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InvisibleSmile

@InvisibleSmile

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: crackerszone
A very different concept and it has been explored beautifully...I loved da reactions of Arnav and khushi 2wards each other...dey were a natural and wow..ASR is already in love...can we hope u would continue dis?..atleast make it a 2 shot..and plss pm me when u do

Don't worry, there are two more parts to this story. I will surely PM you :)

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alisondi

@alisondi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

oh my goodness...

this is freakishly beautiful n touching..

i can say eithout a doubt ,that it is one of the best pieces of literature i have ever read in my life

take a bow writer..

u r just stunning with the words that leaves me dazzled n affected for a quite a long period of time

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

What a beautiful OS. I had a big smile on my face at the end and it turns even bigger on finding out there's more to come! Can't wait for the rest. You've written it beautifully.

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arushi vaishnav

@arushiashvik

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

awesome os

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

this is beautiful!!! i read this last night from phone but i wasn't logged in.. so i went in search of this as soon as i got time now and just wanted to say it was exquisitely written!

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Wow
Beautifully written 👏
Will be waiting for next part 😊

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vibha92

@vibha92

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

it was jst brilliant...
awesome concept...
beautifully written...
waiting for nxt part eagarly...

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

This was an awesome piece I have read on Arnav-Khushi. Almost all the FFs had Khushi to be beautiful and Arnav to be the flawed one. But I loved it the way you have written it here with Khushi being the one with the flaw so as to say and Arnav falling in love with her. Can't wait to read the other parts for this FF.