ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD 9: LINK TO NEW THREAD ON PG 161 - Page 38

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Posted: 12 years ago
well ive always liked a jealous asr but not this one!
but given that he is arnav and this is very much practical im glad they are over with the ex's part!

W*F
why the hell did anjali and aman marry without telling anyone!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that was a beautiful update!
Amazing. I just love how Arnav is slowing witnessing just how amazing and magical love is. Its so good to read a FF in which they are both equals in the relationship.
I just loved how you described their love for one another it was AMAZING.
And great song choice for Arnav btw love Linkin Park.
And as for Aman all I can say is God help him against Arnav's wrath.

Thank you for the PM
Amazing chapter
God bless
Jenna
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update.
I can actuay imagine a jelous arnav however he had no reason to be.
I realy want them to go on their honeymoos but i think aman and anjali will go before them now.
Cant wait to read arnavs reaction. 2 blows on one day. Wonder what hes guna do.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey this chap was really cool...nd i really liked Arnav's J side just like a teen...b'fully portraiture of emotion of both ar-shi...khushi is really a dilwali...inspite of his questioning on angad--she took lav n others matter so casually..!! but i cudnt have if i were khushi.:P it really is a wonder..nd funny (nd i luv her fo dat) how every time khushi oppose arnav on the issues like---

A---sry...we had a MU...😒
K--no ...it wasnt a MU..!! 😵
A--🤔... okyy

A--sry...We had a Fyt..😒
K- No ..It was a Discussion...🤓
A- okyy...

finally luv birds planni HM...but hoping An-Man ki wedding postpone na karde plan ko...but i knw khushi will manage the bull agn...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi! 😊

I am glad you are continuing this story. 😃 Even though I don't comment on each chapter you should know that I absolutely enjoy reading this story. 👏😃

Wow! A lot happened in this chapter. As always I really enjoy reading your realistic approach to Arnav and Khushi's conversation. I am just glad to read that Arnav and Khushi are each others first love. 😆

What! Shouldn't Arnav be less angry that his sister got married to his best friend rather then a stranger. I do think Anjali has a terrible past that adds to Arnav's rage and the protective brother arises. Also, the fact that Anjali and Aman got married without anyone knowing. Ok! Angry Arnav is definitely expected. 😛

Please continue soon. ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ah so Arnav reacted as most men do - its incredible how being possesive comes instinctively to men. And like he rightly said, ultimate double standards! He has forgotten that he didn't come an emotional or physical virgin into this relationship.

And poor Khushi! But I love the way she chose to handle it and didn't loose her cool, though she was obviously upset.


Just a thought that arose from something you wrote - I don't know if that was inadvertent or deliberate. I am not sure whether it was the result of his anger or just that he hasn't got used to them being a married couple, When he came out from the shower and went looking for her, i noticed the use of "his home" and not "their home". An oversight or did you mean anything?

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was 'knowing d past" update...


dis episode made der bond more strong..

khushi- impreesive how she handled J arnav...angry arnaav..


nyc update..


wat wil b arshi's reaction to anjali's marrg...


update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hot n jealous Arnav...smoking hot!
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a perfect portrayal of a jealous and possessive Arnav! I love how your Arnav and Khushi confront their problems and solve them. I wonder why Anjali and Aman married secretly...Can't wait to see Arnav's reaction and Khushi's mentoring. Wonderful update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
sometimes where workouts dont work-out to get the frustration out of the system effective communication brings about the clarity of thought ... that was very nicely portrayed ...word power is far more than muscle power is once again proved beyond doubt 😳

nice update ... pls continue soon 😃

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