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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Just perfect!!! truly perfection itself!! your words are in its own lyrical..u make music through simply stringing words together just like the Khushi in your story weaves melodies using her violin..

i love it..the moment of a Arnav who has failed to grasping at trying to understand how to communicate through lip reading has actually learned her language to be with her..share her world..

awww so beautiful!! u make me visualize and feel the story..as if a slow caresses of the light breeze..

such a beautifully sung tale (and i do mean sung, not told) waiting for the next part :)

Edited by princessunara - 12 years ago

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mon95

@mon95

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Omg this is the sweetest story ever i swear! i love ur arnav and khushi!!!😃

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arshina223

@arshina223

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

"Her daughter may not be able to hear but she could produce sounds that were vast and deep as the oceans. Her oceans, where she could with a touch provoke constant waves and lull them into a melancholic semblance"
I love these lines.
Such a beautiful a story written beautifully.
Loved it .
Waiting for the last part.

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Very overwhelming update !

Its heart warming to see the efforts Arnav is taking to reach out to Khushi..its almost like though Khushi is the one with the physical disability its Arnav who is actually having a problem in expressing himself !

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

This is so adorable, so different, look forward to more

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8Lucky88

@8Lucky88

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

that was very very good story...i am so glad you wrote this story..you are an awesome writer and please continue soon with this or with your other works...thanks for the PM

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

That was great!! Eventhough khushi has insecurities... I am glad they dont deter her!!

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Wow
Loved it
Arnav learnt sign language for her
Thanks for the pm :)

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Sakina

@arshi_sunshine

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Fabulous Update...
Am in Love with this Ts...
You have depicted all the Emotions Very Beautifully...
Arnav learned sign language for Khushi...
SO Sweet...
Loved the Update...