Arshi SS The Unforgiven :: Chp2 Pg10 :: 26/06

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

hey

that was intense

and Khushi has been framed for murder?😲

wow

this just got more interesting

and Shyam was her father?

i can honestly say, i never saw that coming

i can't wait to read more

continue soon

and thanks for the email😊

and i can't believe i'm first to comment

never thought that'd happen😆

huh

yayyy

Edited by amri123 - 12 years ago

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hushniya

@hushniya

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Arshix144
A thriller wow, I always loved reading them as a kid! As I read the prologue the whole scene keptunravelinglayer by layer right before my eyes. Now this one you must continue as soon as you can :D That name Shyam always gives me negative vibes for the first time I felt sorry for him so let us see what brought on his demise.

PS. You kept me so busy all day with your lovely updates woman😆Thanks heaps for the email!🤗

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Awesome start Loved it Cant wait to read more

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

omg khushi has been framed for murder of shyam manohar jha?!

this is really interesting...

continue soon n thnx for the notification...

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Great start..
Kushi framed for murder...interesting..

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vtan

@vtan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

That's a fabulous start. Can't wait to read the next part.

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rakhee12

@rakhee12

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

oh this is interesting. Shyam is Khushi's father and has been murdered. Khushi is accused of murdering him, this looks like a thriller, cant wait for the mystery to unravel.

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Poor khushi she has been framed for murder
Really felt pity for her.
This is really interesting waiting for the next update.
Thks for her the mail dear.

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

So it's Khushi who was with Shyam and now is held guilty for his murder. Oh the poor soul.. she has to go through all this. Hoping that Devyani might be of some help to her in some way.