~ Pain ~ A TaaRey OS - Page 5

Originally posted by: taareylove

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it's awesome shreya loved it so much

but i expected happy ending but you are right pain is the second name of love witout pain love is incomplete ...

loved it so much

Thank you so much, di! 😃

Originally posted by: angelitha98

Shreya I don't know what to say...it was so sad yet beautiful...mind blowing ...I loved it too much...😊

Thanks a lot, Angel! 😳

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

OMG! Shreya, Do you really think that we will throw jootas and tomatoes at you for this wonderful piece of work...

Hahaha! No ways.. Let those Jootas and Tomatoes go to hell or any where else...I don't care...

But, Really dear.. It was written really very beautifully...

Amazing work done, once again...

At first, Rey's confusion about his feelings for Taani...

You expressed it really very well...

And, then his realisation...

Hats off to you for writing this...

Even I could feel his pain...

Though he was broken from inside...

He was happy for his Friend or no no, His Love, His life...

I so so loved this line of Rey

"Apne boy-friend ke kaaran mujhe bhoolna mat. Matlab, main toh tera best friend hoon na? Tu mujhe uske kaaram kabhi ignore mat karna."

I could really feel his helplessness...

He felt so complete when Taani hugged him...

Even, I wished that they could remain like that forever and ever...

I am really really feeling very bad for him...

I loved the last lines of this OS too..

He will have to live with this pain forever...

And, he cannot fall in love again because he will not find another Taani...

Excellent work, dear...

Loved it to the core...

Thank you so so so so so much, di. Your comment is the longest one and I totally LOVED reading it! Thank you so much.

PS: Do note mera bandar in your comment.. 😃 😆

Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

Aww it was so cute actually it was little emotional but I luved it

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: NidhiTaaRey

luved it...

I am glad. Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: ShivThak23

Nice

Thank you, di.. 😳

Originally posted by: raddhi

u just nailed it yaar

it was out of dis world

n yeah u mad eme cry yaar

thanks for PM

Thanks a lot for the comment! 😃

Originally posted by: hima_taarey

SIMPLY LOVED IT...

BT I WISH KI AGAR... SACH ME REY CONFESS KR DETA TOH!!!

HAAYE!!!

Hehe! Thank you so much for the comment..

Originally posted by: Akanksha297

woooww..awesome..!!

cnitnue soon

Thanks a lot. But, *sigh* This is just a one-shot..

Originally posted by: -upama-

Ah, I loved it. Keep writing more.

Thank you! 😃