||~Something About You~||#11 *COMPLETED*

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sammymas

@sammymas

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

A thunder storm update after a break... it had to happen,knew tht his anger will break her heart, but this was worse.

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Welcome back and thank you for the update. The comment below is my reaction to the story as its unfolding and character actions/reactions and in no way meant to take away from what a great read this story is.

I am disturbed by the confrontation that I was so looking forward to and a little disappointed in Rohan, Arnav and Khushi because I felt that all their responses were stereotypical.

I had so wanted Rohan to not be typical angry brother wanting a gunshot wedding, had so wanted Khushi to not leave Arnav's side and actually stand up for this love that she supposedly felt and protect the relationship that she set out to have and above all, I did not expect Arnav to almost be cowed by Rohan into guilt. anyway, they all did act in character.

Arnav's outburst was weird. i would have expected him to say that Khushi is his, they will see eachother and no one can stop him etc but the fact that he denounced her family just does not ring in character since he knows how much they all love each other...he had seenit all his life...so why would he even think her an orphan or call her one...

So next is a Khushi and Arnav breakup because of All her relationships, this is the most fragile, newest and weakest and will never stand up in comparison to her devotion to her family...so this was an ill fated relationship from start to finish.

The precap also seems to point to a righteous Khushi denouncing their love...if I recalled correctly, no one, including Arnav forced her...

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago

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pujajk

@pujajk

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Oh no...that was heart wrenching. I just wish Rohan had taken a more understanding stance and for once, Arnav hadn't let his temper get the best of him. :/

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abayance

@abayance

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

i love ur writing style. very good chapter! waiting for new update! :D

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Had been eagerly waiting for this update!
Totally worth the wait!intense chapter!
Can't wait for more!

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Hope we have an update today:) waiting

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Welcome back! N woah... What an update! Y, y, oh y!!!

Sigh... I guess all this was necessary !!! But y misunderstandings bet Arhi ?!?!?! I guess to make him realize that he can't live without her n will propose ?!?!?

But I tought Rohan was the elder one n more mature n knew Arnav , he cd hv been a bit more patient and allowed Arnav to complete his explanation , then he wd hv realised tat Arnav is undergoing a change of heart !!

What a mess ... I hope they sort it out... Precap looks scary... I hate sad updates but I guess they r necessary for happier ones ahead!!!

Well done fari!!

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Wow Farah that was simply brilliant !!!! One of the very intense updates I have ever read !!!! As a brother Rohan had every right to be angry & mad at Arnav !!!!! He is Arnav's best friend and knows him every inch and his stance on marriage !!!! So he has every right yo be pissed off at him for going after his sister !!!!

Arnav has to control his tongue when he is angry !!!! His words pierced Khushi like anything and he had no right to utter those words !!!! He has hurt Khushi immensely with those words ... Attacking her brother was one thing but bringing out her past was something else totally ... Knowing how sensitive she is in regards to her past and how sheltered she was brought up ... Arnav simply had no right ... The precap was heart breaking seeing khushi's pain ...

PS : Welcome back ...

Edited by anumadduri - 12 years ago

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#219

updated my comment on page 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/84066275

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#220

I don't think after this much delay I have the right to ask anyone of anything, so...
Firstly I want to scold u so much for above... yes u didnt updated for long but you informed didnt you?... anyways the update was AWESOME AS USUAL... so perfectly described emotions from Khushi's side... Arnav's care for Khushi to keep he safe from everything was lovely... he cared for her and wanted to save her from her brother's wrath which was never meant for her... Rohan what to say about him... he is such an awesome brother... all his anger for Arnav was because of her... he knew about Arnav and his hate for relationships and how badly Khushi needs a strong relation as her past keeps haunting her even when she is so innocent and havent done any conspiration activities but he knew that if this affair came infront of all again fingers will be pointed towards her... his bachchi will be shattered completely... he is right in expecting Arnav to show respect to his sister as he did to his... Arnav himself saw the difference between Khushi and Anjali... Anjali having appllied the vermillion in her parting dignifying her and giving an honor for her but nothing like that with Khushi... And to save her from any harm he took all the blame and Khushi being Khushi couldnt remain quiet from accepting that it was a mutual deed... I loved how Arnav wanted Rohan to ask him does he love his sister but Rohan being the big brother asked the only thing which was necessary for him... will he give name to this relation... will he marry her and honor her to be his wife... and of course Arnav just like Khushi cant lie so he told him... Rohan's message to Arnav to be away from Khushi was again right but how on earth can Arnav stay away from her... anyways then the dishom dishom.. oh god Arnav and his inability to think rationaly in anger... the words he spoke were no doubt unforgivable... they have every right on her yes they r not Khushi's real siblings and parents but they are no where less than real may be real parents or siblings dont love her this much as much they do... Felt so bad for Khsuhi
"I knew one day you'd make me curse that day I ran back to you in the rain. One day you'd make me curse the moment I realizes I loved you. One day you'd make me curse the day I ever met you! & that day is today. Aaj humein afsos ho raha hain, ki hum aapse mile hi kyun? Aap humare zindagi mein aaye hi kyun? Humne aapse itna pyaar kiya hi kyun?"
this part shattered my heart so much for Khushi's pain... for precap wont comment on it will comment on real update... thanx for updating loved it... as usual... perfect show of emotions and feelings👏