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SS88

@SS88

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Adorable. Every bit of it Between Khushi and Amrita, between Arnav and Anjali, and the last bit was just <3. How cute. I saw it happen in my head, and I'd love for something like that to happen on TV, between them :)

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Beautiful how he's taking it forward. What i love is how Khushi is never insecure about her self.

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

can i cry!
am i allowed to!
most definitely after this update i felt something hit me bad...
i usually have these overwhelming feeling
and i did have it again when i read the last line, when i read about what khushi felt!
this man u have portrayed is the most imperfect yet perfect person for khushi!
wow shiz!
im mesmerized by this update!

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prpk525

@prpk525

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Loved it :) the whole update was beautiful :)

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

The second part was beautiful!

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

this story, this concept , its beautiful in its own sense, it grabs you in an trance, its stunning. The characters are pieces of art, they are a beauty in their ownselves. The description of the events is mind boggling, it makes you look at things differently, rides you through a different world, its an unbelievable experience. So beautiful.

love
sonia

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

beautifully update loved it so she can speak a little but is afraid what he would think loved he is trying to learn sign langue and lip reading to fit in her world loved the update beautifully done thanks for the pm

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ArSh23

@ArSh23

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

that was such a beautiful update! I'm so loving the concept of this story. The way you describe Khushi's world and her passion for music is so amazing! I loved the scene between Arnav and Khushi and the last scene was awesome! That is so adorable that Arnav learned sign language to tell her she is beautiful! Great job! Can't wait to read the next part! Thanks for the pm!

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katunkka

@katunkka

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

This is beautiful. Your arnav is beautiful so does your khushi.

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crackerszone

@crackerszone

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Wow!!! The second part of dis series was so beautiful...Arnav and khushi's interaction was written flawlessly..I could almost feel the devined love dey share between dem althought dey mite not be aware yet...I just loved da fact dat u wrote dis part from khushi's POV...after reading da first part I was wondering what was going on in khushi's mind...U explained da minute details of da relationship a sound barren soul can share wid music wid so much serenity...i LOVED it...dis was an awesum update ...U just need to add sum more parts to it so dat we get to know how Arnav n khushi comes to term wid dere feelings...da story deserves a heartwarming climax

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