Arhi SS : Khamoshiyan [ Completed ]

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#391

Lovely update as usual and the end of the update gives me lot of hopes.

Loved the way you wrote about Arnav and khushi struggling with their feelings and thoughts. But the scene which stood out for me was the one in which khushi gets up from sleep and admires arnav as both her raajkumar and tormentor and the way she ducks at getting caught was too cute and hilarious, very typically Khushi. 😆

Finally Arnav is aware of the truth regarding those plants that were sent to him some months back. This will reaffirm arnav's thoughts as to what a loving person khushi is.

My heart went out to khushi who could not enjoy her 5th mth anniversary without pain.

But the end of the update gave me lot of dil ka sukoon.

Thanks for the PM mints and i am dying to read what unfolds next.

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#392

That was beautiful. But Arnav has a long way to go before he can expect Kushi to trust him again. I just cannot forget her sleeping outside the house! Even animals are better treated! Kushi has a big heart to forgive him. I just wonder what he would be doing, if he had not found out the truth. Still treating her like shit??? Now he knows the truth, and so just because he says so everything should be OK? Nada!

Thanks for the PM. Waiting...

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#393

What a great start to winning her back...let's hope it continues!

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#394

Wonderful update.. speechless...

Arnav got back the bangles for her.. She knows how much he cares for her... its very difficult for kushi to realize his feelings...

kushi listen to u r heart as always😉😉...arnav beta do not hold u r feelings...😆.

hope every thing will be ok ,can not see them suffer like this...

thank u for giving us emotional and sensitive chapter(in the show arnav doesn't know about bangles)...

waiting for more...

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#395

thank u so much for letting arnav know about the bangles. i always wanted to see that in the show but it never happened! so indirectly uve fulfilled one of my wish:)

superb update, it was just awesome and so emotional. but im scared that khushi will really leave at the end of the 6 months! i dunt want arnav to fail. they both deserve all the happiness and love! they need a chance at life and love again

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#396

updated ny cmnt on page 57
thnks for the pm

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sasr

@sasr

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#397

loved your writings soo much..read your other os's n ss'ss too..pls accpt my buddy request n pm me further updats..

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Sisbamboo1

@Sisbamboo1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#398

An extremely late res but I'll unres soon.

I can't wait to say this so I will say it now and then unres later. Even before I started reading this chapter I knew it would be perfect! And I wasn't wrong :)

Edit:

I can't imagine the turmoil and confusion Khushi is feeling right now but it does prove that Arnav is doing everything right this time. This is an uphill battle, though, so he's going to have to work even harder to nudge Khushi in his direction. I think, right now, it is the most crucial point where Arnav needs to show her that she will be happy and safe with him. That she can place her trust in him and he won't completely shatter it like he did before. One more betrayal, one more hurt and I don't think Khushi will be able to handle going back to Arnav.

Khushi, as a character, has won so many fans because of her quirks and this was illustrated perfectly when she hid under the quilt and tightly shut her eyes 😆. Like that would make Arnav forget that she was staring at him. It reminded me of the closet scene 😆.

It was so sad when she realized that they only had one month left 😭. Well...if things went her way then yes it would be one month, but Arnav plans to keep her forever.

I think what Khushi saw in his eyes is reflected in these two sentences: "I didn't deserve it then and I don't deserve you now. Yet, the shameless, selfish me is going to try and becomes someone that I hope you deserve." He can't fathom how Khushi could love him, care about him so much that she would sell her mother's bangles so that he could marry someone else. She cared about his happiness even if it meant that his happiness lay with someone other than her. And he gave her so much pain and didn't believe in that unselfish love. He's battling himself.

I don't know how you did it, but Arnav's "Why?" encompassed all the questions he asked Khushi. If you hadn't made Arnav ask each question specifically, I would have still known what he was asking. How did you pack so many emotions, so many questions in just one word?

And the best part of this chapter was when Khushi voluntarily threw herself in Arnav's arms. It was her first step towards him.

Obviously I can't say I am lost for words at the brilliance of this chapter because of all of the above 😳 but I am in love with this chapter.

Edited by Sisbamboo1 - 12 years ago