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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dii! I truly can't believe that this amazing SS has come to an end!! Beautiful journey it has been for me.. Seriously!!

Lemme tell you about the last chapter and epilogue first..
My My!! I loved Sharon-Rey, Sharon-Rey-Swayam, and Swayam-Rey part!! 😆 They were funny!! And Thanks to god that Rey came to know about the truth!! Paagal idiot hai woh!! Donkey kahin ka!! 😡 Bandar, bloody buffoon, ooloo ka pattha and what not he is!! 😡 Taani ko rulaya uss idiot ne!! 😡

Acha now anger aside, dekha jaye toh Rey ki bhi galti nahi thi.. Usse kuch pata hi nahi tha.. and Misunderstanding ho gayi! He thought that Taani likes Armaan coz she told him that he likes Armaan and then after the performance when Rey wanted to be with Taani, He saw her hugging Arman! Huh! But acha hai ki confusion door ho gayi... Thanks to Swayam! 😛 😆

Actually.. Misunderstanding have always been a part of TaaRey in real too! Hasn't it? Har point pe kitni misunderstanding hui.. But it only made their bond, their love stronger!! Yahan bhi wahi hua! And I so love this!! 😳

And My My.. It was all from Rey's POV! I so wanted that!! Like really! 😆 Haye!! Acha now coming back.. 😆

I loved it how Rey wanted to hugg Taani when He saw her sobbing! 😳 and then he hit her with the basket ball just like what had happened a few months back! 😆 I loved the way how Rey apologized.. I loved the way how Taani yelled at him.. I loved the way how Taani apologized and then Rey wiped her tears! *Nostalgic*

And then the part after that, Taani can be naughty haan! 😉 😆 ☺️ Taani kissed his cheek ☺️Dil Ibadat yaad aa gaya yaar! ☺️ and then humara Rey bhi kam toh hai nahi.. 😆 Loved the way he grabbed her waist.. I always love it when he does that ☺️ I could so very well imagine it.. The kiss.. The everything ☺️ and Rey felt that kissing her was amazing ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ uff me kitna blushing 🤣

So..." Rey began but I cut him off.

"So...Mr. Reyansh Singhania do you want to be my boyfriend?" I ask.

He makes a puppy dog sad face and whines, "It's not fair Taani! I wanted to ask you out! Why do you have to be so abnormal...I'm the guy here not you...who does this!?"

I laugh, "I do!"

"Promise me if we get married you aren't going to propose!" He says in a childish tone.


This part, I was seriously like.. Awww!! 😳

The epilogue.. Gosh I have no words!! Ansh.. their baby boy They were married

"Hmm...ek toh when I was proposing you." He said and I giggled.

"We were in New York for Christmas...and it was freezing! I just wanted to get it done and over with so I could go inside and sit wrapped in a blanket. But you just kept on stuttering for a good fifteen minutes and I couldn't take it. So I just proposed instead...don't blame me."

"It wasn't that cold! And you promised me that you wouldn't propose!" He whines.


This part this part.. So so so cute they are!!

Taani's mom 🤣 kya kya questions poochti hai 🤣 bechara Rey 🤣 I so pity him 🤣 How are u in bed? 🤣 bwwaahahhahahahah i cant stop laughing 🤣

Taani ghodi pe chadhi thi 😲 🤣 🤣 hahahhahahaha 🤣 and this part? 🤣

"Psshhh...my ass unisex. It's good that the gang didn't listen to you. Instead of Swayam naming his son Arsh, it would have been Ranchoddas or something. And Vicky's twins would be named Muna and Muni instead of Abha and Adi. Rinni would have ended up with Pandeyji instead of Vivaan and Sim would have to deal with Gagan instead of Kisha. Bharat wouldn't have even been able to pronounce Beyonce. Oh and how can I forget our own child...he would have ended up being named something like Funsukh Wangdu or something." I finish my rant and Rey looks flabbergasted.

"HEY! I was just going through a phase okay! I mean Muni and Muna badnaam came out during Dabaang 4 and I loved Salman Khan for his dance so Pandeyji was also my favourite name. Then Gagan was my favourite Punjabi singer and Beyonce was my girl celebrity crush. But, you can't blame me that Aamir Khan decided to release 3-Idiots 2 when Ansh and Arsh were about to be born. They weren't bad names...you should be glad I didn't suggest Virus."


Mummy koi bachao meko🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

"We love you too baby," Rey tells Ansh while pulling him away from my ear.

This particular line dii.. Gives me such blissful feeling of their happy family life! i so love this! Its awesome nahi? Its really an awesome feeling to see ur parents in love with each other.. Like seriously! Life is so happy when its like this..

Trust me dii.. This SS has been one of my favorites!! and one of the best TR SS's around! Truly!! And hats off to you and your writing skills dii.. I truly adore the way you write!! everytime, every single time I could imagine each and every thing!!

choti se chhoti cheeze..Rey ka Taani ko tsunami bulana.. Mr.khadoos Singhania.. i simply adore EVERYTHING that happened in this SS! hats off dii!

taani's POV.. Just like in the show.. Although this Taani was different from what she was in the show.. I could connect to her so well! So Freakin well!

Thankyou so much for giving us this SS!maine aapko bahut pareshaan kiya hai na really very sorry about that dii.. kya karu.. mai hu hi paagal and haan i want you to write more writing soon okay?c oz I really dont want to keep you alone for a long time na.. U see I love you so much! 😈 🤣 U must bhi thinking of running away right now 🤣

Aree nahi nahi kahan bhaage jaa rahe ho.. meri pappi nahi leni? 😲 🤣 🤣 acha ruko.. haan.. toh ek baat kaan khol kar sunn lo.. mujhe jaldi se jaldi.. jab aap free ho jao.. uske baad ek naya OS ya kuch bhi writing chahiye okay? 🤣 and yeh lo.. iss awesome SS ke liye yeh pappi
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But on a serious note dii, Trust me, I would never get bored even after reading this SS again n again n again! Love you dii for writing this!! Thankyou so very much! <3 Muahh!! :*
Edited by Shivangi_Taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!!!
loved rey's shock first
when swayam said she doesnt like armaan
and then taarey convo!!! haaye...
taani proposed rey!!!
and hehehe... bichaara he dint get the chance to do it even for marriage...
and taani omg, she was on ghodi!!!
loved taani's mom's question, even i was shocked, later even i was smiling!
rahi baat after 8 years!
they r taarey... chahe toh bhi ek doosre ko nahi chodd saqte...
loved the whole scene and all the names!
on the whole the whole ss was a mindblowing one...
i shud say ty for ending it so purely...
and not kheenching it like my ss!
love u lots and may u write more and more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its totally awesome yr!!!
I loved it to the core...!!!
U did a fantastic job man!!!
Seriously I loved there confession part a lot!!!
And that epilogue was so cute!!!
Over all I loved this whole SS a lot!!!
Hope u'll write more works like this😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
i just loved it
just wow...
the confession part was the bestest part of this update
i will seriously miss it


hpoe u write more
u did a great job man...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -3raser-

NOTE:


So... this is it.
Currently, this is all I can write. I am sorry that I couldn't give you all many more TR moments. Though I could always write an OS when I feel like it.
I hope you all enjoyed this SS and liked it. It was unconventional and you all took the effort to read it so thank you. I did not want to put the epilogue and the last chapter everything together but I don't know when I would get the time. So, I just put it up instead of making you all wait.

Am I writing anything more? Nope...not anytime soon. Unless I really need to pen something down.

Do I have other work written? Yes, I do have many other OS's written...feel free to check them out.

Why am I ending this? Why can't I just continue? Because I don't want to chop it up and make it like a Ekta Kapoor serial 😆. Like they say...good things come to an end...well hoping this was good.



Thank you everyone who has supported this SS and pushed me to write a new chapter each day. Every comment and every LIKE is extremely appreciated because I know how much you all spent your time on this SS to read and respond.
I am sorry for not replying to previous comments...have a lot of work currently and I just can't cope with it all. Also, this spamming message annoys me each time, though I'm glad I can pm 50 people now. Much less work.

Thank you all once again and farewell! 🤗

beautifffully written ss...lil jealous also
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow tht was fab i luv shareyam
convo n thn taarey confession was
diff n thn bst taarey recalling thr
movement n thr cute son thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was beautifully written👏
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
tht was a super cute confession n lovely ending...enjoyed a lot<3 gng to miss this ss..luvd it a lot dr<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear 🤗
I just read the whole SS 😃
N Believe me it is one of the best short story I have ever read 👍🏼
The way they met 😳
Fighting 😆
Rey's trusting Taani 😳
Kriya's secret out 😭
Armaan n the chaos created 😳
Well everything was perfect 😳
But the cherry on the cake was SwaRon scene n TaaRey's extraordinary confession 😳
Hayee the kissed again ☺️
I am regreting for not reading it before 😔
But der aye durust aye 😊
You have really inspired me throughout 😊
Thank yu so much 🤗
Looking forward for some more writings from you 😃
With lots of Love:
Ale_TaaRey ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
You're right, all good things must come to an end. It's great that you continued it and finished it. It was an amazing story to read and you're an amazing writer!

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