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im sooo sorry
i took so long to read this... but i wasnt on IF for a while bcos of health problems
aur phir jab main online aayi toh main pms check nahi ki
aur scrap ko dekha bhi nahi... that is if u send a scrap... i dont remember seeing one 😕
anyways im so sorry i took so long but i'll comment big to make up for it

romantic update... really... cant wait i hope that there's viha in this too..
knowing u there is probably really cute viha scenes 😉

awww swayam in protective bhai mode... i know i say this a LOT but i love this avatar of his
in fact in all ur stories there are always protective brothers
thats what makes me love ur stories so much

ahhh... VIHA SCENE ALREADY!!!! OK I NEED TO BREATHE...
ohh haha main toh bhul gayi ki vicky last chapter mein drunk tha 😆
awww... kya line tha... seriously superb dialogue
tune likha yar kissi movie se copy ki 😆
viha r super cute yaar... i hope they get together on the show like this too
awwwiee super cute pic of arlisha... i remember those days 😳
😭 vicky loves her so much,,,, why cant she see that... why doesnt she believe him!!!

haha kabhi taani ko ice-cream chahiye toh kabhi beach... bilkul bacchi hai yeh ladki 😛
another really cute scene... this chapter is full of adorable scenes
aur swayam phir se bhai avatar mein chala gaya 😆
hehe Nil Amar and Simmi scene is awesome n hilarious...
i like how u gave everyone space in the chapter... except swaron of course
hehe nimmi n llhh... i have to see this on the show 🤣

oh no... the return of arun 😡😡😡
but apart from that awesome chapter
i loved everythin especially the viha, nimmi n amar scenes
n swayam's bhai mode 😆
cant wait for the next update... hopefully neha will forgive vicky
n sorry once again for the late comment

[COLOR=blue]Awsm dear loved it to d core
viha scenes that was brillient
tr scenes aww sooo cute...that beach scene omg ...
Taani n rey becoming taarey
then taayam ohh swayam is really awsm possessive bro...
Amazing chap dear
update soon n pm me
love u yaar 😃

wowww veryyy nicc update read in one go...


veryyy nicc...


plzzz update fast


P.S:-plzz add me nd send ne pm when update

Originally posted by: cuppypie121

Res. Yipppeee update mil gaya 🥳
Ok now unres
Wow dii amazing update
Just loved it
The Taayam part was soo cute and funny tooo 😆
Abhi Sw ko nhi pata k Taani uski behen hai tu itna possesive hota hai jab pata chal gya woh tu 24/7 Taani ka bodygaurd ban kar uske saath rahe g 😆
Coming to Viha scene...awww drunk Vicky is soo cute...Vicky k liye ek tight hug 🤗
Don't take tension vicky kagu maan jae g...!!!!!
Neha dil ki suno...maaf kardo Vicky ko warna mujhe dedo 😃
The Taarey beach scene was adorable 😳
Rey u will surely succeed in ur mission finding hero 😊...yeh meine nahi meri rainy dii ne bola hai 😆
The swayam part was harralious 🤣 he was waiting for Taani since 1 hr...and his line Rey ko tu beach pasand nahi phir woh Taaniya ko beech par le gya 🤣
The BMW guy is surely Arun...but no fear when Swayam the possesive bhai is here 😆
Loved the song and Taani's dance was ausome...dii 5 min mein itna dance Taani kaixe kar sakti hai
The Rimar-Nimi scene was ausome...hope Amar propose Rinni soon 😉
Don't worry Amar jo condition tumhare hai soon Rey will be in the same condition...aur yeh kam megha diii kare g 😃
why Arun called Rinni??
Diii mujhe pata hai sw kaha gya...apne purane ghar!!!!!...Lol apne hi bataya tha

Originally posted by: KgirlLuvsD3

I just read all of the parts in one go and it's sooo cute!!! 😃

The Rey-Rinni bond is super cute! I think it would be adorable if they showed that in the show, especially the way you portrayed it. Even TaaYam is really cute, especially how the don't even know their relation but Swayam is so posessive when she wears short clothes, people send her gifts, the D3 comment on how cute she is or when she blushes/stares at Rey. And in the last chapter the way he was indirectly saying it was too late for her to be out was sooo cute! 😊

And I'm sure the BMW guy is Arun 😡😡😡... I hope ReYam murder him🤢! Why the hell is he calling Rinni again 😡😲?!

TaaRey the way that Rey is falling for her and feeling jealous and wanting to talk to her, help her and all is so sweet. His insisting to drop Taani home... IDK why but I thought that was the cutest thing ever. It's so refreshing to see the caring Rey through stories like yours, especially with the current D3 track.

Please please please please please please update soon and PM me... I really can't wait to read more

Originally posted by: CharMarfan1

😊Omg... TaaRey , TaaYam, and Rey & Rey scenes were so good.

I can't wait the day for the day when TaaYam find out that they are siblings. 😛

Please continue soon.😃

Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J

Awesome Update!!!!!

i love how much swayam cares for taani!!!

and he doesn't even understand why!!

i hope they find out soon that they are siblings!!

but i feel lie when swayam finds out he will be angry instead of sad...

i just hope that swayam is always there for taani!!

and the viha scene was so cute and sad...

neha doesn't even trust vicky anymore...

poor vicky keeps telling her how much he loves her...

i hope neha believes him...

i loved the song choice!!

sawaar loon is such a beautiful song!!

and it fit perfectly!!

great choice!!

i really wonder who this BMW guy is...

what does he want??

he better not harm taani...

and nimmi and rimar are soo cute!!

poor amar didn't even get a chance to say anything!!!

i hope he gets a chance soon!!!

the precap seems really interesting can't wait for the next update!!!

CONTINUE SOON!!!!

Originally posted by: taarey1fan

awww sooo cute...

sweet n lovely update...

loved the way amar want to proposr rinni but couldnt...

taarey hug was cute...

plzzz update soon...😊😊

Originally posted by: forever18able

Nice update!! omg y is arun callng rinni? pls do cont soon n pm me or scrap me 😃