#2 Virman ff- Tumse Hai Zindagi *LAST UPDATE* Pg.74

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Just superb...
Liked it..
Like virmaan nd maanvi's antics too..
Continue soon this time...
Nd ur other story also..
Plz...
Awesome one...

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Btw.. 2nd story kab update dogi?

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rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Hwww kitna chhotu sa tha...but never mind diya yahi badi bat he...dhnya bhag hamare...:p :p :p

virman romantice scene was damn cute...o o so virat planning to train manvi...not bad idea...but hw that poor soul learn all this in short span of time...any ways sarahji pls show some mercy on us n updt next chappi asap...

Aur ek bat nahi pachti ne tere pet me...waise bhi tuze koi nomination nahi dene wali...ek special jury award dungi apani taraf se 'late latif' wala...lolzzz...chal bye scary night, bad dreams...*run*

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

thank u sooo mcuh sara for updating was dying to read it

was a short one but loved it becaz i love this story

virat's silent treatment k bad manvi is on a right way lol

virman scene was cute and romantic :-p

and CBI trainings hun!!!! sounds cool

update asap plz

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Wohooo manvi will be a CBI officer / will train for it yay!!! Can't wait to see strict virat as a trainer ^___^ n ahem ahem bed room scene "yeh aap kya karrahai ho??? Tumhe samjharaha hu Jo kararaha hu... Baki ki DETAILS baad mei " ROFLOLOl u r funny.. But it was cute scene! Liked the update ^___^ waiting for the promo

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Nice Update..~!!! Maanvi is such a sweetheart...Seriously she can bring in life in lifless situation as well...Virat will teach her self defence,,which is nice on his part..but I hope he keeps his akdu behavior aside while training her...Waiting fr next Sara...~!!!!

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

that was kinda short but it was awesome 😃
virat ka silent treatment ne finally manvi ke diamg mein kuch ghusa toh diya😛
i cannt believe manvi itni der chup kese reh gayi ab toh yakeen ho gaya ke virat kuch bhi kar sakta hai 😆
and gusse mein bhi usse khana khilana nai bhoola how sweet 😊
and virman romance hayee mein mar jawan 😉
virat thodi aur detail mein bata dete😉
woww manvi ko training wowww gonna be fun 😆

Manvi : yeh kya hai ?

Virat : Divorce papers !! karogi sign ?
lol 😆 loved the sarcastic dialogue of virat...😆
update next part soon 😊

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shonaten

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Short but nyc dear
continue soon

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Meera Chaudhuri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Superb update!! 👏👏 So Virat is going to teach her self-defence.. Nice 😊.. Sounds fun too.. Manvi is too cute and innocent 😛.. Loved her antics.. Virat's silent treatment made her all confused and upset.. Poor girl! She prefers khadoos Virat over silent Virat! 😆.. Virman romance was superb 😳.. Kash Virat thoda aur detail mein samjha deta 😉😳.. Loved the update ❤️.. Please continue soon.. Thank you for the pm in advance.. Take care 😊