Chasing Dreams (5) CHP31A PG128 New THD link Pg146 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Recreation of holi...was awesome. Loved it so much when the day end with his confession ...awww lovely.

Its time for 🥳


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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Mind blowing chapter
Loved it
Omg arnav confessed his love to her
Awww that was so sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
What a lovely update <3 It was one of those "feel good updates" lol Their relationship has really grown by leaps and bounds and I just absolutely loved Arnav's confession at the end (loved Khushi's cute bhang-induced one too lol)
I am really looking forward to how their relationship grows after this confession :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
I loved your adaptation of Holi, and Arnav's confession of love...I'm also glad that he's starting to question himself whether he's taking her for granted.

Yes, Khushi has made a pledge to the man, and has confirmed for him that she's not going to hold back for commitment from him...but he should also realize that it's probably one of her dreams to get married, have a family, etc. I know he has never lied to her about her intentions, but he should be willing to change a little and compromise his beliefs, just as she has done for him.

Looking forward to Khushi's reaction in the next update, and what comes next for them!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
He said it! *happy dance*

Oh, and the song goes bee-yoo-tee-fully with it. Perfect.

The growth in Khushi's character has been remarkable, and Arnav is feeling warm and gooey for the first time in life :P

But, but, but, what made me the happiest soul was Nani's warning to Arnav - that he shouldn't take Khushi for granted. High time someone pointed that out! I love Nani. Bas!

Whattey louvely update! Gabbar's romantic bone is quite happy and fluffy, eh ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
How can Arnav not realise what an Indian girl aspires for when she is in love with a guy?
He can't say he loves her and just want to live with her without marriage.
Nani is a sweetheart in not wanting to interfere but giving him the right advice.

The holi scene was beautiful and full of fun.
I could imagine wkhushi dancing uninhibitedly after having drunk bhaang.

Arnav sleeping with Khushi in his arms was very sweet.
And the I love You in the end was the highlight of the update.

Its sad that after having given so much love and affection, Khushi will be disillusioned and have to go for an abortion.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Finally I managed to caught up with latest update, I found this amazing FF a while ago and started reading it and did't want to take a break at all. It's written really well the way you have evolved the characters from the way they were in the earlier chapters to now, they have made a huge progress especially Arnav and Khushi too have reached the new level of maturity.
I Absolutly love the way you are taking this 'living together 'issue
between two people coming from different class ,status and beliefs and there is still this story a feel has a very long way to go to deal with all the other issues Khushi will be facing from the society and her parents and friends as she is from a middle class and they do not recognise any relation between a man and woman other than marriage. You have done a brilliant job I just cant wait to read more and more and I really hope this story sees many threads.
Love the simple way Arnav has said 'I love You' to Khushi and i cant wait to read about khushi's reaction in the next chapter. The Holi scenes were absolutely beautiful it had such feel good about them.
Nani is such a nice and loving character and also she is being so understanding towards Khushi and Arnav's relation.
I really have enjoyed this fabulous story you have written and will also now go off to read your other new story as well I am sure that one is as beautiful and amazing as this one.
Would you please consider to add me to your PM list, if you can't don't worry I will just bookmark and catch the updates that way.
I would like to thank you for taking the valuable time out and write the wonderful stuff for us.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
aaaww!he confessed!


sorry no long comment as have to finish univ. assignment...nxt time!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
agree with nani
find arnav selfish..he has given up nothing so far..he is getting his cake etc
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a holi for Khushi...😉😆

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