TaaRey FF : oNcE uPOn A TiMe- aFtEr brEAk Up [chapter 7 updated pg 31] - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Amazing promo! Eager to read the next part!
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New entry, I like it... Superb promo
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Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

Amazing promo! Eager to read the next part!


thnx...😃
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CHAPTER : 2


----------------Both are at their homes---------------


Rey's POV :


Taani I love you''.aaj main apne aap ko control kyun nahi kar

paya'.i know taani ki maine tumhe hurt kiya hai bt tumhare

betterment ke liye hi toh kiya hai'..i really hope ki meri ye

koshish bekaar na jaaye '..i hope kit um independent ho

jao''.n I know ki jab main tumhe bataunga ki maine ye breakup

tumhare liya kiya that oh tum mujhe maaf kardogi'.maybe tumhe

waqt lage toh main puri life tumhara wait karunga taani ''.aaj to

tumhe sab pata chal jaata I don't know kit um kya soch rahi ho

taani'bas mujhe apne aapko control main rakhna hoga''.



Taani's POV :




Rey aap har baar aisa kyun karte hain'.jab main apne app ko

samjha leti hun ki hamare beech ab kuch nahi hai toh aapka yun

mere itne karee baa jaana ''mujhe bahut hurt kiya hai aapna

rey bahut zyaada''iss baar hamaare beech job hi hua wo sach

main ek galti hi thi'..sirf ek galti'..(wipes her tears)nahi ab aur

nahi rey'main aapko apni life ka decision nahi lene dungi aap jo

chahe wo nahi kar sakte mere saath meri feelings ke

saath'..main aapko kabhi bhi maaf nahi kar paungi rey''

I hate u rey'I hate you'.jitni koshish karti hun aapse nafrat

karne ki aap kyun itne acche banjaate hain rey'..aap kyun itne

acche hain ki main '.aapko bhul hi nai paati''lekin ab main

move on karungi rey'ab main wo puraani taani nahi

hun'..aapke pyaar ne aur nafrat ne mujhe bahut badal diya hai

''.

-----------both sleep-----------


-------------------------------NEXT MORNING---------------------------------


IN COLLEGE


V.P's office


Vp- so guys ready for the NDC finals


Gang- yes sir


Vp- taani 'I m really happy tumne apni responsibilities bahut

acche se nibhayi hain n ab NDC jeetne k liye bhi tumhe half the

credit jaayega

~(guys main issko zyaada bada nahi karne wali hun its just'ki D3

NDC jeet gayii n after that taani gets a call of her tauji n she tells

him that they won 'tauji feels little happy but doesn't show it then

calls her frnds n rey for dinner '.)


Taani thinks ab ya karun sabko bulana toh hoga n ab toh rey ki

identity ko chupana bhi nahi hai to ek baar bhai aur rey se baat

kar leti hun


~(ok guys ek aur baa trey n taani were avoiding each other)~


She calls swayam n rey in private to talk n says ki tauji ne sabko

dinner pe bulaya hai aur rey''awkward silence'..then

says'.ki ab aapko sach chupaane ki zarurat nahi hai''. Toh

aap jab chahe tab bata sakte hain'.she says this coldly and then

goes off from there'..rey feels bad n swayam consoles him''

Swayam tells the gang that his dad has called them for dinner…..the gets

sad….seeing this swayam says unhe kain jaana hai so party mere ghar

pe ok n ya sleepover bhi…..


Boys start shouting n screaming happy about the party and then girls

start gossiping about the party


--------------at night taayam's house---------------



Taani was happily n excitedly preparing food in her kitchen , she had

some aata on her forehead n her hands were also dirty…….suddenly


DING DONG


Taani- bhai dekhiye na darwaaze pe koi hai


She waits


Again


DING DONG


Uffo bhai kahan hain aap ….she gets annoyed n still murmmering about

her bhai she goes to open the door n when she opens the door she

sees rey standing there….he was the first one to arrive


Both get lost in each other when the gang arrives busy talking amongst

themselves the notice taarey lost……they all observe taarey then


Simmi to neha- ye chal kya raha hai


Neha-neha thinking same


Vicky- excitedly…..hi taani……gang follows him n say- hi taani


Taarey get startled n there swayam was coming he didn't noticed the

gang n comes adjusting his watch n saying sorry taani when he looks

up sees the gang calls them in


Swayam- guys darwaaze pe kya kar rahe ho come in na


All go in n taani goes to the kitchen


Tauji comes after some time n calls taani n the gang.he says-

congratulations guys


The gang gives the credit of their winning to rey n swaron……tauji gets

confused….vicky sees this before swayam could say anything Vicky

says- haan rey toh hamari team ka lead dancer hai na


Tauji shocked but says nothing …e was happy for swayam bt didn't

show due to his ego n told everyone to have fun as he has to go out of

country for 2 weeks ……everyone was happy from inside bt didn't

show…..tauji had a last glance at rey n then he went………..everyone

went crazy in happiness ……boys had made the hall mess n were

jumping on sofas….girls were singing n dancing happily…..taani was

looking at them happily smiling wide…n saw rey looking at her n they

both were now caught up in an eyelock…..vicky saw this n pulled rey to

enjoy…….taani also focused somewhere else when there rang the bell


DING DONG, DING DONG


No one noticed taani did n she went to open the door , she opened the

door n suddenly her happy expression changed into confusion…..!!!



Precap-


Taani- aap….(before she could finish)


Guy- haan main….(smiling wide)


Taani- arre…mera matlab aap kaun…..(again he cuts her)


Guy- main kaun?


Again as taani was about to say something he suddenly brought his face

close to taani n she backed off her head with a jerk


Guy- main hun DON…!! (he said with a smirk) n went in leaving taani

shocked , surprised, n her lips had formed an 'O' shape


How was it guys..please bahut saare likes n comments ok……

Edited by taanifan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yupiee me 1st.
Luvd it.superb
Edited by Mon_tr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Res..

Unres..

Super duper Awesome update...
Loved it to the core...
I feel really bad for TaaRey...
Both of them are really hurt...
Poor Rey.. he could not even control his emotions..
And he is doing all of this for Taani to become independent...
And he has the hope that Taani will forgive and accept him once she gets to know the truth,,,,
He is even ready to wait for his whole life just for Taani's acceptance...
This part really touched my heart...

And Taani.. She is really hurt and confused too..
Confused as to why did Rey do it again..
But she is sure that this time it is a mistake...
Poor her... she does not know that Rey actually loves her very much...
She is trying to move on and become independent is a very good thing happening...

TaaRey avoiding each other...
Hmm... So, Tauji will get to know about Rey, I guess...
Waiting to know what happens next...
Plz. Update soon, dear...
Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Res..


Unres..

Super duper Awesome update...
Loved it to the core...
I feel really bad for TaaRey...
Both of them are really hurt...
Poor Rey.. he could not even control his emotions..
And he is doing all of this for Taani to become independent...
And he has the hope that Taani will forgive and accept him once she gets to know the truth,,,,
He is even ready to wait for his whole life just for Taani's acceptance...
This part really touched my heart...

And Taani.. She is really hurt and confused too..
Confused as to why did Rey do it again..
But she is sure that this time it is a mistake...
Poor her... she does not know that Rey actually loves her very much...
She is trying to move on and become independent is a very good thing happening...

TaaRey avoiding each other...
Hmm... So, Tauji will get to know about Rey, I guess...
Waiting to know what happens next...
Plz. Update soon, dear...



thanx for such n huge comment
n yes tauji will get to know about rey being a dancer
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
lovely update...ab ye kon aa gaya??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Taarey caught in llhh is so cute lol. No matter what they can't stop loving each other
Wonderful update, plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hahahahhahah 🤣it was awsm...i m still laughing on precap..🤣...main hu don wala part was so awsm...amazing update...i want to feel bad for taarey but precap is nt allowing me to do so...actually whn i met my best frnd first tym he also answered in same way...but really it was awsm...cant wait to read nxt...plz update soon and PM me..and thnks for the pm.😊😊

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