taarey os: emptyness

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Taarey os : emptyness

Rey sat on his knees,closed his eyes n said three magical words to his beloved to his queen

His one and only love taani

But taaani was not so intrested or not ready for relationship.

Being in relationship with anyone is not a ideal choice according to her.

In her point of vies all this is just a college time crush and attraction.

Such reelationships are not everlasting.

She had taken him only as a best friend of her.

She rejected rey's proposal and directly told him that she is not intrested in him , not intrested in relatioships.

Rey was totally heart broken his heart broke in millions of pieceshe was feeling like someone had crushed his heart like a piece of mirror.

According to rey's point of views he was in true love with taani this was not any attraction this was a true love.

He wanted to be with taani forever.

Wanted to spent his whole life with her, wanted her in his life to share all his happiness and sorrow with her.

He loved her since they were in 12th standard but he never confess his love.

He was afraid of this he was afraid what if taani rejected his proposal. He don't want to lose his best friend he was afraid of losing taani thatwhy he never poured his feelings in front of taani but same happened now.

Rey was riding the car at very high speed remembering how excited he was for this proposal. He was all frustrated this was unbelievable for him that he lose his best friend because of his love .

Rey was deeply engrossed in his thoughts and a car came running from opposite direction and hits the rey's car.

With taani:

She was also in the same sorrow and pain she had lost her best friend

taani's phone rang she saw rey's name flashing

she picked the call

taani: hello'

someone: the owner of this cell is hitted by the car'he is admitted to the hospital..

taani: what '??? Which hospital.

someone: city hospital..

taani cuts the call and rushhed to the hospital..

but she was too late rey was gone from her life

doctor came out from the ICU

taani rushhed to him

taani: what happened doctr what happened to himm'he is OK na.. everything is fine na..

doctor: sorry but its too late

taani broke down in tears remembering dis tragic and worst day of her life after five years also

taani is living her life like an immortal statue after his death

in these five years she realised how close she was with rey.. importance of him in her life.. she came to know that she too love rey a lot but time was passed'..


taani


as all the days she is sitting on the window..

tears are rolling down her cheek.

Remembering her true love and sobbing badly only these lines come in her mind

Tu aja tu aja mujhko meri saja tu suna ja,

Wo ahen han wo assun mere hisse ke mujhko rula ja,

Sapne tere saare jinme mein rehti thi,

Tukde ban ke mere jakhon seene me kar gayi

Hoo mene mere jaana kyun nhi jaana ishq tera dard tera' mena mera jaana akyun nhi jaana ishq tera dard tera'..

Akeli akeli reh gyi bin tere yun akeli

Me tadpun yaa me tarsun ya chali aun me paas tere,

Itni tanhai me zindagi kho gayi baaten karne saari aa rhi hun tujhse hi' haan mene mere jaana ab he jaana ishq tera dard tera.hye mene mere jaana ab he jaana ishq tera dard tera

Tu jo gaya haal ye mera rehta he,dil yeh mera khud se hi tanhaa rehta he

And I feel too lonely thatsa better place than this emptynes..

And I am too lonely lonely thatsa better place than this emptynes..


sorry for mistakes...


Edited by prachiagrawal - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely yr awesome
thanks 4 pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
a very sad and touching os...
i loved it...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_taarey

lovely yr awesome

thanks 4 pm😊


glad dat u liked it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Touching os
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome... it was really emotional...😭 bt u wrote it beautifully specialy the song suits the situation most...luvd it
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A heart touching OS it was emotional but amzing too
Keep writing more stories
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such a heart touching os 😊
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Loved it, dear..
I really really loved it..
It was so sad and very emotional..
I literally had tears in my eyes...
Great work...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its brilliant and very heart touching...and the song suits the situation perfectly...

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