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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely update & thanks for the PM 😊

It was thoughtful of Nani to speak to Arnav telling him that he needed to spend some time for his wife

Arnav getting flashes of the past when he saw Khushi dancing like a kid amongst 3 children & enjoying the adorable sight, raising his voice (internally chuckling within himself) at which Khushi & the kids got startled was well framed 😉

Boo – cute name……….liked the fact that u brought in Aman's son into picture

Khushboo singing "aaj mausam hai suhana……….." at which Arshi shared a smile was a beautiful scene 😃

Arnav staying awake to have a word with his wife about the time they spend with each other which actually seemed like none, carrying the already sleeping beauty to bed without waking her as he knew that she was exhausted after the day's work and cuddling with her after some work was well written showing how much he cares for her putting his need to discuss with her behind

Arnav fuming over Anji's interrupting phone call chiding her inwardly that she had some 'long distance antenna that detected his rabba ve time' always was funny……poor Arnav 😆 😆 😆

Khushi upset about not taking the kids along with them for the vacation, Arnav trying to make his wife understand that he wished to spend some quality time with her breaking the routine schedule of work where they hardly get any time for themselves was lovely

Awesome….something is cooking in Arnav's mind……..hmmm……..love to read more

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Posted: 12 years ago
So ASR & KKGSR are too busy for their personal life ... Khushi & Arnav love their family alot but is too busy to make time for themselves now, so with them trap on a island is gonna have a lot of gutter stuff from them ...☺️ Ok so am excited and waiting for the updates ... Thanks so much for PMs ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow loved the response to ch 1😳

Special mention to this comment by rulama🤗--she went over all the points so well:

Originally posted by: rulama

Loved this update TINA. You know why? It is filled with a lot of funny things!!

You have introduced a ZP? What does it stand for?? Zany Prakash! Where is AP? So there are 26 siblings??? Poor Mommy P! or is it polygamy???!!!

Nani has awkened Arnav that he needs to spend time with Khushi alone! So Arnav has resorted to earplugs for silence!!

So the music was coming from the playroom with Khushi dancing along with the kids! Two kids Arhaan and Khushboo! And Rohan is Aman's son. Who is Aman's wife? So Arhaan is a blend of Arnav and Khushi and Khusboo a replica of Khushi! So Khushi has dominant genes??

"Why is the music so loud?" he interrupted smoothly.

He has changed! He didn't barge in and shout out! How lovely! And broke Khushi's fall! What a trip down the memory lane!

This is classy TINA, Rub away!!! and the parents mistake it as rabbave and hit their heads!!! Only you can come up with such iconic moments with a fitting repartee!

The daughter is no less she is her mother's replica to sing the ditty, "Aaj mausam hai suhana, chocolates and daddy ka hai zamana," and what about what the? what the? what the?😉

Arnav promising Khushi of good times later.😉

The bath tub sleep was also cute and the timely invite helps him to formulate his plan! But the classic was the next day! Anjali is like Vetal of Vikram and Vetal stories! Even from Lucknow she has the uncanny knack of interrupting their romantic moments! She takes the cake for the sense of timing!

Her indignation at going alone with him leaving out the family is expected knowing her character! She had not wished to leave her family out when they had talked about going to a movie! Now wont she be angry to leave her children!! But our Bitwa has something up his sleeve!

He is using his Bramhastra? The most powerful weapon, Buaji?

Loved the update and you have created your own icnic moments of the iconic moments in IPKKND!

Henceforth whenever I come across, rabbave, rub away, HP, ZP, will always play in my mind!

Had a hearty laugh TINA! Loved it to bits! Thanks a lot for giving such wonderful moments.😆


ZP? haha maybe z for zorro?😎


TEASER:

"Mummy is not angry," broke in Arnav, a teasing smile on his lips. "She's just a bit.. stubborn."

Khushi's mouth dropped open. Her gaze narrowed at him.

As lunch finished, she whispered furiously to him: "I am not going with you to any beach. So forget all about the bikinis."

Arnav didn't look the slightest bit perturbed by that declaration. "Yes, you will, Mrs. Raizada. Start packing."

And then before she could argue, as if on cue, the doorbell rang.


Ch 2 Goodbyes Coming next time (with DH update)!😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yippee!!! DH update coming up
Wow u seemed to be in the mood for quick updates as we got one for SP, a teaser for SI and DH update
Thanx a lot eagerly waiting for the update
Pls continue soon
Thanx
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Posted: 12 years ago
get ready mrs n we too r ready
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the teaser and the teasing going on. Waiting for the update.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the teaser
Arnav's reinforcement Buaji is here to make Khushi go with him
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice teaser ,can't wait to read the chapter..thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous teaser, I think buaji is here :) And DH and SI coming up next, you definitely ROCK Tina 'Muah'
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting teaser..😆do update soon plzzz dnt tease lyk dis wid teader only .. 😔
Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago

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