TR SS: CONVOLUTED (Completed) - Page 7

sweet update i luv d frndshp bond ..i luv d way u write extremely beautiful...taani n swayam 's bond ws nicely written..n taarey meet ws simply perfect ..intresting ff excited to read more 😃

n ya i luv d nick names titli n kiki 😆 n thnks fr clearing our doubts :-)

I am in love with this story...it is so different and I loved the first part

Wonderful update, aww Taani is the pampered princess lol
Love her interaction and bonding with Swayam and as always he.was the perfect gentle unlike someone else 😛
The gang welcoming Taani was so sweet of them. Hmm Taarey first meeting was awesome lol. Love the way Taani admire Rey lol. Cute and sexy guy of course we will stare lol
I love the entire chapter, and u wrote it so beautifully. U have impeccable writing skills plz continue soon

D Swa mtng up wit Tani & d ease of hr rapport she began to share wit gang ws phenomenal.Tani is a BB plyr,grt! Awe,Tani admiring Rey's perfct handsome avtar instead of pyng atentin to wt d mes she did,lolz.TR mtng wr Rey bng rude to hr is prety gd.

Originally posted by: miss_neha

Awesome update, loved how friendly swayam was loll!! N y do I have a feeling that guy is rey loll

Thanks neha!
Your feels are very much right! 😉

Originally posted by: TaareyFan23

wow, Taani easily fit into the gang, so happy with that. and Swayam was so sweet, kinda weird not seeing him as bhai but nonetheless still sweet and i have a feeling that kadoos was Rey.

Update soon !

Trust me it was very hard to stop myself from writing the word 'bhai' but I had to.
Anyway, glad you liked it!
Thank you for the comment!

Originally posted by: ..dinu..

nice updates! luvd taarey's meetin n taani's family..sweet ppl😳 cont soon..if u r sending pm's for updates pm me too plz😊

Thank you!
Surely will add you to my list! 😳

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

Oh wow! This was like totally amazing, di! Don't worry, i understand that you need to show the love blooming between TR. That is what happens in real, right? So.. Yeah! And about the update, my god! That was completely amazing! Haye! Swayam! <3 I so love this guy! I hope he turns out to be Taani's BFF in the future! And I am so glad to see the gang getting along so well with Taani. Its feels great to see Taani with FRIENDS! And TR first meet! Wow! Taani was admiring Rey's ass?! 😲 Rofl! That was hilarious! And then when you said he took his shirt of then I was like Oh my god! But then the thingy in bracket made me laugh at myself! In short, an amazing amazing update de! Please keep updating fast fast.. Can't wait to read more!

You know what Shreya?!
I don't know if you will read this comment or not but I LOVE your comments!
I am not going to lie, they make my day! 🤗
Thank you soo sooo soo much! 😳

To answer a few of your points...

1) TR love will bloom slowly...not immediate love...and thank you for understanding that
2) Swayam will be the one understanding Taani, just like how he understands Rey but I will also include alot of the other gang members too
3) LOL...yes ASS! 😆 What can I do I am still a teenage fangirl 😆
4) 🤣 Oh yeah! the T-shirt part. Actually I was planning to make him shirtless but I didn't want my poor Taani to faint there 😉😆

Originally posted by: zoharocks

awesome update...so excited for rey...update soon...please

Thanks dear!
Will surely give you Rey for next time!