TaaRey FF : oNcE uPOn A TiMe- aFtEr brEAk Up [chapter 7 updated pg 31] - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awsome story read today in one go and its awsome really like it waiting for nxt update so update asap and pm me when u update...😊😊


thank u shubh
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thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ale_TaaRey

Loved it ..! do continue soon n pm me 😊


thnks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: disha93

Nice update!!!!!!!! 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Superb update, dear..

Really loved to see the confidence in Taani..
Loved how she answered back...
At last she found out who RD is..
Loving this..
Precap is interesting...


thnks ayesha hasan...,,,,
i just wanted her to be strong actually
n ya she had to find that rd is her frnd...
aakhir rey aur taani ko taarey banana hai na...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: QTPie99

are waah rithwik and taani bff's woh bhi chuha and billi
awesome update
and precap looks interesting and plz update soon


rd n taani bilkul tom n jerry jaise h...
i really think tom n jerry as frnds
hum frnds bhi toh hamesha fight hi karte rehte hain😆

thnks for ur comment
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dh19

nice story
read all chapter in one go
loved rd and taani bond
pls. do conbt. soon and do pm me


thnks
n i too love rd n taani's bond
i really wanted someone for her too who had a great bonding wid her
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Posted: 12 years ago

i'll post very soon...
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The following 27 member(s) liked the above post:

humeiya12, liyaliya, Sswachi, lechu10, sree689, nagalaksh, ashisha, diyadawda13,


this is for everyone who liked n commented on my last update n also for every update n encouraging me to continue...
but i have a request guyss

aap sab bas 2 words mein hi comments dete ho like nyc update , superb update, lovely update...pls pls i request ki aap apne mann ki baat likho ...its not a compulsion to write the 2 words also but it will only make me happy...

so pls pls comment mujhe batao ki update kaisa tha kya accha laga kya nhi n aap mujhse kya expect karte ho sab bato tabhi mera ff interactive bhi banega...

and

ThankYou once again❤️
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CHAPTER 6


Rd : guys kya mai kuch help kar sakta hun??

moving towards the gang….wid a wide grin

gang was shocked to see rd n taani there, they thought that

maybe taavik heard everything…….


Swayam : arre rithvik come na…….


Rd : haan wo actually mujhe tum logon se baat karni hai….

( after a min of silence he spoke ) guys mere paas tumhaare

liye yaani d3 ke liye ek offer hai!!


Total silence……no one could believe on their ears……neha broke the silence…


Neha : rd tum not joking right…..


Aashi : aapka matlab types kya hai ….aap toh fashion

desighner ho na…


Rd : haan guys….aur maine ye decide kiya h ki tum log ki

team event mei perform kare…….ye idea actuallt taani ka

hai……usine kaha ki agar d3 team event mei participate karegi

toh humein bahut fayda ho sakta hai u know….d3 ke fans n

mere fans ….show hit jayega….


All were standing with their mouth dropped in an 'o' shape

all were just staring taani


Simmi : taani u serious….ye idea tumhara hai……


Taani : a bit uncomfortable by the attention she was getting

….she hesitantly replies….h..haan…kyun accha nhi hai kya??

After some tym the gang starts to shout in excitement on

their top voices making taani startled a bit…..


Everyone hugged each other n then swayam comes n

hugs taani tightly…..thankyou taani…..tumne hamaari

saari problems solve kardi….


Taani : thanks nhi bhai….mai aapki behen hun…sab mere

frnds hai ……. itna toh kar hi sakti hun


While all this rd got a call …he attended it n then told the gang

that he has to go


Rd : guys I m so sry mujhe jaana hai….taani tum auditions

le lo na plss……


Taani : haan mai….(gets interrupted)


Rd : par tum akele ….umm.. rey tum taani ki madad

kar do na……


Taani glared at rd….n he shrugged off giving a

confused 'what' expression….


On the other side rey was really happy…….finally he

was getting tym alone wid her…..: ok!!


Bharat n vicky suddenly shout : party!!!!


Everyone agrees but taarey had to leave ……..



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Corridor


Taani was walking silently n was trying really hard to avoid

him bt wasn't successful as usual


Rey was in naughty mood to irritate her……this way she

would atleast talk to him…..


They took the auditions …..as taani knew everything she

didn't needed rey's help….n rey was amazed to see this as

he didn't knew that taani had a knowledge of fashion

desighning……like this the auditions go great n rey

kept staring at taani….


Taani finished her work and looked at him

She gave him a 'what' look…..n clicks her fingers in

front of is eyes..his trance breaks


Rey : so?

Taani : so???

Rey : ab??

Taani : ab???)(she was confused)


Rey : arre meri baat repeat mat karo….

Taani : aap apni baat sahi se boliye …kya chahiye aap ko??

Rey : murmmers : tum!!

Taani : kya?

Rey : kya , kyaa?


Taani : wahi toh mai pu…(he doesn't let her complete…..)

Rey : tum soch lo tumhe kya puchna h (fake anger)

Turns n goes smilling


Here taani is left with her mouth open

in 'o' shape : inko hua kya h??


She turns to take her stuff n as she turns from knowhere

rey pops infront n of her n she gets scared ….her heart starts

beating faster n when she sees its rey she keeps her hand

on her heart relieved…..but then gets lost in his killer smile….


Rey was seeing all this n thought : my cutely weird taani


He naughtily narrowed his eyebrows n was bringing his

face near her …she saw him n composed her self n removes

her hand from her heart wid a jerk n rey gets scared with her

action n moves back…..taani shouts…: kya hai??


Rey : kuch nhi ( a bit scared n suspicious of her behavior)

….wo hum chale?


Taani ( her heart still beating fast ) haan…..n then she

follows rey who was heading outside……


Chapter Ends Here


Precap : mujhe bhi nhi pata guys ….abhi sahi se socha nhi h


~( so hope u all liked it….pls pls pls like n comment )~

~(I know ki short update tha n I said tarey nok jhok n

also ki it will be a funny update but I guess khatam hote hote

aisa kuch bhi nhi hua)~

~( hoping ki zyaada disappoint nhi kiya maine…..~

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