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HEY GUYS !! I'M A NEWBIE N M WRITING THIS SS/FF 4 THE 1ST TYM..SO NEED YOUR REVIEWS BOUT IT DAT WHETHER SHUD I CONTINUE OR NT..AND PLZ SUGGEST SUITABLE TITLES IF U WANT ME TO CONTINUE FURTHER n you can also suggest ny specific expectations about the story dat u want me to add further ..NW READ .. 😊

CHAPTER 1

NDC finals

after all spectacular power packed performances..the result tym.

Host - the winning team of NDC is the st.louis college..

d3 team shouting n hootin louians! louians!..then they go on stage nd recieve the trophy..tani standin in the wings and happy cheerin them..

host - so hw do u feel?

swayam - its awsm..v won the championship n dat to as louians..thanku guys 4 wrkin hard n listenin to my instructions..

Guys except rey.- yeh toh hamara farz tha..par iss jeet ke liye sirf hum nahi aur koi bhi responsible hai..n woh hai..

girls - tani..!!

Host - tani kaun hai??

Gang - humari gs n dost..evry1 callin tani on stage bt she is reluctant to cme..boys gt her on der shoulders cheering loudly..

Tani happy n says thnx guys bt yeh sab apka hardwrk hi hai..

Swayam - my lill sis..dnt b modest..khush raho..n thnx 4 supportin us..

Host - congrats st.louis college n nw u may leave n party hard.. !!

Gang bows n leaves shouting party party party !! Yay!!

In green room evry1 changed n got ready..

Tani - vp sir ka msg aya hai..he said congrats n kal college mein celebration hai..

Gang - thnx tani.. waise aaj hum apne style mein celebrate karenge.!

Swayam n sharon - yes.. so guys gt ready 2 hv fun..

Aftr sm tym.. tani to swayam - bhai aap log party kariye main nahi aungi.

swayam shouted-kyun nahi aogi tum??

Gang except rey- wat? tani par kyun..?

tani - guys main kafi dino se thaki hoon..soi nahi hoon.. n plus kal mera interview hai so uske liye prepare karna hai na..

Gang except rey - interview?kaunsa??

tani - woh ek do companies ne mujhe internship offr ki thi.. pata nahi kaise dey knew ki i topped in skul n college mein main gs hoon..

swayam - aakhir the shekhwat family ki iklauti beti ho..Gang laughs..n tani also..rey smiles lukin her happy..

Tani - ok guys u continue..

Swayam - bt u hv 2 cm..nd ab no discussions on it..

tani - makin puppy face..bt bhai..mera interview nd gs ka kaam..

sharon - ok guys enough..i hv a solution..if tani cnt cme 2 party den party will go to her..n gs ka kaam vill b divided n rey..swayam n main manage karenge.. so tani tum sirf interview ke liye prep karo..

simi - n i'll help u wid outfit n presentation prt of interview..rey happy to c all this..

boys - n baaki party arrangements baaki log kar lenge..so party ki tension bhi nahi hogi..

CHAPTER 2 - PARTY AND MORE TANI SCENES

tayam home..tani reading buks 4 her interview..n gang doin prep as per decided..

Swaron to tani - so tani wat is ur internship all bout.. ?? ?

Tani - yeah there r options n i hv applied 4 almost all the options..advantage hai ki as dey kno m gs n i hv college realted wrk.. so main collee main rehkar kaam karoongi n waha se ek employ mujhe college mein guide karega..so no probs 4 college n gs responsibilities..

Sharon - criteria kya hai..?

Tani - managin departments..designin..accountancy..councellin..n talent related stuff also..

Swayam - wow tani gr8 opprtunity..

Tani - haan bhai par main confusd hoon dekhti hoon kaunsa chose karoongi n kis mein selection hoga..

Rey - finally kuch toh dhanka karogi.(he is happy bt sad dat he cnt talk 2 her nicely or luv her)Wrk finishd party strts..

evry1 njoyin dancin..tani in her thoughts of tarey moments..swayam notices this n he knoz tani cn sing so he cmz in centre n makes an announcemnt dat sab dance ke alva apne talents dikheynge..1st nil n vicky..den amar..den simi n rini..atlast taniz turn cmz n she is reluctant 2 sing n says guys mujhme aisa koi talent nahi hai..

swayam - tani chalo i kno tum acha gati ho so sing a song 4 us..

tani givs a luk dat maine singin chod di hai n aapko pata hai kyun..

gang - wow tani tum ga sakti ho..plz gao na..

tani - nahi guys i dnt sing n i left it long bak coz of sm reasons..

swayam - i kno tani par ab waisa kuch nahi hoga plz gaona..n main promise karta hoon ke tumhe kuch nahi hoga.. woh nahi hai ab humari life mein..gao tani..

tani - bhai yeh akhri baar sirf apke n apne frnz ke liye.. ?tani sings hum rahe ya na rahe n d gang n swaron n tarey recall their scenes..

The party ends n evry1 back 2 der homes..

Precap questions : what will happen now after NDC finishes..?

What will tani's job opportunities lead to?


INDEX -

Chapter 1 and 2 - page 1

Chapter 3 - page 4

Chapter 4 - page 7

Chapter 5 - page 9

Chapter 6 - page 11

Chapter 7 - page 14

Chapter 8 - page 17

NOTE ON PG 19 (SEE PLZ)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ReS!
Unres!!
Yaayyy I am first to comment! :D
Wowww..!!! I so loved it dear..!!
The gang won NDC.. wooohhhooo!!!
n taani left singing.. why???
The internship pffers for taani... nycc! :) :) :D

Just a request...
Bring taarey back together n show sme romance if u can!!!
Its amazing... please pm me ab the updates!! !;)
keep smiling.. take care!
p.s: Welcome to IF!!!! :)
Edited by rockanyaa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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firstly welcome to forum 🤗 nic start do continue soon :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rockanyaa

ReS!
Unres!!
Yaayyy I am first to comment! :D
Wowww..!!! I so loved it dear..!!
The gang won NDC.. wooohhhooo!!!
n taani left singing.. why???
The internship pffers for taani... nycc! :) :) :D

Just a request...
Bring taarey back together n show sme romance if u can!!!
Its amazing... please pm me ab the updates!! !;)
keep smiling.. take care!
p.s: Welcome to IF!!!! :)


thnx dear.. n 'll surely take ur suggestions into considerations..n vill update soon n answer ur questions in l8r updates.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: patie

firstly welcome to forum 🤗 nic start do continue soon :-)


thankyou so much 4 ur comment n warm welcum..if i gt more replies den i'll post more updates..n will pm u bout the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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srry guys ..i didnt notice the question marks bfore postin it...will take care of it in nxt updates..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nyc starting... luvd both the parts... plz do continue this stry soon nd pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start
luvd it...plz update soon.. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: samiha_taarey

hey nyc starting... luvd both the parts... plz do continue this stry soon nd pm me

tnq sweety 4 lykin it.. will surely pm u bout the nxt update.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx :)) 😛

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