Smitar's: Finding Khushi #9 Link to #10 on Pg 1

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Swetha Jangala

@swethaj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

awww...its such an awesome update.!!!!! loved it to the core..!!!

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Sarah

@devilindisguise

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

Haha lisaji
lv d chap

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sujata5

@sujata5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Such a lovely and beautiful update Smita...You have an amazing gift of putting feelings on the paper...

Loved the confession of Arnav and the misunderstanding of Khushi.. a Very simple soul who is unused to so much happiness in her life!!!

Loved Arnav's desperation to marry Khushi and keep her tied to him forever .. with Love and Happiness!!!!

Simply an amazing update ... waiting eagerly for more...

Thanks for the PMs Rahmi... now the wait begins for your brilliant work...

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Pari

@ammavedu80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

Nice update
I liked this one, very peaceful to imagine the soundly sorroundings

Arnav stood on the veranda, looking out at the street, waiting for Khushi. It was evening. Children were playing on the street. Women were collecting water at the hand pump. Happy Singh and his men were working in the garage. Channawala and chudiwala were selling their wares, calling out to the crowd. Men and women were going to and coming from the temple nearby. He could hear the temple bells and pigeons cooing. He drew in a deep breath.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Such a beautiful, sweet band tender moment, where both speak from the heart...

I felt for Khushi when she let Arnav have his freedom, knowing she doesn't expect this happiness to last...

I have also loved the past few chapters with Anamika and Ganesh: they love each other so much! The way she has become comfortable touching him and with him touching her...is beautiful.

Love this gentle, sweet story Smita. Once again I find myself reading your work and just appreciating the beauty...