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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#681

I like two things about this story.

Arnav feels remorse after misbehaving with Khushi.

And Khushi doesn't take things lying down.

She gives it back to him, and has told him that she will walk out.

Waiting for omorrow to see what happens next.

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#682

oh just amazing! loved it!!

a well refined version of IPK..in a different more equal footing!! lovely

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#683

Great update NB!

I feel like I need to reserve my judgements and comments for the next part though.

All I feel right now is confusion as to where this is headed, not because of your writing but because of arnav's character. I thought you threw him in the pit last chapter, but little did I know the snakes were yet to come out. He finds himself between a noncompliant wife and a closure seeking girlfriend whom he loves or doesnt (as more time goes..I doubt this rabba-vey wala love, they supposedly shared).

I always like to see khushi with a backbone regardless of the circumstance, and its nice to see this Ahmedabad thing is set in stone.

Thank you for giving us two updates =)

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#684

From the start of this story i had been wondering how you will place Khushi here .. will she be the submissive kind or will she stand her ground and give back as she gets... knowing what ever little i know of you i was banking on the latter !😆

And this has to be my fav chapter so far ... i am so glad Khushi put Arnav in his place for his actions!

I was literally cheering for her all the way !

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#685

Great story. Looking forward to reading more. I'm loving this strong Khushi.

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#686

Kushi darling..you are right to put your foot down and state that you will not be a gudiya for Arnav to play are he pleases and then throw her aside when he doesn't want her. No half measure...it's all or nothing. I'm glad Kushi said it like it is.

Arnav is remorseful...and I can understand he never meant to say or do what he did...but then again he did and there's no excuse for it. And from Kushi's point of view she has no Reno to put up with this.

Now that Lavanya has put a definite lid on things...I hope Arnav finds it in himself to get his life back on track.He does not hate Kushi...so there is room for acceptance and love to bloom.

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689471

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#687

😃 😃 I'm smiling because I loved this update for a few reasons.😃😃

1. Khushi

2. Khushi

3. Khushi

4. Khushi

Anyway, who the hell does Arnav think he is? He dun lost his mind.

Why does it always have to be about him. He wants forgiveness and she must listen and acknowledge him, why because he said so. K I hate this pathetic guy more and more with every update.

Such a joke he is and I'm so glad that Lavanya has realized there is no future in this for her.

Look at what this punk want to do now..., runaway when he should actually try to fix and salvage wha'st worth fixing and salvaging. As they say;... how you make your bed, that's how you'll lay in it. Arnav alone is responsible for the situation he's in right.

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Rekha

@Caskett

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#688

loved Khushi in your update.she made it clear to him that she wont entertain his such erratic behavior.way to go khushi!

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#689

ooo what a brilliant turn of events in the last 2 updates

Damn Arnav made her feel 'unwanted' that's gotta hurt but Khushi got herself together and i loved what she said to Arnav!!

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christmas

@christmas

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#690

i pity this arnav. for no one should ever be in a place he is in. what he did to khushi was not right. and i am glad that you've created khushi as not a push over or unnecessarily saintly. this helplessness and lost, falling apart emotions that you create in arnav are so tangible and raw. i find myself sympathizing with him most out of all. for yes khushi was just as helpless and has lost just as much...but looking at the big picture she is still getting what she had wanted. sure not her ideal marriage, but for her the idea still stands that there could be another chance at that for her. in current loss and gain she has come out better than arnav..continue soon!