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Taani n rey becoming taarey
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CHAPTER-9

Just then rinni phones rings n both rey n rinni saw it was……..ARUN!!!!

Rey/rinni- arun!!!

Anger grows in rey n he thinks-wth he is calling my sis now…n that too this late

Rinni thinks-now what he want…….she was about to cut but rey snatch her phone n picked up n turn it on speaker mode

Arun-oh thank god tune phone toh uthaya….rinni tu "khana toh kha rahe hai na…rinni dekho plz khana khana band mat karna ok…toh kya hua k agar tu thori se over weight hai n no guy loves u par tu plz khana mat chodna"

Rey looked at rinni in utter shock n much to his surprise rinni was looking down….that means she is hiding something from him…rey think wth is happening

Arun-rinni u der???

Rey cuts his call n looked at rinni trying to calm down n waiting 4 her to say something…

Its been 2 min but rinni didn't said anything n this made rey blast with anger as he can't control him self now

Rey(shouts)-WTH was that

Rinni-wo wo wo…actually mujhe nai pata

Rey-f9 mai arun se he pooch longa apni tareke se

Rinni(holding him)-nai nai nai nai…wo kuch din phele arun mujhe canteen mai mila tha

FLASHBACK

Some days ago…..rinni was sitting in canteen with a plate full of burgers n French fries n donut n her fav cholate milkshake….she was dam hungry n enjoying her food happily when…..

Arun enter canteen n saw rinni with lots of food n smilied n thinks-aaj bhi waise he hai….rinni I liked u toh tumhare himmat kaise hue mujhe reject karne k…tumne mujhe…mujhe arun ko na khaha n u like that stupid amar I mean seriously….no one say no to arun…..tumhe aur tumhare us bhai reyansh singhania ko toh mai sabak shikha k rahonga…..aisa plan banaonga k ek jatke mai rey k behan aur usse so called achi dost taani dono hi hurt ho jaenge phir dekhta ho k rey kaisa manage karta hai apni behan….apni close friend n is collage ko….

He goes towards rinni

Arun-wow rinni…u n ur eating habbit not changed yet haan

Rinni-what's ur problem arun

Arun-nothing my love….but u know what mujhe ab samjh mai aa raha hai k tum abhi tak single kyu ho

Rinni-really mind explaining me mr.arun

Arun-well well koi ladka tumhe kyu pasand karega tum itne foodie joh ho….dekho apne aap ko n baaki k girls ko kisik plate mai itna khana nai hai jitney tumhare plate mai hai…..mai tumhe pasand karta tha par tumne he mana kar diya uske baad tumhe kisi ne bhi pasand kiya hai kya…nai na

Rinni(being a innocent girl look around her n arun was right no other girl was eating that much…she had tears in her eyes)

Arun-and who is that guy…haan amar tujhe kya lagta hai usne tumhe abhi tak propose kyu nai kiya

Rinni-kyu

Arun-obviously every boy wants a perfect figure girl n tum aur perfect huh no ways

Rinni looks down n arun's plan was working..wo rinni ka brain wash karne mai successful ho raha tha…

Arun-chalo I m going u continue with ur food…oops I mean "lots of food"

He went with evil smile n after 1 min amar enter n saw rinni n think-chalo achese kha toh rahe hai mai pooch leta ho k kahi usse aur kuch toh nai chahiyeh mai apni hatho se meri rinni k liyeh banaonga

So with a good intention n sweet thought he went to rinni

Amar-linni aur tuch tatiyeh to tata to mai tana donda(rinni aur kuch chahiyeh toh bata do mai bana donga)

Rinni thinks he is taunting her as she already have lots of food so she stands up n said –no thanku n ran away

FLASHBACK ENDS

Rinni-aur uske baad mai theek se nai khati thi

Rey was shocked he was not able to digest that whether his sis was this innocent or was she this dumb not to understand that it was arun's plan

Rey(shouted with anger)-r u that dumb rinni tujhe samjh nai aaya k yeh sab uska plan tha

Rinni was shocked she knows her friends call her dumb but one person who never calls her that…..was rey….but today he said that

Rinni-bhai u think I m dumb

Rey -"think" u just proved u r….i mean tere mai dimaag nai hai kya arun ne kheh diya aur tune maan liya n khana chod diya

Rinni-bhai I m sorry

Rey-maine tujhse yeh expect nai kiya tha rinni…..bachpan se le kar aaj tak tune mujhe har baat batai hai na toh aaj kyu nai bataya!!!!! Maine poocha tha na k kya matter hai kyu nai kha rahe khana tab bhi tune mujhe nai bataya

Rinni-bhai I m really sorry

Rey-mujhse baat mat kar rinni….saying this he stared going towards door when rinni stops her n asked

Rinni-bhai kaha ja rahe ho

Rey-thore der mai aata ho mujhe akela rhehna hai n agar mujhse thora sa bhi pyaar karte hai toh khana kha lena

Saying this he went n rinni sat on sofa crying

SCENE CHANGE IN SW'S FLAT

He was not able to sleep he was tensed…sw thinks mujhe yeh ajeeb se feeling kyu aa rahe hai kon hai wo banda chahata kya hai wo Tanya se….god mai itna tensed kyu ho raha hai jab bhi Tanya k baat hai pata nai mai itna hyper kyu ho jata ho…what's wrong with me

Sw –I need fresh air…. He decided to go at his fav place……

He pulled his cycle n moved towards a place…after sometime he is standing infront of an old house

Sw-aaj bhi waisa ka waisa he hai….ghar toh nai badla…rhiste badal gaye….mom kyu gaye aap mujhe aur dad ko chod k….aap meri baby doll ko bhi le gaye….kuch bhi theek nai hai mom apke jane k baad…dad badal gaye…ghar badal gaya….aur ab dad k jane k baad mai akela ho yeh bhi nai pata k aap aur baby doll kaha ho…..par u know what mai pata lagana bhi nai chahata because I hate u mom n I hate ur daughter

While he was thinking all this let's see what Sharon is doing

SHARON'S PLACE

Well Sharon rai prakash was in bad mood….now what's new in that right…but there was something new…she was in bad mood or else mad on herself let's see why

Sh(roaming in her room)-god what the hell is wrong with me….mai decide kyu nai kar rpa rahe ho k mai sw ko pasand karte ho ya usse pyaar karte ho…….kuch samjh mai nai aa raha hai k mai kya karo…..aur yeh rey ..rey kaha hai mera phone kyu nai utha raha hai mera besti hai aur mera he phone nai utha raha hai……….

Calm down Sharon take a deep breath let's go somewhere in a quit place

She went outside n take her car n start driving….after sometime she saw a house n she stop her car n comes out n starts moving towards it……n saw a guy who looks like sw

Sh-haad hai ab sw har jagah dikhna shuru ho gaya hai……soon she realize he was actually there…she went to him n place her hand on his shoulder….sw turns his eyes were full of tears

Sh-hey kya hua

Sw-nothing….tum yaha

Sh-bas aise he shant jagah aane ka maan tha(now she looks at the house)

Sh-yeh ghar kitna purana hai na aur sundar bhi…..aisa lagta hai bohot kuch khehna chahata hai yeh ghar par koi sunne wala nai hai

Sw-koi kaise sunega…is ghar ka malik ab is duniya mai nai hai

Sh-tumhe kaise pata

Sw-yeh ghar mere dad ka hai n dad ko gaye hoye 3 saal ho gaye hai

Sh looked at him he wasn't right frame of mind

Sh-sw chalo waha chalte hai she took him to a rock n both sit down…sw was lost in his thoughts

Sh-kuch bolna chahate ho toh bolo…dekho sw mai jante ho tum kisise kuch share nai karte par try toh kar sakte ho na

Sw look at him he was not able to control himself n he hugged sh n started crying…sh was shocked she also hugged him tightly as if ensuring him that she was der 4 him …..sh-speak sw bolo kya hai tumhare dil mai….

Sw gets apart…..sw-mere dad k death 3 saal phele hue thi…

Sh-aur mom

Sw-mom(huh laughs a little)wo toh kabhi thi he nai….jab mai 5 saal ka tha tab mere mom mujhe n dad ko chod kar chali gaye aur meri behan ko bhi le gaye

Sh-tumhare behan bhi hai

Sw-hmm mujhe 2 saal chooti hai…hai bhi k nai pata nai…mom aur wo kaha hai koi idea nai hai

Sh-toh pata lagao

Sw-kyu pata lagao uske bare mai jisse mere parwa he nai itne saalo mai ek bhi baar unka call nai aaya n mere behan usne bhi call nai kiya usse kabhi apni hero k yaad nai!!!! I hate them

Sh looked at him…she could feel pain….sh-tum is ghar mai kyu nai search karte shayad koi clue mil jae

Sw-nai ja sakta…jab mai 10 saal ka tha tab hamse yeh ghar choda n tab maine dad ko promise kiya tha k mai is ghar ander phir kabhi nai jaonga aur mom aur apni behan k bare mai kuch pata nai lagaonga…n mai apna diya hua

Sh(completes his statement)-promise kabhi nai todta

Sh holds his hands n both look at house…..

Sw-sh ek baat pooch

Sh-haan bilkul

Sw(with fear n tear in his eyes)-mom aur meri behan zinda toh hogi na…

Sh looked at him n hugged him tightly just be positive sw …..both remain in same position 4 a long time

BACK WITH REY

Rey was driving he was in bad mood…how could his sis trust that arun again….he doesn't know what to do where to go he was just driving….soon he reaches a place in lost condition he come out n go inside building n open lift n reached a floor n goes to a flat n rings door

Here taani was sleeping when door bell rang she wakes n looks at time n saw it was 1:30 am…n thinks itne raat ko….sw he hoga dekhi ho…

She went to open door n found rey standing der lost

Taan-rey aap???

Rey without saying anything enter her house n sit on sofa…..taani looks at him she knows something was wrong like hell wrong

She goes to him

She place her hand on hi shoulder…rey looked at her he was sitting n she was standing…he hugged her by waiste n cried loud…

Taani was so shocked n worried now

Taani-rey kya hua hai batae mujhe plz kya hua hai rey

Rey –mujhe uspe chilana nai chahiyeh tha….usse dumb nai bulana chahiyeh tha

Taani-kisse rey (she cuped his face) bataiyeh rey kya prob hai plz

Rey-wo rinni….he told her everything

Taani-wo is wajah se khana nai kha rahe thi

Rey-ha

Taani-rey apko chilna nai chahiyeh tha aap usse samjha bhi sakte the…rey ladkiya aise hoti hai n hum sab jante hai k rinni kitne innocent hai

Rey-uski innocency ka fayda utha raha hai arun!!!!

Taani-rey arun ko bhool jaeyeh rinni k bare mai sochiyeh

Rey-mai kya karo taani…..

Taani-hame uski help karne hogi usse isse nikhalna hoga aur uske thoughts badalne hoge

Rey-hmmm…tum meri help karogi???

Taani(smiled)-kabhi na kaha hai aapko

Rey also smiled….taani-apne kuch khaya???/

Rey-nai maan nai hai

Taani-arre aise kaise nai hai rukhiyeh mai le kar aati hi

Rey-rhene do taani bilkul maan nai hai….just then he received a msg from rinni

Rinni's msg-bhai I m sorry…plz ghar aa jao mujhe dar lag raha hai plz bohot raat ho gae hai maine khana kha liya hai bhai aa jao plz….

Taani-dekha ab toh usne bhi kha liya ab toh kuch kha lo

Rey nods in yes…taani went n prepared maggi 4 him as that was the only thing she could make fast

Rey taste it n said-wow yeh toh bohot tasty hai bilkul aise jaise mom banate hai…

Taani smiles n looks at rey…..thinks-rey ek dum perfect hai as a son…as a friend…as a bro….as a "good friend"

Rey loks at taani n waved his hand

Rey-kya hua

Taani-wo…

Rey-(hiding his plate)-nai nai yeh nai donga apni liye dusri bana lo

Taani-kya???rey aap bache hai bilkul

Rey-wo joh bhi ho par mai yeh nai donga

Taani-ha baba mat dena kush…rey made several face like wow…thumps up n taani was just admiring him

HERE WITH RINNI

Rinni was sad so she calls her mom

Rinni-ma kaise ho aap

Rm-beta itne raat ko kya hua sab theek hai na baby

Rinni-ha ma sab theek hai…bas apki yaad aa rahe thi

Rm-aee my princess ko mumma k yaad aa rahe thi….acha rey kaha hai

Rinni-bhai….bhai so rahe hai(lied)

Rm-arre yeh kaise ho gaya tera bhai tere sone se phele kaise so gaya aaj

This statement made rinni realized how much rey loved her

Rm-beta tu theek hai na

Rinn-ha ma sab theek hai…chalo mai rakhte ho bye mom gn love u

Rm-love u beta….they disconnect….but rm was not sure she wakes her husband

Rm-suniyeh ji

Rd-haaan kya hai

Rm-dekhiyeh na rinni ka call tha wo bohot low sound kar rahe thi

Rd-arre rey hai na waha tum kyu chinta kar rahe ho

Rm-wahi toh baat hai mujhe lagta hai bhai behan k beech kuch prob hue hai….suneyeh ji chaliye na kuch dino k liye bacho k pass chalte hai

Rd-hmm theek hai mai manager se kheh kar kal k flight book karwa deta ho…..

Rm-theek hai mai packing kar lete ho

Now rey was leaving taani's place n sw was coming back both didn't noticed each other but as soon as rey went…sw turn n saw his back

Sw-kya wo rey tha….par rey is waqt yaha kya kar raha tha

NEXT MORNING

At Vicky n nil's place

Neha was sleeping on sofa n Vicky was sleeping on his lap…n simmi was sleeping on nil's shoulder

Now slowly neha wakes up…she looks at Vicky n smile he lloks so innocent when he sleep she touch his face gently…..she was smiling remembering last night when Vicky said he still love her…..but soon she remembers the time when Vicky said she only loves a guy 4 his money….they made her angry she gets up n place Vicky's head on sofa n went in kitchen

Here nil also wakes up n saw simmi sleeping on his shoulder…he smiles they were more than best friends….he still was struggling between love n like n so was simmi…

He touched her hairs n kissed her head n carefully gets up n place her on sofa

Nil was about to enter n neha was coming out…nil saw her

Nil-u ok???

Neha-ya…..

Just then Vicky wakes up holding his head as it was paining a lot in half sleep he looked around n saw someone sleeping on sofa he thought that's neha so he went n hugged her tightly saying love u kagu

Simmi wakes up due to sudden hug n look at Vicky n shout-ahhh

Due to shout Vicky came into senses he looked at simmi n shouts-aahhh

Due to voices nil n neha also comes der

Nil-kya gala kyu faad rahe ho tum log

Vic-(putting hand on his head)-wth simmi doing here

Simmi-why the hell u hugged me

Nil n neha-what!!!!!!!!!

Vic-arre i thought that was neha….

Simmi looked at neha n than at herself n than went to neha n said

Simmi-Vicky tujhe mujhe mai aur neha mai koi antar dekhae nai deta kya

Vic-pata nai aaj dekha nai

Neha-kaise dekhega drunk u were yesterday!!!! Saying this she went from there n vic pouts like a child n looks at nimmi n said

Vic-guys I need help kagu naraz hai

Nimmi rolled their eyes

Nil-babu is back

Simmi-with a bang

COLLAGE

Rinni enter RH fully sad…her bhai was not talking to her n she was not knowing what to do

All enter

Vicky enter n looked at neha n give her a pleading look but she ignore…so he went to his besti rinni n said

Vic(loudly)-rinni meri help kar nai kagu meri baat nai sun rahe hai

All-kagu????

Vic-ya I realzed I still love my deewani

Bharat-saala phir chalo ho gaya majnu

Aashi-aap aise types nai ho toh Vicky types ko kuch mat kaho

Vicky goes n hug aashi n said-thanku types

Bharat think-yeh aashi se chipak kyu raha hai

Rinni-vic joh bhi hai bas kuch chupana mat kyuki (looking at rey) jab hum kisise pyaar karte hai toh usse kuch chupana nai chahiyeh samne wale ko bohot dukh hota hai

Rey looked at different direction ignoring her…all were confused except taani

Simmi-rinni tu aur sensible talk wow yr

All-ha yr yeh kaise ho gaya

Rinni(smiled)-kyuki(looking at rey) tum log jitna "DUMB" mujhe samjhte ho mai ho nai aise…

Saying this she left n all were confused but rey was having tears he knows rinni is hurt…taani puts her hand on his shoulder movtivating him

Sw saw this n thinks-yeh ho kya raha hai in dono k beech mai

Huh finally done with chapter 9 plz do like it guys n comment big plzzz

Recap-rinni fainted….rey finaaly come to know taani real past….what he will do know????

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Yippeee... 🥳
Me frst... 🥳
Wow...Awesum update di...
Ughhh y in dis world Rinni believed Arun...😡
Rey shouted on Rinni...Rinni hurt...😭
Awww love d swaron scene...👍🏼
Taarey scene was cute...
Hehehe loved d way Rey said to Taani ki
Main apni maggie tumhe ni dunga...😆 🤣
Hehehe Swayam's possesive side kicked again when he saw Rey going...😆
And last Rinni upset wid Rey n Rey crying...😭
But overall it was awesum...👍🏼 👏
Love U Di...🤗

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awsome update..
arun..!!!😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

how could he do dat..!!!
poor rini uske bato me aa gai...
fir rey se dant sunni padi..!!
loved d bond between Taayam..!!
n swaron's convo was also lovely..!!
but d most i loved was taarey scence.!!!
aww... it was so cute...!!😳
"Rey-(hiding his plate)-nai nai yeh nai donga apni liye dusri bana lo"

this was so cute..!!!

i loved this chapter waiting for next chapter eagerly..
update soon😡😡

Awsome update😊 😊 every scene is perfect 👏 now looking forward for nxt update😊

Awesome update as always
totally loved it
swaron part was superb
arun hate him
update soon

awesome neha😃