THE NIGHT WITH RED MOON

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OK peeps I am here with a OS'..Sorry in advance for grammatical mistakes Don't consider them as I wrote this OS without considering''A little love story with a great happy ending

IMP* Warning: Read only if you can mange to handle shocks''



THE NIGHT WITH RED MOON

It has been six month'..six month without him, six month without breathing him in''His touch, His love, His gaze. I still remember the day when I first saw him, nani has introduced me to him, and he has greeted me so politely.

I always used to wander around RM and end up colliding with him. First he used to glare at me but soon he started smiling at me''.

Oh why!!!! Then why did he leave me. He confessed he loves me'..and he knows I love him too'.I can't say that but he can reads my eyes'.always.

Then why he didn't support me when I needed him the most. How he can forget the promises, the night of togetherness.

I gave my every thing to him'..my soul, my trust, my virtue but still he didn't trust me enough.

Destiny!!!!! It was in my destiny. I can't have him ever.

What didn't I do for him? I tolerated the torture, insults, words of pity everything! just for him and only him!

I can't speak as I don't know to speak.

And today under this dark sky with a strange reddish moon'..I am all alone. Alone on streets'.wandering in parks''just looking at grasses. Because I don't feel like eating them. I am not hungry.

Oh why shyam??? Why???? Why did you do this to me? Just because I am a goat'' {Gotcha: D}

Where should I go with your unborn baby? Now hari prakash will also reject me''now who can take a defected piece.

Khushiji you are so lucky'..you got your Arnavji'..

Hey khushi's devi maiya please give me back my hari prakash

I promise I will be loyal to him'.. *Sob*

"Laxmi ji*'..I looked back {what the!!!!!}

"Yes!! Laxmi your hari prakash is here to take you, now we all know about that snakewa'.lets forget the past'..I will give our relation a name''.Main doonga iss pyaar ko namm"

"meeehhh"

"I love you too laxmi"

And they live happily''forever


love

KBS


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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣nice
Edited by nishi22 - 12 years ago
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phew!!! glad u like it😃
I am biting my nails,,,,😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HP-Laxmi My all time favorite Jodi's OS..
It was hilarious..
I really liked it..
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Originally posted by: Humayra

HP-Laxmi My all time favorite Jodi's OS..

It was hilarious..
I really liked it..


thank you so much😃
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lol its hilarious monologue of laxmi.i thought of kushi at first..
loved ur os.
thanks for pm
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Originally posted by: sanluvug

lol its hilarious monologue of laxmi.i thought of kushi at first..
loved ur os.
thanks for pm



thnx for liking it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Speechless...


Lols..truely hilarious...unborn child,
Shyam , laxmi , hp...
Tooo goood...loved it..
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cant stop laughing

truly unexpected

good one my friend
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😳 thnx

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