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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Wow Naina you're back with a bang!!

Loved the update to bits. It was such a soul searching update, they truly have to discover things about themselves in this journey called life...

Arnav was like the towering inferno... His extreme jealousy a testament to his deep feelings for Khushi... They say, the deeper you love the harder you hurt, & that is exactly what happened there... His rage was completely uncalled for yet he seemed to have no control over his feelings...

No amount of working out or cold or hot showers were able to douse the flames his heart was burning up in.. Only some calm assurance from his wife was the solution to his heart burn... Yet having calmed down, he realized the ignominy of his actions... There he was the one with a physical past yet he was the one breathing fire on his innocent wife...

Glad he realized his error & apologized.. Loved the fact that he recognized the strain this situation had brought upon themselves & a need to rejuvenate their relationship away from all distractions & tensions...

But little did he realize Anjali would be throwing a bomb the very next minute...

I still haven't figure out why the two eloped & got married, why the rush?? It's not as if anybody would have stopped them, justifiably Arnav is mad again...

Hoping you will update soon...

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564436

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

omd the way you described arnavs workout dhak dhak

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Maz786

@Maz786

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

First of all, Thank You sooo much for continuing this for us. Now back to the chapter. Again you have managed to draw out all the emotions and put in on paper. I lived through every second of the scene as described by you. Glad that their past relations has been discussed and out of the way. Very excited to the see upcoming chapters to see how you portray a POSSESSIVE BROTHER!!!!

As Always,

Love you Naina

Never give up on us.xx

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Divya

@dvmishra

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

loved the way the story s moving... Want to see arnav's reaction to anjali's wedding... Update soon.

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

I am not sure, how to react, but I did not like him being jealous and talk to her like that, but I guess that's love. Why are you worried buddy, she is yours now.

Even though it was physical for Arnav, why the double standards, he can have but not her...

I guess that's love, possessiveness is part of the package 😆

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S003

@S003

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

NAINA (I NEED TO KNOW YOUR LAST NAME OR THIS STATEMENT HAS NO EFFECT)!!!

HOW DARE YOU!!!!

First like a drama queen, ( I know one when I see one, because my friend I am ONE) you say you want to end masterclass... you had me trying reverse psychology and saying oh you know best, when really I wanted to say a resounding NOOO

or rather for the sake of drama

NAHHHIII

(see I told you I was a drama queen)

THEN you come back with a chapter like this which can I just tell you I read at work!!!! I DON"T HAVE A SHOWER AT WORK!

Ok for heavens sake... peppering a chapter with the beauty that is Barun Sobti that is just mean man!!! As if it wasn't hot when I visualized him you actually pulled pictures to show me the look and expression... what can I say but GAWD DAMN!!!

Ok I'm calm now, breathing has stabilized. Needless to say I loved this chapter, it was one of your best. I find when people write about emotions or things going on in the heads of characters it is sometimes well like a over easy egg... a little runny ( I'm going to stop with the food metaphors I swear). But you my friend had me cued in like I was reading the last page of a mystery novel and a plot was opening up in front of me. Well done my friend. Well done.

Can I just say I loved the return of ASR!!! Loved it, and I loved how the small dejected Khushi brought him right back to his new reality!

So from jealous ASR to angry ASR poor Khushi!!!

As usual my painful friend I'm begging for more!!!!

I can't wait for the Payal Akash chapter, lets just say I have become a big fan of the junior ASR!!!

Thanks for continuing to write bud I know it takes commitment but this is a really amazing series.

Until the next time you piss me off

Note to self: DO NOT READ MASTERCLASS AT WORK!

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

And you are back and how my dear...awesome i tell you.

Infact after the visual treat that you gave us of our hottie and unleashed the possesive singh Raizada i am left here panting for breath and reaching out for a glass of cold cold water..

And also took some time to get my wits together to write my comment.

I loved the way you are tackling the newly married arnav and khushi.

This is so real and tells us of your amazing writing skill that we are at chap 78 and i am still hooked as ever in this story..

And finally Di is here married and all...

Cant wait to read the next update...

Slightly pressed for time hence the short comment will do a better job next time...pakkawala promise.

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crazygurl

@crazygurl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

og i was totally floored by this chappy...waas tooo good...aWESomeee...

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Anukriti

@psychofool

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

someone turned green with J

A jealous possessive Arnav...muahhh...

The best part of your story is communication b/w the couple...usually relationships succumb under misunderstandings due to lack of communication which is very important.

and the bomb has been dropped...aman and anjali return as a married couple but why is arnav turning angry...i mean aman is a nice guy or is there a twist in his life.

missed my aakash in this update

great update

cheers
anukriti

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#420

Loved the visuals of Arnav in a rage, working out, pouring water on himself and showering. What a great present onnIPK second birthday!!!!

Arnav and Khushi talk was really beautiful. They accepted and explored the depth of their feelings and analyzed how their feelings for eachother compared to what they felt or did not feel before. Overall, Khushi impressed me with her ability to handle his past. She was a lot more forgiving and accepting of his live in situation which is more than can be said of him...he proceeded to anger and jealousy ...then retreated to thinking and talking...lol.

Now Anjali and Aman went and got married...

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago