Taarey SS:Jhootha Hi Sahi:Updated CH4:PG30:PM Later - Page 7

Originally posted by: Dipu_taarey

yipee...i m the first one...

hi debu...dipu ki sister...your ff concept is awesome...loved it...one is rich guy and she is thief...loved this...and i know vo kya chura kar le gayi...vo REY KA DIL churakar le gayi hogi...update soon dear...

Dipu..meri behena..you are so right..intelligent huh😉😃..aakhir sister kiski ho😳😆

Originally posted by: flicka

thanks for dedicating this story to me, indu di she is my inspiration i joined IF because of her(i read her ff chahatand really loved it), sania( i didn't know her name and never got a chance to ask her but she is really nice person) and the last person ishu yeah she is really a sweet heart

in last thanks debu

Aims, you are such a sweet person and best buddy of mine..🤗
how could I forget you😳
Love ya always

amazingg banner =)

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

O My God...like seriously is this true?

i am a part of I-F since 2009, i am not so social but still i have got some compliments on I-F which mean a lot to me but this...i am short of words here

you dedicated this SS to 4 people and i am one of them...girl i have never felt this much special

i am on cloud 9 right now...happy and emotional 😳

thank you so much dear...it really means a lot to me 😊

so back to the earth...have to comment on this SS na 😆

what do you eat yar? another brilliant, awesome,interesting, amazing, superb, rocking concept!

and and and Taani is a thief here...i swear i have read almost 250 ff's on I-F and in not even a single ff the female lead is a thief...so kudos to you for bringing this new and interesting twist 👍🏼

so as per the concept Taani will pretend as Rey's girlfriend...Miss.Bishaka forget Rey now coz ab jab Taani aur Rey aik dusre ke paas aayen ge to unhen TaaRey banane se koi nahin rok sakta 😉

and i loved the tag line "It's hard to pretend you love someone when you don't but its harder to pretend that you don't love someone when you really do"

coming to the first update

i really had a good laugh on this line "you think I am selling girlfriends here, Rey?" 🤣

oh so baat 5 crore ki hai...but it is said that when you fall in true love money doesn't matter, lets see kya Rey aur Taani ko bhi aisa pyaar hoga 😳

and a special mention of Swayam's character in this SS...please keep on giving him such dialogues...apart from the girlfriend wala dialogue, i also loved this one "if someone gives me that money nah, I am always ready to marry again" totally unlike the majnu Swayam 😆

waiting for Taani's entry...super excited for it 😃

continue asap, thanx for the pm and once again thanx for the special mention 😊

I am so happy sanu that you have taken out your valuable time and read it 🤗 though you are so much busy with your exams..really appreciated...

I toh always love your comments and the special design too😉

you always hold a special position in my stories, for that I really love you🤗

Originally posted by: crazy2012

Originally posted by: samiha_taarey

omg!!!! another ss frm u...bt ami tr sathe katti tui amak pm kris ni...😡 kintu bepar na ami bolechi na amar lyks & comments tui na chaileo tr writings a pabi so i found it...😆 awsome concept yar... sotti onk excited... u know tr kahini gulo te amar ei jinis tai sobchey besi valo lage j 2i alwayz different different concept try kris nd tr 1 stry sathe onno tar kono mil thake na...ekhn plz dont b lazy lyk me & update asap...warna mai sach much katti kar lungi...

ha ha ha thank you..ami different characters and story niye experiment korte valobasi ar noile tui porbie ba kano bol..interest dhore rakhatao kin2 writer der er ekta duty😆

Originally posted by: Dipu_taarey

love the update debu...lovely chapter...rey finding a girl who act as her gf...beta rey tujhe nahi pata hai ki tu ussi se pyar karne lagega...waiting for next update debu...

ha ha ha Debu ki behena Dipu..yes...ye kambakht payar hota hai aisi..nobody knows when it comes and cover us😉😆

Loved this cocept👏

Chapter 2 : The Girl

"Swayam, what is this place yaar? this is toh slum area and you are going to find a girl from here?" asked a surprised Rey

"sorry Rey, even I didn't know that it is a slum area, Sharon told me to meet here with you only" replied Swayam.

Both of them were now moving through a narrow lane with lined up small cottage called "jhopar patti" in local Hindi. They went to a particular room, and could see Sharon waiting for them along with a girl. The girl looked like around twenty - twenty one years, wearing a loose long pant with a faded shirt. her entire attire was so dirty so that it could be understood that she had not cleaned it for so days and the excessive oiled hair was tightly tied up on the head, her face was rough without having proper application of proper moisture, but there was a natural beauty hidden in her face. The most attractive feature of her entire body was her eyes - the deep, black eyes had the magnetic attraction without any extra make up. Rey saw her from toe to head and his look stopped at her eyes, he looked down his glance.

"Rey, this girl is ready to play the role, I have done the briefing to her on your behalf, now it's your turn" said Sharon

"Thank You Sharon" said Rey and turned to the girl to introduce himself, "Well, I am Reyaansh Singhania and I stay at United State, America, you must be knowing it, so what is your good name?"

"Apunka naam Taani hai (My namme is Taani)" replied the girl

"Ye kaisi naam hai, there must be Ya or Sha after Taani nah? like, Taaniya or Taanisha, huh? I never heared such an odd name in my life" said Swayam

"Nahi Sahib, apunka naam Taani hi hai, only Taani, aur mujhe ye naam bahut paayari hai, ye naam hum badlegi nahi" Taani answered him (No Sir, my name is Taani only and I like this name so much , I will not change this name at any cost)

"ohh okay okay, so your parent must be loving songs nah, they wanted to give something like Dhaani or Saani and you could not pronounce it properly in your childhood, so you..." Swayam's line was not finished as he was interrupted

"Swayam, if you are finished with your analysis of name, can we proceed further" said Sharon

"hey, wait wait, what you just said? you can't change your name..but my girlfriend's name is Bishakha..Sharon, please make her understand na" Rey pleaded

"Okay..ummm..but Rey, your girlfriend may have another nick or pet name nah, by that name you call her only, with love of course..so Taani is that name..now solved okay? and tell her about the money" Sharon said

"main toh pura panch lakh legi iss kaam ke liye, na ek paisa kam na ek paisa zada" Taani said (I will take total of Five lakh for this work, nothing more than that)

"What? Five lakh is much higher for this, and tell me one thing, have you done any acting in your life? waise what do you do normally?" asked Rey

"Nahi Sahib, I have a risk in this work, if your family members get to know it, they will turn me as dead body, so I can't compromise with the money and yes, I have done many acts during my school days, I played the part of Ravan in Sita Haran in our locality and I always used to play the role of hero during my school days and started beating villians, you know I loved it so much" Taani explained it to Rey

"What? all boys role? but you are supposed to be my girlfriend here, you it nah" Rey said it with low voice with less hope

"Rey, Rey please calm down, she knows acting, I saw it, you don't worry, we just need to polish her and by the way, she some times takes money from others without informing them, but you don't worry Rey " Sharon said

"What?? she is a thief...she steals others' property, money etc, maatlaab she is a pick pocket" Swayam shoughted

"Sahib, aise mat bolo, apun ka bhi koi mazboori hai, warna koi chori saukh se nahi karti" Taani tried to explain her point (please don't say like that Sir, I must have some problems, otherwise no one wishes to steal by passion)

Rey called Sharon aside to discuss and ask what is her profession.

"Don't worry Rey, the girl is needy, so she has done that small stealing, but she is not a professional thief that you people are thinking, she doesn't have any criminal record, she has promised me that once she starts working with us, she wont do it..trust me Rey, I know the gem and this girl has lots of potentials" Sharon told him in detail

"But, does she know to speak English at all? look at her language. how can my girlfriend from US speak like that Sharon, I am not able to think any more, I am leaving it on you totally, I don't have any other option" said Rey

"Janti hai na, aapun ten class tak parahi ki thi, par uske baad baapu latak gaya aur mujhe parahi chorna para, mujhe Thank You, Welcome, Hello bolna aata hai, I knowing English bit bit, you worrying mat zada. me sikh lengi, main bahut achhi student thi" Taani replied it with a smiling face
(I know English very little as I studied up to class ten, after that my father died and I had to leave my studies, but you don't worry I am a good learner)

"Okay Taani, tell your family that you will be out of town for four months and pack your bags now, you have to stay with us, me and Swayam for few days first so that we can train you for the work, after that your original work is going to start in Rey's house. You must listen to us, Rey will teach you Taani, clear now? Sharon explained this to Taani

Three of them when left that place, a new person joined their team. Rey dropped Taani, Sharon and Swayam at their building with great anxiety and promised to come back at the next morning.



w/n - so this is our Taani, hope you liked her, as she is from poor family, her character must not know English properly, so I used Hindi here, but I am also not good at Hindi grammar, so please forgive me and tell me if I missed anything. One thing specially want to mention, I am working on Annie's request, this thief Taani totally belongs to her as this is her idea, I am just giving my color of imagination to her. Those who are in my BUDDY list, will only get PMs. Please also notice the banner @page1