Arhi SS : Khamoshiyan [ Completed ] - Page 39

sigh...such an emotional update dear...
enjoyed reading every bit ov it...beautiful...
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thnxxx 4 pm...

What does one say about an update that leaves you so overwhelmed with emotions - you have brought the characters and their feelings alive. I so so wish this had happened in the serial, alas.

So delicately worded and every scene so sensitively designed - craftsmanship at its best.

Hey, I really like this story. I have added you to my buddy list, hope you'll PM me next time :)
I think it's very natural for Khushi to hesitate before she trusts him again. It was rather ridiculous that she went back to trusting him again in the show, as if nothing had happened. And thank you, for returning her mother's bangles. It made me so sad that he didn't even know about them in the show.

Mints... What a beautiful update... There is so much pain & pathos in this story, it is hard to breathe at times... Just feeling the immense pain of both these two star-crossed lovers makes me tear up... I have read or actually am reading a similar story by someone else cannot remember the name, but the depth of emotions you've managed to create in this story is far beyond the other story I am reading.. For the life of me, I cannot remember the name of it now...

Hahaha mints, you ask me to write something when I read something like this… I can't even write one sentence with this much of excellence. This chapter was as brilliant as it can be, loved the way you close one of the many loopholes our beloved show left unclosed.

Although she is totally aware of Arnav's changed persona and his sincerity for her along with regrets for all his misdeeds but forgetting the pain and hurt is not as easy as showed in IPK. And you are writing it so beautifully. Arnav calling Khushi's Amma "Maa" was one of the most heart touching moment of this story, Khushi did realized it must be difficult for him to call her so. Loved the way they realize each other presence, they are totally made for each other, only certain circumstances forced them to drift apart. Khushi hiding under duvet when Arnav caught her staring at him, was so cute and it reminded me of Khushi from show.

As I already said, I loved the way you made Arnav bring her mother's bangle back to her, he did returned a piece of heart. Words are not required in between these two, "how" and "why" are enough for them to communicate. Whole poolside scene was more than prefect and the way Khushi threw herself in his awaiting arms, made my heart swell with happiness. We can finally see a tiny ray of hope like Arnav. Again, a fantastic update Mints, you wrote it so brilliantly, just prefect 👏⭐️👏

i really want khushi to express her feeling in detail once.

Wow...beautiful update.

This is a beautiful story. The redemption shown here is heartening, something we al wanted to see in the show. Continue soon! :)

This is simply beautiful! Thanks for the pm.