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ohhh yet again another splendid chappy...!
Rohan is simply a sweetheart...he can do anythng for her baby sister...he brought het jalebis to cheer her up...
Nd their convo-awww its sooo sweet...i love it how khushi was trying to give arnav a detailed view of arnav not being bad nd making rohan undrstnd dat she loves him wit all her heart...
Anjali's lette to khushi is simply heart touching...i really adore dis woman...she can do anythng for her chotte's happiness...eavh nd evry words of the letter is simply beautiful nd she knws dat khushi is d one who can forgive arnav aftr evrythng he has done...
Nd the phn call part toh all d awsum...khushi's first reaction aftr getting d call nd aftr gearing his voice her inner turmoils about her leaving him alon here has been penned down beautifully...i love it how u blend IPKKND's dialouges again here...ahhh lovely 👍🏼
nd she cut the call much to arnav's annoyance...nd here ASR is ready to cum back in his chopper nly bcoz she has cut his call...lol 😆
anjali's xpression aftr knwing d reason of his sudden plan to get back delhi was truly worth coz i was also laughing aftr knwing d reason n d way she said dat arnav is going back to delhi to punish khushi for cutting d great ASR's call is simply awsum...
Lved the chappy farah 👏
its truly beatifully written as alwaz...
I cant wait to read d nxt chappy now...

Beautiful part

I liked how you've shown Rohan-khushi and Arnav-Anjali.
It was very well-written Farah :)

Another intense chapter, it pains to see two people who irrevocably love each other yet one is not ready to marry thinking he might hurt her and the other trying to distance herself from him so that she doesn't become a dark hole in his shining life & he doesn't hurt himself in the process of keeping her unhurt. Love is crazy and makes people do crazy things and this two are no different. They are ready to bear the pain & do everything so that the other one stays happy. I guess its high time for them to stop it & come to clear terms that they are meant to be with each other, which I am sure they know but ignoring. I was really surprised at rohan, after everything that happened he still has that trust on his friend & I was so pleased when he admitted that no matter what arnav could never lie and I am glad that he gave a chance to khushi to explain things, her side of story and each & every words that she spoke were time & again spoke about the depth of her love for arnav. Anjali is the best sister anybody could have and am sure arnav knows it, its really sweet of her to stay back with him when in reality she should have gone with her husband.

Detailing is so important for a story and focus on the right detail makes a story not only interesting but also make the characters endearing, lovable, caring, naughty, scary, evil etc etc. You have this skill Farah. You have taken a simple story, with the charcatres we love, threw in some of our fvourite dialogues from the show, used your wrting skills to focus on details that charm the readers. This is the beauty of SAY for me ... never found a single chapter boring.

I enjoyed the way you began this update ...

Loved how Khushi was worried to see Rohan without Anajali ...otherwise that would make Khushi selfish

Loved the way Rohan bought jalebis for Khushi - showing his anger stemmed his concern for her,

Loved how Rohan allowed Anjali her space - he is undertsnading despite his anger and he knows that Arnav needs Anjali and vice versa

and loved how he did not use Arnav's vehicles.

Most importantly the conversation between Khushi and Rohan - that was simply beautiful. No dramatics but the point was very poingnantly put across - how could Khushi get involved with Arnav knowing Arnav is the way he is? Ahh Rohan! If only the matters of the heart were that simple 😛

Another beautiful moment of the update was Anajali's letter - that Khushi can see Arnav beyond his facade and asking her to not give up. There is a calmness that does not leave the story in the limbo yet there's enough drama to keep the excitement - loved how Khushi screamed and was 🤣 for Arnav's reaction.

However, I hope you are not going to take offense if I say that I found Samiya's presence a little unnecessary in this update. Khushi may know Samiya but not for long and not that well. Despite her knowledge about the relationship between Arnav and Khushi, greiving alone seemed more practical and plausible. This is just a feedback and not meant to offend.

Farah I promise u an extra long comment next time, not able to write much coz am on thru phn and my mob net sucks !!!

It's always good to read the old dialogues in a new form.. Awesome brother.. I wished had a elder understanding bro like rohan

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