Through The Looking Glass| ArHi | Ch11Pg1 (14/08) - Page 63

oh god, Shyam sure had a terrible past. You have jsut given us a glimpse of what happens to some of criminals who have had a horrid childhood / teenage experiences...

Mamu jaan really scares me.. 😒

Loved it.
Soo happy that arnav introduced kushi as his would be wife at least this will hopefully make the other men lay off her knowing shes with arnav.

Okay now I'm shit scared...mammu Jaan is not thinking what I'm thinking. To be honest, is shyam's past really that far off from reality? I know these type of things exist today so that's why it was harder to digest the past of Shyam. I have a feeling that their are many kids in this world that have walked into a situation that has absolutely crushed them

It's so eerie, I actually don't mind the pace because its building up beautifully and it keeps us on our toes. The road to the end is not going to be smooth or easy

One thing that has become clear to me is that Shyam is not going to go against Mamu Jaan. Even if he has an intense connection to Arnav, I feel like Mamu Jaan has some kind of a hold on him that he won't let go...as it is, he writes the rules of the games and he dictates how the game is played.

I wonder if Arnav's decision to speak of Khushi as his fiance will make Mamu Jaan act worst towards them or better...it will be interesting to find out.

This is probably one of the first stories where I have felt bad for Shyam...can't even imagine walking home to find dead parents. If they were such simple people, I wonder why they needed to be killed...

I'm curious to find out.

By the way, I will be slightly inactive for the next few weeks, and will have to catch up with new chapters after my break, that is if you decide to continue with the story.

Originally posted by: A_BA

One thing that has become clear to me is that Shyam is not going to go against Mamu Jaan. Even if he has an intense connection to Arnav, I feel like Mamu Jaan has some kind of a hold on him that he won't let go...as it is, he writes the rules of the games and he dictates how the game is played.

I wonder if Arnav's decision to speak of Khushi as his fiance will make Mamu Jaan act worst towards them or better...it will be interesting to find out.

This is probably one of the first stories where I have felt bad for Shyam...can't even imagine walking home to find dead parents. If they were such simple people, I wonder why they needed to be killed...

I'm curious to find out.

By the way, I will be slightly inactive for the next few weeks, and will have to catch up with new chapters after my break, that is if you decide to continue with the story.

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Thank You for your comment! :)

Shall reply in detail later but about the part about continuation of this story - depends on you, readers, that. I said everything I had to in the note. :)

I just hope all these silent readers take some time out and share their feedback...I really enjoy reading your story and it's so well written...it definitely should get more comments and feedback!

i really loved the start of update but where u took it first i thought it about arnav but its shyam...he had terrified past...i don't think he is going to against his mamu jaan