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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Nice and different concept
Do continue

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padmaja19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

i always wanted a story in which a guy is stalking taani and he wants her by hook or crook and rey being the hero and protecting his lady love ... so i'm very excited and looking forward to ur story dear and do continue soon :)))))))))))))))

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Maya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

WOW! Love the concept! Please do continue! I really like it!

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raveena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

chapter 1

scene starts from a guy in black jeans and blue shirt enters a place...his back is facing the camera...

guy enters his house and opens the door with keys and heads directly to a room...he opens the door and moves inside...and then switches on the light...the room is full with taani's pictures...

he moves forward and touches taani's pictures...

guy: i found u JAAN...finally i found u...kaha chali gayi thi tum.

large pic on floor (made with some glass kind of material)

there was taani's large picture on floor of his room...he sleeps oh tht picture...his front facing the image...and he puts his hand on taani face and starts caresing it...then continues.

guy: jaan kyu tum mujhe chod kar chali gayi thi...u knw maine tumhe kitna dhoondne ki kosish ki...tumne kyu kiya mere saath aisa (n starts crying)

nahi baby nahi tum plz sad mat hona...i knw meri galti thi thi...meri hi galti thi sab (sits beside the picture and starts slaping himself)...jaan dnt cry baby...tumne kuch nahi kiya meri hi galti thi na ..maine hi kabhi tumhe nahi bataya ki how much i love u...par tumne bhi kabhi nahi dekha meri eyes me apne liye love (n again gets angry) ...aur tum us ladke ke saath kya kar rahi thi...kaun h vo...(again calms dwn)..arre tumhari to koi galti hi nahi h...tum ho hi itni bholi..tumhe kya pata is evil wrld mein kaise kaise log rehte h...but main hu yaha jaan...ab tumhara AYAAN yahi h...tumhare paas..tumhe sabse protect karne ke liye...main ab tumhe kahi nahi jaane dunga...u r mine forever...tumhe mujhse koi nahi cheen sakta...koi bhi nahi.

then he kisses taani's picture and again sleeps...

here taani is sitting in her room and thinking abt rey...and our naughty rey enters from window and see our ...oops..his princess sitting on bed and blushing...

rey comes in room and sits beside taani and starts staring her ...then taani feels someones gaze on her and she looks at her side and found a smiling rey lying beside her on bed...she got a mini heart attack on seeing him like this...she gets up frm bed.

taani: rey aap yaha...aap yaha kya kar rahe ho?? aap andar kaise aaye?? bhai ne dekh liya to??? rey aap...

it was enough for rey...he gets up and puts his finger on her soft lips...taani stops and starts luking at him.

rey: princess..shant ho jao...hmm..so main yaha tumse milne aaya hu and main window se jump karke aaya hu aurrr aurr haan...tumhara bhai..vo to abhi bhi ghar nahi aaya h...aur na hi aayega aaj raat.

taani looks at him confusingly...rey realises what he said.

taani: rey bhai ghar nai aaye h ye aapko kaise pata n wat do u mean vo nahi aayenge...aapko kya pata vo aayenge ya nahi...(rey moves his face to other side)...rey aap mujhse kuch chupa rahe ho na...plz rey sach sach batao bhai kyu nahi aayenge.

rey: arre princess aisa kuch nahi h...vo ..vo..swayam aaj bahut khush haina isliye...huhhh arre haan ...arre vo to mere ghar pe hai..so raha h vaha aaram se to yaha kaise aayega...haan..isliye mujhe pata h ki vo nahi aayega ( and closes his eyes and thnks BACH AGYE )

taani: oh bhai aapke ghar pe h...(gets hyper)..wat..bhai aapke ghar pe h and aap yaha...unhe pata chal gaya to...rey plz aap jao yaha se...bhai ko nahi pata chalna chahiye...

rey: arre princess usse pata nahi chaelga...u just relax.

taani: nahi rey aap jao yaha se...plz rey...plz na aur vaise bhi main bahut thak gayi hu...plz mujhe sona h na...aur kal to AVP band bajane wali h so kal late nahi ho sakti...aap bhi jao aur so jao.

rey: okay princess as u say...only this tym i m leaving...nxt tym itni aasani se nahi jaane wala.

taani: nxt tym??

rey: haan nxt tym...(.and starts moving towards window.)

taani: rey...kaha ja rahe ho.

rey(comes back)..oh tum nahi chahti main jau...okay sweet heart...as u say..main yahi ruk jata hu...(and lys on bed)

taani: (holds his hand and make him stand up)...nahi ..main ye keh rahi hu ki aapko window se jaane ke jaroorat nahi h...aap door se chale jao..vaise bhi bhai yaha nahi h.

rey :hmmm smart.

then they both moves out and rey leaves ...taani comes nd sleeps on bed and then her mobile rings...

taani sees the contact and its a private number...she takes the call but no one answers...thn she cuts the call and sleeps. not paying any attention to tht call.

here ayaan thinks - aaj bhi bilkul nahi badli tum jaan...vahi awaaz...awaaz mein vahi kasish. jiske liye main pagal hu...

then he makes a call -

ayaan- kya hua...kuch pata chala kya.

guy on other side- yes sir..saari details maine aapko mail kar di h.

ayaan- gud and make sure kal tak mera kaam ho jaaye...i cant wait anymore.

then he cuts the call and smiles putting his hand on taani's pic...

ayaan- jaan dnt wry...jald hi main tumhare paas hounga...tumhare saath...tumhare hi college mein.

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precap- taani gets a gift frm some unknown person

evryone thinks taani hav a secret admirer

rey jealous

so guys i m dne with first chap...i knw it was quite boring...but plz cmmnt and tell me ur views...and ya need ur help guys...suggest me some charcter(person) who will suit to ayaan's character's role ...i m not getting any gud idea...arre ayaan ka character sketch to le lo varna kaise pata chalega ki kaisa banda h vo.

AYAAN kapoor (ayyu )- he is vry hot and smart...hav gud looks and any girl can fall for him...he is really rich and have split personaities...good,caring and sweet in frnt of wrld...he hav some mental problem thats why behaves like this...frm school days he loves taani but never confess his love to her coz he thinks she will reject him...calls taani "JAAN"...frm school tymes he sends gifts to taani but taani never pays attention on tht...later in first year of college he confesses his love in frnt of whole collge...(in jodhpr) but he didnt tell his name to anyone...he announced his feelings through mic...and whn evryone tries searching for him he dissapered...frm tht tym taani feels it odd and she starts taking stress tht who have tht big crush on her tht he confesses in frnt of collge...she tried a lot to find him but at end she gave up...then she came mumbai and ayaan feels alone...he tries to find her but all in vain...now in goa he saw her with rey and gang and again will try to come in her lyf...he is vry short tempered and aggresive.

plz suggest some gud character guys and dnt frgt to cmmnt ur views abt my story and this chapter.

Edited by raveena1 - 12 years ago

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Maya

@mymy_taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

RES

UNRES

YAY FIRST COMMENT 😃😃😃

This was so good. Loved the cute TaaRey scenes.

This Ayaan is already creepy. Love the story.

Do update soon and PM me.

😊

Edited by mymy_taarey - 12 years ago

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Fatima Faiq

@-Fam_TaaReY-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

superb 👏👏 👏👏

and you should take angad hasija as ayaan 😊

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kriti094

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Concept is interesting
continue n plz update soon

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Lavi

@cutedollll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Hey raveena its not boring dear infact its fab deaq..intresting n different concept , the character ayaan its look diff.from others...so update soon ..i cant wait for this...:-)