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Posted: 12 years ago
i have nothing to say i am so sad 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭y couldn't arnav just say yes to marriage !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Welcome back...Farah...


What an update...damaka for sure...they are going to hurt so much...so sad, really what will happen now😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Farah,
It was beyond brilliant. And you exceeding all my expectations ! Which is saying a lot as I have such expectation from you...
The way you described the word mortified set the tone for this emotional roller coaster of an update.
I loved the use if the dialogues from the show but integrated into our story so well...the visual appeal of this chapter was brilliant, I felt it was all unravelling in front of my eyes...every gesture, move and expression...
Khushi fell in love with Arnav, accepting him and his beliefs without any plan to change him...she fell in love with him in totality...she knew what she was getting into...and to her their love was all she needed, like she said she just wanted to be loved by him...but today it seemed he broke her heart in more ways than one...his words ...to her brother, her family were pale in comparison to her love for him...she holds her family in the highest of regards, she does not consider herself an orphan, bit to hear Arnav say to the the family she so loyally guards and lives for shattered her...
I loved how he starts by taking all the blame as he realises what Khushi must be going through to have been found in Arnav's arms by her brother,and also loved her for sharing that responsibility with Arnav...

I loved how Rohan seeing the two is immediately transported back into time where Khushi was always a hinderance to Arnav...to now see them so intimate...that was so beautiful.

Arnav and his temper...the fight between Rohan and him was bound to be, Arnav with all his pride and ego could not come out and tell Rohan what he felt for Khushi an instead kept waiting for Rohan to ask him about his feeling for her, he wanted to tell Rohan that he loves her ...but not till he was asked and rohan knowing his friend and his very colourful past and his feelings about the institution of marriage was only interested in that very institution that he knew held no value for Arnav ...the clash had to happen...as a brother Rohan wants his sister who he feels has suffered enough by her background to be happy and respected ...and to eventually be bound by marriage...to someone who can provide her not only love and respect, but security and happiness too...

It was enough for him to have to witness his sister entangled with Arnav not just physically but for her to come out and claim she loved him...when as a friend he knew that Arnav could not and would not give him the respectability of marriage...

I wish Arnav would have just come out and say what he felt...it might have avoided all the unpleasantness, hurt, regret and betray...
Khsuhi is fiercely loyal to her family as Arnav is to his...and they had earlier even discussed this as an issue, their respective families would always come first and then each other to them...so her saying that he would not stand for any criticism of his family but had the audacity to speak to hers they way he did was heart wrenching!

Arnav's anger uncontrollable at the best of times sometimes even without much provocation but then to be deprived of any rights over Khushi...to be dictated to stay his...Red, made him see red...pretty literally too...given his punch causes Rohan to bleed!
And then to add to that talks of her marriage to someone else...Khushi was his ...and he loved her...but will that be enough for them...
I hate that Khushi is heartbroken by what she hears and sees...but then I know Arnav is hurting too...he is no longer a Casanova and is irrevocably in love with Khushi! But the big question is now what? Can he learn to live with Khushi's regrets about her feelings for him,? For her regret in ever getting involved with him knowing what he stood for...?
Will anyone ever understand that neither of them is complete without the other ? And so in one person's suffering they both feel the pain equally!? ,

The precap suggests they talk more and fight more, accusations and more heartbreak...I hope they are able to come out of this mess...

I apologise for the delay in commenting but did not want to do so in haste...




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Posted: 12 years ago


it truly hurts.. you just remarkably presented

every body's point of of view just impeccably.! i dread

how much more they are gonna hurt themselves..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update...I never expected a physical fight between Rohan and Arnav.. Rohan, as a brother is right in his place, who wants to give his sister a modern-day Casanova and that too when he is aware of all his past history, and she will be stigmatized for getting into relationship with a person like Arnav without marriage, but being a gentle man still he went ahead and asked Arnav about his thoughts and perceptions about marriage, since he is pursuing his sister.. But I felt he acted in haste and without listening to Arnav completely he asked him to stay away from Khushi...Thats too bad...Arnav on the other hand, should have tried to coolly answered him about his perception change since the time Khushi came into his life and his intention of getting married to her..instead of that he resorted to physical fight with Rohan when he asked him to not mess with Khushi and stay away from her and not try to put hurdles into her marriage proposals...I feel both of them are at fault now, they could have sat peacefully and tried to resolve this issue, but now it is messed up from all sides.. Also Arnav should not have spoken about Khushi being an orphan, Rohan and his parents doesn't have any say in making decisions pertaining to her life.. whatever it is.. she has been adopted by his parents, and she is definitely a part of their family, yeah Khushi is the sole person who can take the decision as it pertains to her life...Arnav shouldn't have blurted this out, and he didn't even think how much hurt Khushi will be hearing this. Loved the sentences Khushi uttered -"I knew one day you'd make me curse that day I ran back to you in the rain. One day you'd make me curse the moment I realizes I loved you. One day you'd make me curse the day I ever met you! & that day is today. Aaj humein afsos ho raha hain, ki hum aapse mile hi kyun? Aap humare zindagi mein aaye hi kyun? Humne aapse itna pyaar kiya hi kyun?"..Despite knowing all these things she entered into a relationship with him just because she loved him, which eventually hurt her..It is true that "The ones that you love the most are usually the ones that hurt you the most", we will be angry at the person for hurting and get angry at ourselves for giving into that weak moment.I hope Arnav regrets this and both Khushi and Arnav try to clear their issues and patch up. Also it is high time Arnav proposes to Khushi and inform Rohan about his marriage plans, which he would have probably done it, if Rohan hadn't acted in a hasty way...Precap seems to be little disturbing, will they separate... curiously waiting to see what happens next. You left us in cliff hanger. Please update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Welcome back Farah! Thanks for PM and the long update! Arnav has put his foot in his mouth!
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Posted: 12 years ago

What a mind-blowing update!!!👏


Farah you really came back with a bang!! Way to go!!

Well it was expected that we were getting a showdown between the two..I know where Rohan is coming from especially knowing Arnav as a Casanova, Arnav really has to prove to him that he is worth Khushi's love.. He of course doesn't believe in marriage so why would Rohan trust him..

What I wasn't expecting that Arnav saying those harsh words about Khushi to Rohan, bringing up her being an orphan and all!!

Khushi is deeply hurt and I just don't know how Arnav is going to undo what he has done!!!

Loved how you used the words from the shows and used them in your story in a different aspect..

The precap is also scary as Arnav is still saying things in anger and pushing Khushi further away!!
When will he ever learn to to control... Arnav, my boy!!!😕

Just loved it and you really left me speechless with this breathtaking update...😲

Thanks for the pm..

Eagerly waiting for the next update...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Ah lovely to read an update from you..

Hmmm... I know I should feel sorry for Khushi but I don't!

When you decide to play with fire, you shouldn't cry when you get burnt!

She decided to get involved with Arnav, knowing fully well how he felt about commitment, knowing fully well how this would shatter and upset her family and how badly they would take this, did she really expect to not get hurt by Arnav? The tragedy is that every woman nurses the hope that she will be the one to tame the handsome bad boy, and Khushi is no different..

And the less said about Arnav the better! He really couldn't love Khushi if he could say those things about her, even to make a point. Love wants to make you cherish and protect someone at whatever cost to yourself. The only thing that Arnav could think of, once again, was himself - how HE would deal with Khushi's loss, how HE could not let her get away and how HE would not allow her to get married elsewhere.

No man in love would say the things he said about Khushi, even if said in anger! Even in the precap he doesn't seem to realise where he is wrong. He is far worse than the other people who gossip about Khushi. He claimed to love her and yet hit where it hurt her the most!

He doesn't deserve Khushi!

Wonderfully written update, pushed the right buttons and I will be really upset if Khushi goes back to him! :-))
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was superb update but very sad though
And then judging by the precap next update is also quite emotional and sad
Pls continue soon
Thanx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Welcome back and what a triumphant entry after the prolonged absence. mind blowing update,
I realized how much I missed SAY all these weeks after reading today's update.
Coming to the update, Arnav has really screwed up big time this time. What was with the verbal diarrhea:-(. He will need all his acumen and famed brain power to fix the mess that he has created. Also, he ended up hurting the three people he is closest to in the whole world - Khushi, his Di, and Rohan. I liked how the realization of the difference between his Di's and Khushi's situation hit him regarding how he has not given Khushi a single public acknowledgement of his love and commitment.
Precap is equally sad. I think Khushi has finally realized what she got herself into. Please don't let her give up on him though. Arnav is damaged, much more than Khushi is.
Cant wait for the next installment of SAY. What say don't we deserve an update soon this time:-)
Edited by rajvta - 12 years ago

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