resevwill try to unres asap.😊
~~UNRESED~~
hola...so sorry for late unres.
now coming to ur stry.
First let me start my 'ravee kahani' okay.
I dnt knw maine aaj se pehle comment kiya h ya nahi bt i remember maine ye stry pehle padhi h . so comments for 1-6 chapter.
PRASSI first of all hats off to ur writting skills. U r just brilliant.
And this stry concept is so amazing u knw.
I just loves all the chapters.I have a soft corner for emotional stories.
so this stry really touched my heart.
MY fave scenes in all 6 chapters.
* swaron terrace talk ..when they discused abt taani and the same day their talk on sofa in living room.Sharon is so understanding...and swayam is so caring.
i loved taani and Ansh's bond too.
all taayam,shaani and taansh(taani and ansh ) scenes were really nice.
** hospital scene when rey was worried for taani and rey and karan's talk was really hearttouching.
*** TR accident flashback...OMG i still remember the day i read that part i really cried a lot.That part was my more than fav for me.
**** last but definately nt the least : TR date when karan spoiled evrything...hahhaha..that was so awsm. that one was damn cool and fab part.
***** taani crying in rain...that part in on TOP of my fav list..u described it so beautifully. awsm scene.
overall all the parts were fab...i dnt remember properly coz i read them long ago. and srry if i did any mistake in explaing above parts.
now coming to CHAPTER 7
brilliant start dear.
that birds chirping ,sun rays ..whole description was awsm.
then taani and sharon's part in kitchen.
awww ...sharon is so nyc. best bhabhi and best frnd.
shaani's bond was so so so so nyc.
🤣🤣🤣
swayam and ansh sleeping positions...🤣
i can understand shaani's condition .
ansh kicked him...🤣
baap-bete ek jaise h...😆😆
that part was surely highlight.
Then OMG...pain in taani's head.
god u will give me heart attack some day.
Swaron worry and care for her was so good.
flashback part
i will consider it as the most beautiful part of ur update till now.
******taarey's mrning scene ( my 6th fav part from this FF😉)
rey is so naughty...bechara bas apni wife ko pyaar hi to kar raha tha.😉😆😳
taani bad maners . apne pati parmeshvar ko koi bed se girata h kya.😆😆
tch tch tch...bechara rey...kya aukat h..biwi bhaav hi nahi deti. tch tch 😆😆😆
hahhaahha ...reys plan..OMG..schl boy..pet mein dard ho gaya.main bachpan mein aise drame karti thi.😆
rey u r really too much.
bechari taani...
flashback part was really awsm.lovd it.
P.S : dear plz PM me from now onwards and i'll read every part for sure.I'll definately comment regulary on each update.
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