ARIYA SS PEhla PYaar THREAD 2 ...UPDATED

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priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

nice start…
loved it
cont soon…
n plz…do pm me while u update

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devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

awsum start...
omg poor riya... feeling bad for her...
arjun is hurting her too much...
continue soon...

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bebovirdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

feeling bad for ariya
love it
continue soon

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Superb Start... Poor Ri... continue soon

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

wow cute story ...add me n PM list ...have sent u a budddy request too

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Sanjana malhotra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Wow... Nyc update!! Continue soon!!

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Superb start.
Well portrayal of Riya and Arjun's emotions'.
Sach mein Arjun ne usse bohut hi hurt kiya hai,par,hum unhe dar aur dukh dete hai,jinse hum sabse zyada pyaar karte hain.
Please continue.

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome update
feel sad for riya poor girl
feel bad for arjun too he distances riya for her happiness & safety
he thinks he is not worthy of her poor them
both are so much in love yaar
cont soon

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pinky gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

thank u for all your support and appreciation.. so here is part2 for u

Part2

Aftr this discussing riya's ignorance on arjun increased . she didn't go out of her way to talk to him or even avoided talking to him… only one thing was same between them>>>>>>>>TEARS>>>>>>>>>> yes they both use to cry.. riya for staying away from arjun.. and arjun for his bad luck to loose riya

Aftr 5days MORNING IN ETF:::

As usual all were doing their work.. riya and chotu paperwork, shree busy with his girlfriend…(not liza yaar its his lapi)… rathore in his cabin with ayesha chating n discussing … and arjun studing sme file..

Shree and chotu noticed riya's sad face and puffy eyes due to crying…even arjun noticed it and understood that she had cried the whole night…

Shree: yaar ri ek cup coffee milegi..?

Riya : ha shree abhi lati hoon, chotu tum pioge?

Chotu: ha bilkul..

He goes to rathore' s cabin….

Ria: rathore sir aur ayesha ma'm coffee peyenge?

(ria and ayesha have become good friends and even she knows abt her feelings for arjun.. whn rathore and arjun are nt present riya always calls her ayesha and nt ma'm…)

Rathore and ayesha : ha riya please…

She brought coffee for all bt today there was no cutting chai… it was her routine to bring cutting chai for him along with their coffee..

Shree(by mistake): ri tu aaj arjun sir ki chai bhul gai?

Chotu pinched him for making riya remember.. even arjun didn't expect this.. he thought she would atleast bring his chai..he was still expecting her to go and order bt she ignored it like nothing happened..

Ria: wooh mein bhul gaii.. coffee thik ha sabki..

All: haan.

Arjun gt up and ordered his chai.. even the chai wala was surprised coz from last 2 years it was always riya who called up for the order…

Riya went to the pantry for putting the coffee mugs..

Arjun in his cabin:

He is very angry nt abt riya's behavoiur bt hw much he needed riya's support even for his chai..

Arjun kya soch raha thu, tune aaj tak sirf uski insult ki, usee hurt kiya aur agee bhi koi khushi nahi de payega usee. Kyon apni khushi ke liye uski zindagi barbad kar raha hai… wooh ek khadoos, akdu aur dhuki rehne wale insaan nahi deserve karti.. usee koi esa milna chahiye joh uski khushi ke liye jaan bhi de dege..joh usse saath hase sharat kare.. nahi arjun riya tumhari life mein nahi aa sakti… tum uski life mein misfit hoo…

His cruel mind: bhul jao riya ko wooh tumhare kabhi nahi hogi..

Bt his heart…pyar karne laga hu tumse riya.. bohot pyar nahi reh sakta tumhare bina…

In the battle of mind and heart.. his mind won today… a drop of tear escaped his eyes bt he rubbed it 😭 and was coming back to conference room.. he was on this way whn he found riya happily running towards sme1… he turnd to see who the person was.. he found riya happily hugging him…

waiting for ur comments.. part 3 wll be updated soon...

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Awesome update.
I am happy riya ignore arjun because he insult her.
Omg arjun is also crying.
Arjun cruel mind won.
And between whose tht guy.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.