TaaRey FF : oNcE uPOn A TiMe- aFtEr brEAk Up [chapter 7 updated pg 31] - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
I am really sad coz i was about to miss such favoulous story😭😭😭
anyway ur a great writer man love this story and plz dont forget to pm me after u have uploaded the other chapter😊😊😊
and yes u r a great writer just loved it...wow...👏⭐️👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
M still laughing on the fight b/w RD nd Rey...!!!hahaha please update soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nis_n

Sorry for the late comment yaar

Just read all the parts...
they are fantastic
loving it
Rithvik irritating tani is so cute :p
and omg boys scene was so hilarious
Update Soon
and thanks for PM



its ok...no sorry

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Fantastic update, the boys scene was hilarious... Aww Rey irritating Taani about her tea was so sweet. Plz continue soon. Rithvik is too funny, poor Taani she have two people now who irritate her like no other.



i know two people irritate her...

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Originally posted by: QTPie99

I am really sad coz i was about to miss such favoulous story😭😭😭
anyway ur a great writer man love this story and plz dont forget to pm me after u have uploaded the other chapter😊😊😊
and yes u r a great writer just loved it...wow...👏⭐️👏



thnx for the compliment
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read it all in one go.
Ritvik...
Great job!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: diyadawda13

Read it all in one go.

Ritvik...
Great job!


thnx
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CHAPTER : 5

-----------------------canteen---------------------

D3 gang enters n suddenly they all come to halt'''

all were shocked'''

neha : itni jaldi kaya palat (wondering )

all look at her n in unison : kya??

Neha : arre neha meaning ki kal tak taani jisse fighting

kar rahi thi aaj no fighting b/w dono''..

Aashi : neha sahi types keh rahi hai''.kal tak taani fight

types kar rahi thi aaj frndship types lag raha hai ya shayad

kuch aur types bhi ho sakta hai

Sharon : kuch aur matlab?

Vicky : blurts out : arre matlab pyaar

Others : what??

Nil : ae chup na kuch bhi bolta hai

Swayam : to taani n rithvik : hey guys whats up?

Abhi tak toh tum dono lad rahe the aur ab''.kya hua?

Taani : bhai aap?

Rithvik : to taani : dikhai nhi de raha kya??

Taani : glares at rd : bhai wo ''.

Rithvik : interrupts her : main chuha

Gang : kya??

Swayam : recognizing him: tu??

Swayam hugs rithvik n is solid happy seeing him''

Taani aur maine toh tumhe pehchaana hi nahi

Rithvik : kaise pehchaanoge '..mai bachpan mei hi

jodhpur se chala gaya bt jab wapas aaya toh pata chala

ki tum dono yahan ho'..mumbai mei!

Gang was very confused n this didn't go unnoticed

by rd so he decided to clear out everything

Rd : guys itna confuse hone ki zarurat nhi hai come sit

main sab batata hun

Everyone sits '''''rd : mai taani ka childhood

frend'.uska bff'Aur isse billi bulata hun ok''

Aashi : taani aapne rd ko pehchaana types '.kaise?

Taani : arre haan'.wo'.

Rd : mai batata hun''..

Taani : interrupts him : mirch masala daal ke ''.makes faces ''

Rd continues : so guys aaj kya hua na''.

------------~*~ FLASHBACK~*~-------------

Rd : so?

Taani : kya hua? Annoyed

Rd : tumhara koi '.boy'friend 'hai??

Taani's head shots up in shock she looks at rd n

then gets lost in her past memories of her relationship wid rey

Girl 1 :ye dekho hamari GS ko '.kabhi kisi ke saath toh

kabhi kisi ke saath'..

Girl 2 : aur nhi toh kya ''..kabhi shivam '..kabhi

rey aur ab dekho'..

Girl 1 : vaise manna padega taani ki choice ko 'nhi '

saare ladke kitne hot n happening hai '.haina''aur ye

'.ye toh kitna handsome hai(drooling over rd)

Girls come to taani though taani n rd had heard everything

none said anything''here taani was at a verge of

crying'.there rd was fuming wid anger

Girl 2 : hi GS '.aaj new boy '.humein bhi toh introduce

karao na (giggling)

Rd was going to say something when he heard a lout

shout'..from'..TAANI !!!

Taani : ENOUGH!!!!

Bahut ho gaya 'bas ab ek.aur.shabd.nhi. got that??

Jab kuch pta na ho toh bolna nhi chahiye n vaise bhi mai

jaisi bhi tum logon se toh better hi hun '.tum jaisi ladkiyaan

har dusre ladke ko dekh kar flirting n cheap harkate karna

shuru karti ho'..

Shivam bura tha'aur uske saath mere relationship fake tha

''samjhe aur jahan tak rey ki baat hai toh'..toh breakup

maine kiya hai unse kyunki unhone mujhe nhi samjha '

anyways tum jaiso ko explanation nhi dena chahti hun bt phir

bhi for your kind information ye (looking at rd)'.ye vp sir ke

frend ke bete hain jo kisi kaam se yahan aaye hain n as a gs

mujhe unki help karne ki duty di hai'..

Aur kuch puchna hai kya'..

Girls : annoyed n embarrassed : lets go!

Taani shuts her eyes to calm herself n then looks at rd who

was standing there wide eyed n mouth dropped open'..

continuosly staring at her'.

Tani waves her hand infront of his eyes bt no reaction then

she gives whatever look to him n starts to leave when rd

comes in his sences n says loud'..

"billi jungle billi ban gayii'wah!wah!"'.

Taani stops in her track 'turns to him n wid teary eyes

she calls him (pointing him) "chuha??"

Rd nods his head in yes n taani not believing her eyes

runs to him n hugs him tight'..

-------------~*~FLASHBACK ENDS~*~-------------

Rd : n that's when u guys enter 'I guess!!

Everyone was staring at taani wid their mouths dropped open

Taani : slowly : guys??

Bharat : taani toh chhaa gayii

Simmi : ya man 'I mean humne kabhi nhi socha tha ki tum

aise react karogi'..

Rey : who was smiling says to himself : I knew ki tum aise hi

react karogi bt taani tum aise kaise keh sakti ho ki maine tumhe

samjha nhi'..maine toh hamesha hi tumhaare baare mei

socha hai

Swayam ; claps : wow taani finally tumne apna stand le liya

Taani : haani bhai (looking at rey)

Vicky : so tum log childhood frends ho '.

Sharon : ok guys ye sab chodo aur ye batao ki events ke

baare mei kya socha tum logon ne??

Taani : arre haan wahi baat karne toh aaye the par rd

pta nhi kya nautanki kar raha tha

Rd : haan haan toh tu kaunsa mujhse baat kar rahi thi

Taani : accha'.her cell rings''ek minute

She takes the call n comes back to tha gang

" guys mujhe vp sir ne bulaya hai"

Aashi to neha : whispering : rent types ke bare mei baat

Karne ke bulaya ho toh??

Neha : sshh!! Neha saying shubh shubh bolo

Taani goes''.

-------------------VP's office----------------

Taani : sir aapna mujhe bulaya?

Vp : haan taani come in

Kya team ne abhi tak rh ka rent diya hai

Taani : nhi sir wo

Vp : wo kuch nhi taani already late ho chukka hai'.

i understand ki problems hongi bt authorities ko jawaab

dena hota hai 'so jitna jaldi ho utna jaldi karna'..ok'.

Taani : worried : umm'.yes sir!

She goes out only to collide wid rd

Both : ouch!!

Rd : hey kya hua tum tensed lag rahi ho?

Taani : team abhi bhi canteen mei hai kya ?

Rd : haan kyun?

Taani : chalo

-------------------CANTEEN------------------------



Vicky : ab tak toh taani ko sir ne rent ke liye bol diya hoga

Aashi : aur humaare paas funds types bhi zyaada nhi hai

Swayam ; guys I think iss baar hum mei se koi ek rent de

dega infact mai dunga

Neha : nhi 'swayam wrong you doing

Sharon : toh aur kya kar sakte hain guys??

{ (rd n taani had already heard their conversation)

Taani : to rd : rithvik mujhe tumhari help chahiye

Rd : ok but kya? }

Rd : guys kya mai kuch help kar sakta hun??

moving towards the gang'.wid a wide grin


~*~Chapter Ends Here~*~


PRECAP :

All are really happy n rey irritates taani


~(sorry for the late guys '..hope ye update

accha tha '..next update will be kinda funny

so stay tuned'..)~

Edited by taanifan - 12 years ago
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