Arhi SS : Khamoshiyan [ Completed ]

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

I just loved this update why ?

a) Anjali has a brain yipee! She is actually using it Icing on the cake 😆

b) Arnav is trying (not that hard according to me)

c) Khushi she is scared, she is fearing for another heart break which is obvious. Arnav at the end of the day will choose Anjali over Khushi which will be the only fear. Equality does not exist or Giving Khushi more space.

d) This update I felt pushed the story a bit further. Which is good.

How long will you take to complete this story ?

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

awesome part
i love arnav efforts
he is trying his lwvel best to win khushi
thnx for pm
updt soon

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Res

Will update comment tomorrow after work but I really loved the chapter!!

So many great moments about this chapter! Loved how Anjali is focused on her brothers happiness as well and not totally self absorbed , like in the show. Love Arnav's honest efforts he is trying. I really liked that he went to Payal for advice, as her sister would definitely know best!

Loved how he takes a real interest in her business and succeeds at a normal conversation. Khushi momentarily forgets and gets quite engrossed in the conversation..

The chaat party was a fabulous idea ! Loved how Khushi wanted to hug the person responsible for it before finding out it was Arnav! Kind of felt sad for Arnav that she won't cut him a break.

Thanks for the special mention and can't wait till next chapter!

Edited by ssyahoo - 12 years ago

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Cute6

@Cute6

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

okay so arnav is taking baby steps to woo khushi back!!

making small sonversations, pouring his heart out and showing her how much he loves her ,making everything posssible to get dat carefree small on her lips...

loved it!!

now lets see for how long khushi will resist him and his charms!!

so dey slept on same bed vaiting to see wen d distance becomes nil!!

nd u used payal dat was a good move and anjali is not behaving lyk a fool and has moved on dat was good to see

thanx for d pm...

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Kash, Kash we had this going in the serial. I so wanted Arnav to win over Gupta family and Khushi in a beautiful manner. Instead all we got was Dadi insulting Khushi. Why oh why we didn't get this as a part of redemption - Arnav doing everything he can to have Khushi in his life and trying to put smile on her face. Beautiful update. Loved it.

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

superb nd lovely update

thanks for the pm

Twinkle

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Mints, I apologise for the delay.

Absolutely loving the story's progress...

A sensible and non neurotic Anjali was a pleasant change. Love how she gathers herself up.

And Arnav is right! Khushi is quite selfless... Love how he reaches out to Payal for help.

And their little chat about normal things was so real and so cute...love how he eases her into the conversation.

Chaat party was a brilliant idea!👏 Well done, Arnav( mints😉)...nothing can come in between KKGSR and her food...she proved it yet again today..😃 And Arnav got what he wanted! The unadulterated happiness and joy in her eyes as she relished her favourite chaat.

Loved their passionate confrontation...

Khushi, this marriage is not over yet. You may have given up on us' but I haven't. And never will.

Well said Arnav. Love you for this.🤗

Mints, completely enjoyed this update. Thank you. When is the next?

Edited by Afya - 12 years ago

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

Hi,
i loved this update...nice to see this way of anjali we all wanted to see...which in the show never happened...thanks to u...

she is becoming strong, and fighting with her life...

can not see kushi like that...considered her fears...but she is doubting love here ...hope she will see soon arnav true love for her...

but arnav is trying here,he apologized, everything he can do in his way he is doing...

very very impressive the way u r writing his feelings kundos to u👏...each chapter is different than the other one...

in the last paragraph the way arnav expressed his feeling speech less...
thank u for giving us nice chapter...

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

Beautiful update...this story has the most perfect repentance track..the one we all wished to be shown in IPKKND...simply awsome...I'm in love with this story..please update soon.

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#420

Arnav is trying, but is it enough? Can't say I blame Kushi for thinking the way she is. His Di will always come first for him. Something needs to happen so she can trust him again.