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tareyfan

@tareyfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

amazing yaar 👏👏 beautifully written ⭐️⭐️⭐️ n jst out of d world luvd it to d core❤️ n specially wen rey said " Apne boy-friend ke kaaran mujhe bhoolna mat. Matlab, main toh tera best friend hoon na? Tu mujhe uske kaaram kabhi ignore mat karna." 😭😭 i was like aww rey really loves hr a lot ...

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Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

awesome stry...

till d end i ws praying for a happy ending.

bt it dint happen n i really felt that pain...

beautifully writtn...

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Mehek Asaria

@Sweet.Sarcastic

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

hurting but mind blowing..
nailed it well..
keep writing

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anju101

@anju101

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Aww poor Rey! Very well written! Loved it <3

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Ishani

@.StarDust.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awww..Poor Rey!

Beautifully written..

Amazing!!

You really described them in beautiful manner..

Loved it a lot..

Keep writing! 😳

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Tahira-2013

@Tahira-2013

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

WOOOW AMAZING OD DEAR
IT WAS SAD ENDING BUT STILL SOO BEAUTIFULL

GREAT OS

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asha rani.B.S

@Asha_Tacker

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Awe,Dis ws a cute pain! TaaRey r BFFs,nice.Is Ansh ka bachha toh Rey ka dil tod diya.Well,He's bng hpy fr her.It ws really cool!

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priya

@lovelypriya

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

wow it was mindblowing i really liked it the way u presented the os n pain of love was superb...i would relly imagine the sceens happening n thanks for the pm n i really liked this lines...

"Apne boy-friend ke kaaran mujhe bhoolna mat. Matlab, main toh tera best friend hoon na? Tu mujhe uske kaaram kabhi ignore mat karna."

they were super as usuall really a gud one dear...

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Vinitha nair

@viniVDlover

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

superb os dear
loved it
taarey r bff😛
rey was sooo sweet
he is such a sweet heart dear
amazing work by u
awsm dear
write more n more
thanks for the pm n this mindblowing os

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dh19

@dh19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

nice and emotional
bichara rey

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