SS| anyone who had a heart| complete - Page 9

I could almost feel the music in this one... And brilliant characterizations. Loved this one girl... Different yes. Still so Beautiful...Absolutely.

Hope you update the next part soon :)

It's a lovely piece of writing . That you've spent time on research shows and lends weight to the flow .

Res for part two, will be back!!!! Just had to be first 😃
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Ok I'm back. This chapter was beautiful, so adorable!! Amazing Shiz <333

What a beautiful mother-daughter relationship between Amrita and khushi. So her father walked out on them? That's terrible, but it's so good to see a strong Khushi despite that. Her last sarcastic remark had me chuckling, I really like this Khushi. I absolutely love the way you described her feelings about not wanting to speak because she did not feel confident enough. I'm sure the sound is beautiful nonetheless, especially to our Arnav 😳

Onto Arnav, can I give him a hug or something? He's so cute, I laughed out loud when he was practicing his lip reading with Jai Prakash 😆 This guy is totally new to the sensation that he's been caught in, and it's adorable. His banter with Anjali made me smile, loved their sibling bonding.

Awww she came to his office to give back his jacket. Is that the only reason she came?? 😉
I can really imagine his face when he saw her at his office, he must have been overjoyed. Their communication through writing on paper was lovely, truly reminds me of the good old days of passing notes to a crush 😆

And the last bit...Ahhh the feeling of playing the violin, how well you described it! The strum of the strings, the rhythm, the vibration against the fingers, the pitch...are you trying to make me feel nostalgic here or is that just a coincidence??

How can we forget my favourite part? My heart seriously melted when he threw a rock at her window, how dreamy! Can I have him?
And then he calls her beautiful in sign language...

And then I call this update beautiful because that's what it is. As always. Loved this to bits 😊

That was awesome, could have been an FF, thanks for the PM, throughly enjoyed it

Awww part 2 is suoer awesome dear wooow love it .

Very impressive piece of writing.

The nuisances of falling in love. Arnav is going through a change and of course is totally clueless on how to adjust from within. I had a good laugh when he commented on Jai prakash acting weirdly 😆😆😆 I seriously want to pinch his cheeks, how adorable can he be. I am glad he fell for Khushi. I love this Arnav of your's also. He is a gentleman despite being a business freak. Anjali and Arnav's conversation had me in splits!

Khushi's father walked out on them. I hope whenever Arnav and Khushi get together she tells him this. It would be a very nice conversation and I just waiting for the confession from Arnav's side now. How can you not understand your own feelings? I would like to smack some sense into him. I loved their conversation in the office and how Arnav touched upon a sensitive nerve. I guess that will be the defining line for Khushi. I am eager to see Arnav's reaction this time around. But can I just say, Arnav Singh Raizada throwing rocks at a window...Classic romantic I've always wanted to see in him.

Amrita is a wonderful mother for supporting Khushi. I love your characterizations here. I am in awe of everyone. Including you for coming up with them. I still recommend that you turn this story into a short story at least. I would love to see a gradual change in them.

what a wonderful follow up!

both his attempts at home at lip reading and his finally learning sign language, awesome. way to go arnav!