TaaRey FF : oNcE uPOn A TiMe- aFtEr brEAk Up [chapter 7 updated pg 31] - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Hey dear, That's an awesome Cover pic...
Loved it..
So, it is Him... I am super excited for the Update..
Plz. do update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful superb amazing loved it...!!!! Update soon...!!!!!
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CHAPTER 3


She looked in confusion at the handsome hunk standing at her door

Taani- aap….(before she could finish)

Guy- haan main….(smiling wide)

Taani- arre…mera matlab aap kaun…..(again he cuts her)

Guy- main kaun?

Again as taani was about to say something he suddenly brought his face

close to taani n she backed off her head with a jerk

Guy- main hun DON…!! (he said with a smirk) n went in leaving taani

shocked , surprised, n her lips had formed an 'O' shape


She snapped her mouth shut n closed the door , she was full on angry n

irritated ….means how can some stranger show her attitude that too in

her own house…..


She mumbled in anger- "na jaan na pehchaan main tera mehmaan " '

huh…!!!'


Angry she went behind him, while in the hall everyone was the same

…….busy in them ……no watch at their surroundings n offcourse not to

miss MR. "na jaan na pehchaan main tera mehmaan"


The guy reached there n saw the scene infront of him n shouted hey

guys!!


The shouting worked n the gang diverted their attention towards him but

the thing that had caught their attention was an angry women behind

him who was fuming in anger, came there stomping her foot……

the guy was confused with their reaction….


On the other side everyone was shocked to see this new avatar of taani,

they new she was hyper these days bt also new that she was hyper

becoz of them n on them ………..


Taani came n tapped his shoulder still fuming shouted " kaun ho tum" ??


Before the guy could say anything taani said : "DON… nahi….

(stressing the words loud) asli naam batao"(lol)


Confusion was evident on everyone's face n swayam knew what was

coming so he went to stop taani from getting hyper……he introduced

the guy as RITHVIK DHANJANI(RD)…….." he is VP sir's family

friends son n has come to st.louis for some work…."


Everyone greeted him n introduced themselves to him……then came

towards taani


Taani was about to say something but he interrupted n said : koi zarurat

nahi hai mai tumhe jaanta hun….taani right??(no one noticed what he

said)


Taani said (irritation n annoyance evident in her voice) : bhai main

khana laga rahi hun , she gave RD a look n went in…..



All ate the dinner



RD : so guys it was nyc to meet u all n specially u taani


Taani (faking smile annoyed said) : my pleasure "chuhe" she added …..


RD : ur most welcum "billi"


Everyone was laughing on their nok-jhok…….


Vicky : arre yaar rithvik ….hum sab aaj raat yahin hai so u stay na

mazza ayega….


RD resisted a bit but then when everyone requested he decided to

stay……



All were in their rooms



------------------Boys room-------------------



Rey RD n Swayam were talking n on the other side Vicky said to nil

bharat n amar : lagta hai kuch toh hone wala hai looking at the trio


Amar : matlab


Vicky : arre yaar dekha ni taani aur ye kaise lad rahe the ,

aisa lag raha hai ki ye RD is interested in taani


Nil : abe ni aisa thodi hai


Vicky : hai na yaar sun jab pyaar hota hai na to pehle pehle sab ladte

hain…ye hi nishaani hai


Nil : nahi nahi yaar


Bharat : baat mein dum hain


Vicky : dekha!!... aur yaad ni rey aur taani bhi toh kitna ladte the


Nil ; lekin taani rey ko dekh ke lagta hai kuch hai abhi bhi


Vicky ; hai toh…..(gave a thought ) arre nahi


N they all start fighting n u all know the D3 boys how they fight funy n

they dragged rey RD n swayam also……

-------------GIRL'S ROOM------------


Taani was keeping her clothes in her almirah n was mumbling

something angry irritated n annoyed


Here girls looking at her talked , simmi : guys taani bahut gusse main hai


Rinni : par kyun


Neha (hitting rinni) : arre u not seeing?? … how RD n taani

fighting ek dusre ke saath


Simmi : haan wahi toh guys lagta hai kuch hone waala hai


Aashi : aap log pyaar types ke bare mein toh ni soch rahe ho


All stared at her….aashi : what…kuch galat types kaha kya


Before simmi could say anything Sharon said : no guys aisa kuch nahi

(she knew rey loves taani n she loves him ) wo bas kuch log hote hain

jinse first meeting main fight ho jaati hai


Aashi : aur ye first meeting, first fight , pehle friendship types mein aur

phir pyaar types mein badal jaati hai


Simmi : ya u r right…..


Sharon : no guys (bt before she could complete )taani came n – guys

kya baat kar rahe ho


They got scared n then snapped n said quickly kuch nai so0 jaate hain

bahut neend aa rahi hai n they fake yawning n lay down on bed

bt taani who was not sleepy went to her window n sat there…….

in deep thoughts………



-----------------POV-----------------




RD :

so miss . billi n he sang……


."tune mujhe pehchaana nahi,

Jaana main koi anjaana nahin"


Oh god taani tum aaj bhi vaisi hi ho, bas tumhaari ankhein kuch chupa

rahi hain, kya , ……………..pain toh mujhe dika par pyaar ….

woh kaun hai?? He smirked n looked at rey smiling crookedly


N said in proud of him self


"when rithvik is here,

Not to fear"


N he sleeps


TAANI :

Ye hai kaun …isne mera dimaag kharaab kar diya yaar….

stupid chuha kahin ka….


"chuha (gave a thought ) seriously (asked herself…………

mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki main ise jaanti hun


Vaise toh ye dusra ladka hai iss duniya main jo mujhe iss

hadh tak irritate kar sakta hai


Hey Krishna ji agar agli baar phir usne aisa kiya na toh…..

toh main uska khoon kar dungi sach main

(said this animating her hands as if kisi ka gala ghot(strangling

someone) ri ho…… she sleeps


REY :

Taani ka ye roop itne dino baad dekha acha laga thnx to him….

puraani taani ko dekha maine…..smiling…….ek time tha jab

hum bhi aise hi ladte the ……chuhe billi waali fight…..

My cutely weird taani…….smiling wide he also sleeps……….

<<<<<<<<<<<<<Soo guys kaisa tha bor to nahi

hue na ….mujhe bahut saare comments

n likes chahiye maine aapke ke

liye RITHVIK ko layi na aap comment toh kar do

nayi toh mujhmein iss FF ko leke enthusiasm

nahi bachega aur aapko update tym par nahi


milega>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Awesome but i hope that rey and tani get back together
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: lovelysweet

Awesome but i hope that rey and tani get back together



dont worry ending happy hi hogi

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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Part 2:
Amazing! The precap seems so very interesting! Loved the TR look looks <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

Part 2:
Amazing! The precap seems so very interesting! Loved the TR look looks <3


glad u liked

thank u
Edited by taanifan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
nice update...
entry of RD ws really nice...
n taani n rd f8 s so amazing...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Awww.. Loved loved loved the update..
It was so cute...
Haha!!! Loved to see the old Taani back...
OMG!! Loved the nok jhok so much...
Rithvik is seriously a very interesting character...
Loved how he was irritating Taani..
Chuha and Billi.. Lol..
Awww.. Rey was happy to see his Taani back...Cutely weird Taani...
Even I miss my TaaRey..
Hope Rithvik helps in getting them together...
Loved the D3 gang's fight...
They are so funny..
Plz show jealous Rey also..
I miss him too..
Would love to see him jealous..
And plz. Update soon, dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Awww.. Loved loved loved the update..

It was so cute...
Haha!!! Loved to see the old Taani back...
OMG!! Loved the nok jhok so much...
Rithvik is seriously a very interesting character...
Loved how he was irritating Taani..
Chuha and Billi.. Lol..
Awww.. Rey was happy to see his Taani back...Cutely weird Taani...
Even I miss my TaaRey..
Hope Rithvik helps in getting them together...
Loved the D3 gang's fight...
They are so funny..
Plz show jealous Rey also..
I miss him too..
Would love to see him jealous..
And plz. Update soon, dear...



thnx that u luved the update
jealous rey hoga don't worry

i'll post soon

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