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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

Swa posesvns is alwys grt to rd.Taarey wr freaking awsm.BMW,who?Viha,so cute of Vic to plead hr n pouring ot hs hrt.Amar,poor boy! Nimmi,so lovely.Bashi,haye haye bharat ka lng of pyar vyar ws super cool.Rey is supr hpy! Arun clng rini? Excitd wit prcp.

thanku soo much 4 comment dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi

awesum update .. 👏


TR prt waz superb .. 👍🏼

all odr couplez wer cute .. 😳

precap iz intrestng .. 😃

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
yup...par bata toh kaise laga
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: riachandnani

awesome update!!!!!


loved swayams care for taani in both these parts!!1

Taani-hello sw
Sw-taanya kaha ho tum!!!! Abhi tak wapas nai aae???sab theek hai na kuch prob toh nai hai??? Mai lene aao kya????mai pooch kyu raha ho mai abhi aa raha ho tumhe lene kaha ho tum
Taani-arre arre sw saas(breath) toh lelo'mai theek ho n collage mai he ho kuch kaam tha n mai aa jaongi theek hai bas 30 min mai aati ho
Sw-ok(he cuts call)


Rey went n taani goes to her flat n saw sw already waiting 4 her at the door'taani gives him smile but sw was not in a mood to smile he was tensed 4 her n was not comfortable with her coming with rey but he didn't know y
Sw-aaj kafi late ho gaye na
Taani-ha wo(unlocks her door n both enter) collage mai he ruk gaye the kuch kaam tha
Sw-hmm par tumne toh kaha tha k tum 30 min mai aa jaogi par tumhe toh 1 ghante se bhi zayda ho gaya
Taani-ha wo actually raste mai'mai aur rey beech pe chale gaye the
Sw thinks-beech peh rey aur taanya'yeh rey ko kya ho gaya hai isse toh beech pasand he nai hai aur ab Tanya k saath beech pe chala gaya
His thought was disturbed by a door bell ring n both got confused
Taani-is waqt kon hai'.she open door
Guy-mam yeh aapke liye

Taani-oh thanku par kisne bheje
Guy-wo nai pata mam'he went away
Taani comes back with flowers'.
Sw-yeh kisne bheja
Taani-pata nai'par sundar hai na(sw was not having good feeling about it soon his mind strikes of that BMW guy )
Sw runs to balcony to see if the BMW is still der or not n yes he was rite it was der n then he saw a guy giving money to the guy who just bring flowers'yes sw was sure k yahi BMW wale ne he taanya ko flowers bheje hai'he goes inside
Sw-taani tum coffee banao mai abhi aata ho'..taani-ok
Sw runs downstairs while saying-aaj is BMW ko toh mai chodunga nai
As soon as he reached the car was gone'sw-bach gaya saala'agli baar mil tu agar tere bmw k aise taise nai karde na toh mera bhi naam swayam shikhawat nai

taarey on d beach was awesome!!!!!


n amar nil simmi part was superb!!!


Amar calls rinni'n as soon as rinni picks call
Rinni-bhai!!!(actually when rinni phone rings at the same time rey came so rinni picks call n looks at rey so she said bhai)
Here listening bhai amar understand rey is there so he hurridly cuts calls'.
Amar was sad he sits on chair n looks towards nil n simmi pouting like a child n nil finally busted out with anger
Nil-tu na ek no ka dhakkan hai
Sim-nil calm down
Nil-kya calm down'saala 1 ghante se pakka raha hai k rinni ko propose karna hai n finally jab himmat aae n call kiya toh tune bina kuch bole phone cut kar diya'.teri itne phatti kyu hai rinni se
Amar-mai linni se nai lalta (mai rinni se nai darta )
Sim-toh???
Amar-tumtol nai tamtige(tum log nai samjhoge)
Nil-abbe e tereko batana hai to bata khali pile bheja mat kha
Amar-wo mereko linni toh tatose tarneta hai(wo mereko rinni ko propose karne ka hai)
Nimmi-not again!!!
Sim-amar last 1 hour se tum yahi kheh rahe ho'.agar rinni ko propose karna hai toh karo na prob kya hai
amar-ley(rey)

n the whole viha part was cute n superb!!!

The time neha took Vicky with her Vicky kept on saying kagu I love u kagu I love u

Neha-vicky tumhare ghar mai koi hai toh nai

Vic(looks her in anger)-kagu tum bhool gaye mai nil k saath rhehta ho toh kaise waha koi aur hoga

Neha thinks-mai bhool kaise gae

Neha-vicky keys giving to neha

Vicky-kyu do'..keys k kya zarorat hai tum toh hamesha se mere dil mai ho meri deewani(looks at her with love)

Neha just looked at him with blank face

Neha-vicky plz tell neha keys kaha hai

Vic(like a kid sit on floor)-mai nai bataoga'.agar maine bata diya toh tum mujhe ghar jodh kar chali jaogi

Neha-arre not going neha anywhere plz tell keys kaha hai

Vic(showing his pocket)-meri pocket mai

Neha checked his pocket n found keys of his flat'she stops an auto n puts Vicky in it n sit beside him holding him

Here Vicky was so drunk that he puts his head on neha 4 rest but still was saying kagu'kagu'kagu..(just imagine they r sitting like this in auto)


Finally they reached outside his flat n neha pulls him out n starts climbing stairs as lift was not working but Vicky was just keep on saying

Vic-tumhe pata hai kagu mai abhi bhi tumse bohot zayda pyaar karta ho'

Neha(not believing)-vicky drunk u r

She open his flat n manage to bring Vicky in who was standing on door just looking at her'.she brings Vicky in n put him on sofa n said

Neha-vicky so jao ab

Vic-nai''kagu tum mujhe chod kar toh nai jaogi na kagu''.mujhse galti ho gaye kagu'.mai tumse bohot pyaar karta ho plz mat jao na'.

Neha had tears in her eyes-vicky so jao

Vic-tum rahogi na mere saath kagu'.hamesha rahogi na'.hum shaadi kar lenge kagu collage k baad'.plz kagu wapas aa jao na

Neha-vicky plz so jao ab tum

Vic-tumhe pata hai kagu tum na meri mom k baad meri life k sabse imp ladki ho''.

Neha-vicky hum kaal baat karenge so jao ab

Vicky hold her hands n while saying I love u meri deewani he slept holding neha's hand

Neha thinks-kya Vicky sach mai mujhse abhi bhi pyaar karta hai(she looks at him)'vicky tum kya ho asliyat mai wo jisne mujhse jagra kiya n kaha k mai bas paise k peeche ho ya yeh joh khehta hai k mujhse abhi bhi pyaar karte ho'..aakhir sach kya hai


n taani song sequence was laso superb!



in all super awesome update!! wanna knw y is arun calling rinni! update soon n thnx fr d pm...

aww love u dear
thanku 4 ur comment baby
always wait 4 it
loved ur comment dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: raveena1

fab update di...

swayam caring bro..love him.
taarey beach part was so nyc
viha part was fab...lovd it.
all couples part was nyc...
amar u r such a...such a ...cute guy...amar ke baare mein kuch galat bol hi nai sakti..
linni ka dewaana amal... 😊

amazing update di and nyc precap.
(sorry for short comment...busy due to exams...next tym pakka big comment.)

its ok dear i understand
thanks 4 comment
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hima_taarey

sorry dear 4 the late comment!

trust me... this update was fab!
in all ways...
with all couples...
pls pls pls continue soon!
love u!

thanks dear
n i'll update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jeslinathomas

Ok from the starting i really like rey's possessiveness towards rinni and offcourse swayam's too.I liked taayam bonding towards eachother.How jerk that arun is pehle rinni ki saath itni badi galti ki uske baad ab taani.Pls usko baacha lene.I loved whole d3 scenes not want to miss anyone.Update soon and hope ki taayam ekk doosre bahut jald samajh paaye.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shanya8

meri galti sorry late comment plzz

so sorry but now let me say
wow awesome update really loved it hmm so tr r getting closer n swayam hmm lets c whats next update soon plz n will comment soon next time hehe 😉

its ok dear no prob
love u muah
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: u-me-aur-D3

im sooo sorry
i took so long to read this... but i wasnt on IF for a while bcos of health problems
aur phir jab main online aayi toh main pms check nahi ki
aur scrap ko dekha bhi nahi... that is if u send a scrap... i dont remember seeing one 😕
anyways im so sorry i took so long but i'll comment big to make up for it

romantic update... really... cant wait i hope that there's viha in this too..
knowing u there is probably really cute viha scenes 😉

awww swayam in protective bhai mode... i know i say this a LOT but i love this avatar of his
in fact in all ur stories there are always protective brothers
thats what makes me love ur stories so much

ahhh... VIHA SCENE ALREADY!!!! OK I NEED TO BREATHE...
ohh haha main toh bhul gayi ki vicky last chapter mein drunk tha 😆
awww... kya line tha... seriously superb dialogue
tune likha yar kissi movie se copy ki 😆
viha r super cute yaar... i hope they get together on the show like this too
awwwiee super cute pic of arlisha... i remember those days 😳
😭 vicky loves her so much,,,, why cant she see that... why doesnt she believe him!!!

haha kabhi taani ko ice-cream chahiye toh kabhi beach... bilkul bacchi hai yeh ladki 😛
another really cute scene... this chapter is full of adorable scenes
aur swayam phir se bhai avatar mein chala gaya 😆
hehe Nil Amar and Simmi scene is awesome n hilarious...
i like how u gave everyone space in the chapter... except swaron of course
hehe nimmi n llhh... i have to see this on the show 🤣

oh no... the return of arun 😡😡😡
but apart from that awesome chapter
i loved everythin especially the viha, nimmi n amar scenes
n swayam's bhai mode 😆
cant wait for the next update... hopefully neha will forgive vicky
n sorry once again for the late comment

no sorry next time
loved ur comment
always wait 4 ur comment
n thanks 4 big comment
love u

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