It could have brought some relief but then when was Arnav Singh Raizada a man of much words!!

He said all that to Rohan about Khushi, her past, her being orphan - Unbelievable. Wish that man has working brains in his bit of rage too. For all that love- for the so new realization of his love for her it came down to this. It was so heart breaking and heart wrenching.
Rohan is right in his own place, he gave Arnav time too but that stupid tongue of Arnav without a connection.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Hi Farah,

I am a new reader of SAY and this is such a brilliantly written story with so much attention to details be it characters, the relationships, emotions, the backdrops and the wardrobes. You are an AMAZING writer.šŸ‘

I will be honest with you, I loved Arnav Khushi equally but somewhere I was always little biased towards Arnav and always things from his point of view. But I am read and will read SAY for KHUSHI and KHUSHI only. She is such an enigma and it's hard not to fall for her – She is so clear about her emotions and lives all of them no matter what. I think she is very brave and bold especially when it comes to Arnav, she has gone above and beyond her family, her values and her beliefs to prove her love yet never stepped back when she had to put Arnav in his place and show him the mirror. She tells him when he hurts her, and yells at him when she is angry with him. Like Rohan said "She lived to the fullest" no matter what.

I like how very well you blending the epic scenes and dialogues from the show into your story. It's refreshing to re-live those moments.šŸ‘šŸ¼

About the Chapter:

That was one dhamaka update. I was really curious and eager to read this update and was waiting with bated breath and you did more than justice to each and every character. The best part of this chapter was everybody were right in their own way – Rohan was right with his anger for Arnav and his protectiveness for Khushi. Arnav was right in his place to shield Khushi, take the blame, being honest, his fury for Rohan for asking him to stay away from Khushi. Khushi was right to right accept her love for Arnav and reacting the way she reacted and the hurtful things she said to Arnav. Anjali was right to ignore her brother and run to her bleeding husband. You did a brilliant job of balancing everybody's emotions.šŸ‘

Towards end of the chapter I couldn't figure out who was more hurt, Arnav or Khushi? They both twisted knifes in each other's heart by saying painful things they really don't mean.

Somehow in the end my heart went out for Arnav because his only best friend fought with him, his sister for whom he lived went to her husband and Khushi his love, his life said she regrets having met him and loved him. So for now he is standing alone.

I have seen every time Arnav Khushi fight they come together stronger so I am hoping this will all turn out to be good.

The pre-cap looks promising!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Hey Farah
welcome back. your pm this am just made by day. So happy to read SAY on a new thread as well and what a come back!!
Great great update, the confrontation between Rohan and Arnav - Rohan almost wishing that Arnav was not so intrinsically honest but knowing that Arnav is anything but that. Rohan's understanding that for Khushi in any situation it is all or nothing with no half measures. The keeping in character of Arnav who is only living his relationship with Khushi in the present and has not extrapolated to a future - who is still the young man consumed by anger and moulded by the events of his past and whose walls of self-preservation have been cracked by khushi but are yet still unbroken. Arnav who in anger always says the wrong things. Khushi bleakly acknowledging that her current relationship can only bring heartbreak to her and her family - knows the importance of family and this can only lead to a separation from her Arnavji. Arnav who is still letting his past dictate his future cursing the house for what is going wrong now. I love the precap with khushi telling arnav about these walls erected around his heart.
Yes Arnav has proclaimed loud and clear that he has no faith in marriage etc but does he not have faith in his love? Is this the much needed jolt he requires to re-assess his outlook on life knowing that from now on khushi is likely to be married to someone else. And khushi - will she not fight for what is rightfully hers - her arnav ji - will she not try to get him back somehow???
All I can think now - Love - Separation - ReunionšŸ˜‰ Can't wait to read the rest of the story and for more updates from you soon.
Edited by Amanram - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Shit shit shit!!! Arnav landed in deep shit!!! gosh!!!
Y cant he contorl himself wen hez angry...y did he hav to talk all dat non sense???
it was heart breaking to see khushi's grief...that one person whom she expected who wudnt mind her past...broke her trust!!!!
nd d precap was OMG nkw wat wil arnie boy do???
that is a super twist farah...i thot khushi wud hav to decide between him n her family..n she cant choose him cos shez frever indebted to them!!
But THIS was unexpected...Arnav is in a mess...khushi isnt supporting him!!! donno who wil be the saviour this tym!!!!

Farah...welcum bak!!! we love you!!!! nd it was amazing update!!!!
are u gonna be egular frm nw on...i mean...will u update once in two days now???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
FAA RAH ...THE AWARD FOR ''NAYI SOCH '' GOES TO YOU

BHAI HO TO ROHAN JAISA HATTA KATTA

PHATAA POSTER NIKLA ROHAN WAH WAH

DE DHANA DHAN HO GAI

KHUSHI IS TORN BRUISED BROKEN N TORMENTED

SHE IS HURT BY THE ONE SHE LOVED THE MOST

THE THREAD THAT KEPT THEM TOGETHER JUST SPLIT INTO

INNUMERABLE PIECES ...IT MAY TAKE A LIFE TIME TO

KNOT IT TOGETHER

THANKS FOR THE PM


ALERT ME N IF POSSIBLE JALDI 😃



KKKA
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Beautiful update.Everyone's emotion has been explained wonderfully.Really missed your update.Welcome back.Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Superb Update!!! Worth a wait!!!
Thanks Farah...!!!!!!!!!
But please...please dont let ArHi separate...!!
Please
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
First things first..! Welcome back! And i experinced the bliss, i used to feeel on seeing ur pm, today morning..!
So thnx for that:)

and now the update..:
The word 'Mortification' itself had sent message to the wind., tht a storm is about to come..!

The silence before the storm was in all ways, Beautiful!

Arnav's silent consolation to khushi, that he's dere, he won't let anythng happen to her, his display of protectiveness n security was mesmerizing! Shielding her from any damn thng dat cud hurt khushi!

For khushi, to feel a change in her brother, seeing her wid a man.. Was expected! For her to feel shame n guilt being caught dat wasy was natural!

And soo natural was Rohan's rage, anger and his distress, protectivess for his baby sister!

Arnav taking blame on himself was cute, and khushi telling that she loves him, in front of her brother, was brave n full of Love!

All the hits, fights, punches, just were the balant displays of anger, of both the parties at being subjected to such situations!

I loved Rohan's lines, about how he didn't messed up anjali, till he had evry intention of honouring her..!

And arnav's pain on the thought of being away from khushi was touching..!

But why can't he thnk before he lets all out! He just hurt Khushi, at a place where it hurts the most!:|

its natural for rohan to ask for commitment , then love , cuz reality is anythng but love! And wid the taunts khushi's been through, he wudn't want his bacchi to face more..!


And precap..: :|
nothng's gonna be EASY now..!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Awesome!:))
Finally you are baaack!:))
Welcome back dear! :)

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