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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
nice update...
the gifts were perfect...
n letter ws really emotional...
plz plz plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
jus caught up wid d last two parts...
it was really awesome...
and the gifts from taani's side was so sweet =)
lookin forward to what shareyam got...
update soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Nice concept
add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Awsum update
Taani letter was lil emotional
Waiting to see wat taani had given sharey
Update soon n PM me


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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
it was emotional...plsss cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Hey, I just read all the chapters and they are amazing.
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

hey guys!! i know main kaafi tym baad update kar rai hoon ..n shyad chota update hai.. par guys m busy wid my studies coz its my 12th..so plz bare wid my late updates...n guys i wud also lyk to tell u dat as swayam is taani's bro n woh uske saath rehta hai so tani wont give him ny letter or gift..until there is a twist of tani leavin or sumthin...nw dnt strt thinkin dat tani wud leave...i said she might bt i didnt say dat she will.. so nw read the update on sharey..

n thnkyou all 4 ur comments till nw.. i hope i gt more comments n suggestions..n plz tell me if the ff is goin wrong or borin.. nw read guys!!


CHAPTER 5 (sharey letters)

At sharon's place.. she opens the gift and she recieves a tiara and tayam pic with sharon in a sweet frame which justifyies a diva's personality..

Sharon opens the letter to read..

Hey sharon!!

M srry 4 all the tym i called u bhabhi i kno aapki nahi pasand...nd thankyou aapne mujhe kaafi baar support kiya hai jabhi main akeli thi..i am srry ki maine aapse itni rudely baat ki..par uss waqt main sahi sochne ki halat mein nahi thi..i m srry ki aapne meri insecurity ke liye apna CS ka post chod diya .. aap bahot achi ho.. n humesha aisi hi rehna..jst a small thing..plz bhai ko aur samajhne ki koshish kariyega woh aapse bahot pyar karte hai..infact mujhse bhi zyada woh aapko pyar karte hai aur apko zyada understand karte hai..nyways i hope aap kabhi change nahi honge aur main rahun na rahun aapke saath bt aap aise rehna..aur haan aap rey ka bhi khayal rakhna..unse kabhi naraz mat hona..woh aapke bina nahi reh sakte bt mere bina rehna afford kar sakte hai..

Aapki dost

Tani

Sharon was sobbin and she realizd hw was taniz state of mind as a frend..as a sis..as a gs.. n most importantly as a gf..she thought dat she cnt let taani hurt herself more..n she also knew tani is takin steps 4 her individuality n career..she remembrs evry moment she spent wid tani..so she decides to mend all the mess created...

At rey's place..

rey in lost in tani's thoughts and sudenly remembers about the bag tani gav 2 him..he opened the bag..he found evry stuff dat was part of tani'z rey corner..

he thought 'tani luvs me so much kabse n usne meri har yaad jo uske saath aur uske bina thi apne paas sambhal ke rakhi hai..n hw cud i break her heart.. bt then she needs to bcm smthin in lyf..' he also got the gifts he gav to tani..he reminces those moments wid her.. there was a lettr also.. he opend it..

Hi rey!!

I luv u the most in this wrld..aapko pata hai main Mumbai sirf aapke liye aayi thi...nyways ab jab humara breakup ho gaya hai toh main aapko hate karna chahti hoon..par chahkr bhi nahi kar paa rahi hoon coz aap humesha ek acha frnd hone ko prove kar dete hai.. thnx ki aap ache frend hai..pr aap ache bf kyun nahi the..nyways maine aapko woh saari cheezen de di hai jo mujhe aapki yaad dilati hai.. isse mujhe move on karne mein asani hogi..main humesha se aapka pyar banna chahti thi aur jab bani tab main bahot khush thi par ab pata nahi kya hua humare beech ke hum itne door ho gaye..par ab aap apna khayal rakhna nd pata nahi main ab aapki frnd ban paungi ya nahi par itna pakka hai ki ab main aapki lyf ka koi aisa reason nahi banugi jo apko apke passion apke dance se dur rakhega.. main aapke aas paas rahun na rahun bt aap aage badiyega..nw gud bye forever mr.reyansh singhania..i hope ki humara chapter ab puri tarah se khatam ho gaya hai..n haan main aapko kabhi maaf nahi kar paungi kyunki aapne mera sil toda hai n mera self respect bhi..so aap apni lyf mein ab who sab kar sakte hai jo aap karna chahte hai n who bhi bina mere rukawat ke ab I hope aap zyada khush honge apni lyf mein mere bina..

gudbye forever..MR. Reyansh Singhania..

Aapki ex-gf n shayad ab kabhi aapki lyf mein kuch nahi hone waali..

Tani

Rey had all tears in his eyes.. n he was stunnd 4 a moment..but at the end the shouted 'i luv tani humesha..main tumhe apni lyf mein jald hi wapas launga..aur iss baar kabhi dur nahi karonga coz main tumhare bina nahi jee paunga..' he thought ' plz tani mujhe samajh jana jab tumhe sach pata chale.. i hope ki hum wapas ek ho jaye' ..he was broken ccompletey and lost in tani's thoughts..he missd all the luv..the mushy moments and all close moments..

Precap : tani coughing hard..

n nw guys keep on guessin as y is she coughin.. hehhe a bit suspense bt plz dnt kill me if u read a nt so expected reason behind this .. nw w8 4 the update coz its gona take a bit tym..as i might include a song seq or nt..dats still in doubt ..bt u guys dnt jst read plz comment n lyk too .. n tell me if u wnt nything else in the story..

Edited by ankita_95 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
me 1st...👏👏
awesome update...
the way wrote taanis feelings is really amazing...
precap taani coughing...
hope she doesnt suffer from any disease...
super update...
thank u 4 d pm...
plzzz update soon😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
i really loved the letter parts...its so emotional and overwhelming, and yet perfectly written..loved it...
and taani coughing? i really hope its not what i think it is...
lookin forward to the next part...
and koi jaldi nahi, i know 12 mein bahot pressure hota hai...
so all d best wid dat =)
update whenever possible =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
nice and emotional update.
do cotn. soon.

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