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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi

awesum update ... 👏


rinni n rey'z scene wer vry cute .. 😳
vicky drunk .. 😆

precap iz superb .. ! 👍🏼

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J

HEY MEGHA!!!!

sorry for the late reply!!!
i din't even you updated this one!!
but it was an awesome update!!!!
poor swayam is so confused!!
he wants to beat rey up and he doesn't even know why!!!
and rey and taani are falling for eachother!!!
i wonder what is up with rinni??
why would she be acting like that???
and yay sharon accepted it!!
she likes swayam!!!
and he misunderstanding is finally cleared!!!
poor vicky!!!
i wonder how hegot to the college if he was drunk??
atleast he didn't do the sholay scene in front of the whole college...
that would be bad!!!
i hope neha forgives him and they can finally be togwether!!!
i mis viha...
Great Update!!!!
CONTINUE SOON!!!!!

thanku soo much 4 a long comment dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ok guys I have tried a total romantic update u guys may like it or may not plz tell me normally I don't write romantic scenes u all know this so this is kind of romantic update on all couples except swaron…..swaron romance will be shown in next update promise

CHAPTER-8

Taarey were standing outside collage

Rey-taani tum yahi ruko mai car leke aata ho ok

Taani-ha bilkul(rey went n here taani's phone rings she looks at her n phone it was sw calling her)

Taani-hello sw

Sw-taanya kaha ho tum!!!! Abhi tak wapas nai aae???sab theek hai na kuch prob toh nai hai??? Mai lene aao kya????mai pooch kyu raha ho mai abhi aa raha ho tumhe lene kaha ho tum

Taani-arre arre sw saas(breath) toh lelo…mai theek ho n collage mai he ho kuch kaam tha n mai aa jaongi theek hai bas 30 min mai aati ho

Sw-ok(he cuts call)

Here rey comes back n both sit in car n leave

NOW LET'S SEE WHAT HAPPENING WITH VIHA

The time neha took Vicky with her Vicky kept on saying kagu I love u kagu I love u

Neha-vicky tumhare ghar mai koi hai toh nai

Vic(looks her in anger)-kagu tum bhool gaye mai nil k saath rhehta ho toh kaise waha koi aur hoga

Neha thinks-mai bhool kaise gae

Neha-vicky keys giving to neha

Vicky-kyu do…..keys k kya zarorat hai tum toh hamesha se mere dil mai ho meri deewani(looks at her with love)

Neha just looked at him with blank face

Neha-vicky plz tell neha keys kaha hai

Vic(like a kid sit on floor)-mai nai bataoga….agar maine bata diya toh tum mujhe ghar jodh kar chali jaogi

Neha-arre not going neha anywhere plz tell keys kaha hai

Vic(showing his pocket)-meri pocket mai

Neha checked his pocket n found keys of his flat…she stops an auto n puts Vicky in it n sit beside him holding him

Here Vicky was so drunk that he puts his head on neha 4 rest but still was saying kagu…kagu…kagu..(just imagine they r sitting like this in auto)


Finally they reached outside his flat n neha pulls him out n starts climbing stairs as lift was not working but Vicky was just keep on saying

Vic-tumhe pata hai kagu mai abhi bhi tumse bohot zayda pyaar karta ho…

Neha(not believing)-vicky drunk u r

She open his flat n manage to bring Vicky in who was standing on door just looking at her….she brings Vicky in n put him on sofa n said

Neha-vicky so jao ab

Vic-nai……kagu tum mujhe chod kar toh nai jaogi na kagu…….mujhse galti ho gaye kagu….mai tumse bohot pyaar karta ho plz mat jao na….

Neha had tears in her eyes-vicky so jao

Vic-tum rahogi na mere saath kagu….hamesha rahogi na….hum shaadi kar lenge kagu collage k baad….plz kagu wapas aa jao na

Neha-vicky plz so jao ab tum

Vic-tumhe pata hai kagu tum na meri mom k baad meri life k sabse imp ladki ho…….

Neha-vicky hum kaal baat karenge so jao ab

Vicky hold her hands n while saying I love u meri deewani he slept holding neha's hand

Neha thinks-kya Vicky sach mai mujhse abhi bhi pyaar karta hai(she looks at him)…vicky tum kya ho asliyat mai wo jisne mujhse jagra kiya n kaha k mai bas paise k peeche ho ya yeh joh khehta hai k mujhse abhi bhi pyaar karte ho…..aakhir sach kya hai

BACK WITH TAAREY

Rey was driving n taani was slient….she was looking outside…rey saw her n got lost in her beauty n her eyes n thinks-kitne innocent eyes hai iske….god kya ho raha hai mujhe focus rey focus

Just then taani said-rey plz stop the car….rey stopped n asked

Rey-kya hua

Taani-wo dekhiyeh(show him beech)…chaliyeh na waha chalte hai

Rey-taani beach he toh hai what's so exciting in beech

Taani-plz na rey chaliyeh na plz….its so beautiful plz

Rey-f9 chalo…..

Both went to beech n taani stretch her arms n close her eyes n smiles n said

Taani-isn't it beautiful rey….the air is so pure n fresh its amazing(she opens her eyes) n the atmosphere is soo good n sea is so beautiful hai na rey

Rey was lost in her beauty n said-yes it is beautiful but not more than u taani

Taani looks at him n both got lost in each other eyes but soon taani decided to avoid this eye lock so she looks straight

Taani-pata hai rey jab mai choti thi na tab mai mom k saath London k beech pe jaate thi…tab mai bhai ko bohot miss karte thi rey….mai apne bhai ko bohot miss karte ho….kya wo mujhe kabhi mil bhi paenge rey….kya mai kabhi bhi apne "hero" se mil paongi…(she starts crying)

Rey cupped her face…rey-hey taani mai ho na hum mil kar usse dhundege wo zaror milega….mai ho tumhare saath

Taani hugged him tightly n rey also hugged her tightly

Rey-plz taani ro mat mai ho na mai dhunkar longa tumhara bhai

Taani-promise me rey plz promise me

Rey-I promise u taani….both were still hugging each other when rey's phone rings they get apart…rey picks up n it was rinni

Rey-ha rinni

Rinni-bhai aap kaha ho kab tak aaoge

Rey-rinni mai thore der mai ghar aata ho tum khana kha lena

Rinni-ok bhai bye…

Rey cuts phone n taani said-chale

Rey-ha chalo…

Both leave n soon they reach taani's apartment

Here sw was getting restless yeh taanya kaha gae 1 hour ho chukka hai kheh rahe thi k 30 min mai aa jaege…to change his mood he went to balcony n saw rey's car

Sw-rey k car wo yaha par uska call toh nai aaya k wo milne aa raha hai

Soon he saw taani coming out of his car n then she bents down to talk to rey

Here taani to rey-rey thanku 4 everything

Rey-hey that ok….n plz tum rona mat mai ho tumhare saath hum dhund lenge tumhare "hero" ko ok

Taani smiles- bye gn

Rey-gn

Rey went n taani goes to her flat n saw sw already waiting 4 her at the door…taani gives him smile but sw was not in a mood to smile he was tensed 4 her n was not comfortable with her coming with rey but he didn't know y

Sw-aaj kafi late ho gaye na

Taani-ha wo(unlocks her door n both enter) collage mai he ruk gaye the kuch kaam tha

Sw-hmm par tumne toh kaha tha k tum 30 min mai aa jaogi par tumhe toh 1 ghante se bhi zayda ho gaya

Taani-ha wo actually raste mai…mai aur rey beech pe chale gaye the

Sw thinks-beech peh rey aur taanya…yeh rey ko kya ho gaya hai isse toh beech pasand he nai hai aur ab Tanya k saath beech pe chala gaya

His thought was disturbed by a door bell ring n both got confused

Taani-is waqt kon hai….she open door

Guy-mam yeh aapke liye


Taani-oh thanku par kisne bheje

Guy-wo nai pata mam…he went away

Taani comes back with flowers….

Sw-yeh kisne bheja

Taani-pata nai…par sundar hai na(sw was not having good feeling about it soon his mind strikes of that BMW guy )

Sw runs to balcony to see if the BMW is still der or not n yes he was rite it was der n then he saw a guy giving money to the guy who just bring flowers…yes sw was sure k yahi BMW wale ne he taanya ko flowers bheje hai…he goes inside

Sw-taani tum coffee banao mai abhi aata ho…..taani-ok

Sw runs downstairs while saying-aaj is BMW ko toh mai chodunga nai

As soon as he reached the car was gone…sw-bach gaya saala…agli baar mil tu agar tere bmw k aise taise nai karde na toh mera bhi naam swayam shikhawat nai

Here upstairs taani was smiling thinking about rey

Taani thinks-rey kitne ache hai…meri kitne madad kar rahe hai…par mujhe ho kya gaya mai kaise itne asani se unhe apni dil k baat apne secrets share kar liye…..kya ho raha hai mujhe….kahi mujhe rey pasand toh nai aa gaye….

She started dancing on song swaar loon while setting her sofa n dinning table

Hawa Ke Jhonke Aaj Mausamo Se Rooth Gaye
Gulon Ki Shookhiyan Jo Bhawre Aa Ke Loot Gaye(opening window n feeling air)
Badal Rahi Hai Aaj Zindagi Ki Chaal Zara
Isi Bahane Kyun Na Main Bhi Dil Ka Haal Zara
Sawaar Loon Sawaar Loon
Sawaar Loon Haye Sawaar Loon(setting her dinning table)

Balam Ji Purane Hain
Nayi Si Dhoop Hai
Jo Palkein Khatkhta Raha Hai
Kiska Roop Hai(doing a contemporary step)
Sharartein Kare Jo Aise
Bhool Ke Hizaab Kaise Usko Naam Se
Main Pukaar Loon(does a cartwheel)
Sawaar Loon Haye Sawaar Loon
Sawaar Loon Sawaar Loon(looking her self in mirror n combing her hairs)

Hawa Ke Jhonke Aaj Mausamo Se Rooth Gaye
Gulon Ki Shookhiyan Jo Bhawre Aa Ke Loot Gaye
Badal Rahi Hai Aaj Zindagi Ki Chaal Zara
Isi Bahane Kyun Na Main Bhi Dil Ka Haal Zara
Sawaar Loon Sawaar Loon
Sawaar Loon Haye Sawaar Loon(sings thinking about the time they spent on beech n blushes on recalling the hug)

Yeh Sarre Koyale Bani Hai Aaj Dakiyan(talk to a koyal which was on balcony)
Kuhu Kuhu Mein Chitthiyan Padhe Mazakiyan
Yeh Sarre Koyale Bani Hai Aaj Dakiyan
Kuhu Kuhu Mein Chitthiyan Padhe Mazakiyan
Inhe Kaho Ke Na Chupaye
Kisne Hai Likya Bataye(picks the koyal n flies it in air)
Uski Aaj Mein Nazar Utaar Loon
Sawaar Loon Sawaar Loon
Sawaar Loon Haye Sawaar Loon

Hawa Ke Jhonke Aaj Mausamo Se Rooth Gaye
Gulon Ki Shookhiyan Jo Bhawre Aa Ke Loot Gaye
Badal Rahi Hai Aaj Zindagi Ki Chaal Zara
Isi Bahane Kyun Na Main Bhi Dil Ka Haal Zara(keeps on dancing in contemporary style)

Sw comes back n saw taani blushing n dancing sw thinks- (taanya ko dance aata hai wow kitna acha dance karte hai par yeh blush kyu kar rahe hai yeh chakkar kya hai)

HERE WITH AMAR

Amar calls rinni…n as soon as rinni picks call

Rinni-bhai!!!(actually when rinni phone rings at the same time rey came so rinni picks call n looks at rey so she said bhai)

Here listening bhai amar understand rey is there so he hurridly cuts calls….

Amar was sad he sits on chair n looks towards nil n simmi pouting like a child n nil finally busted out with anger

Nil-tu na ek no ka dhakkan hai

Sim-nil calm down

Nil-kya calm down…saala 1 ghante se pakka raha hai k rinni ko propose karna hai n finally jab himmat aae n call kiya toh tune bina kuch bole phone cut kar diya….teri itne phatti kyu hai rinni se

Amar-mai linni se nai lalta (mai rinni se nai darta )

Sim-toh???

Amar-tumtol nai tamtige(tum log nai samjhoge)

Nil-abbe e tereko batana hai to bata khali pile bheja mat kha

Amar-wo mereko linni toh tatose tarneta hai(wo mereko rinni ko propose karne ka hai)

Nimmi-not again!!!

Sim-amar last 1 hour se tum yahi kheh rahe ho….agar rinni ko propose karna hai toh karo na prob kya hai

Amar-ley(rey)

Nil-abbe rey kaise prob ho sakta hai

Amar-tuti ley linni ta tai hai(kyuki rey rinni ka bhai hai)

Nil-abbe e rey rinni ka tai n uska bhai hai

Sim-nil usne bhai he bola

Nil-oh acha par dude rey typical bhai nai hai u chill

Amar-tu nai samjhega mera dard…simmi ka koi bhai hota tab tujhe samjh mai aata

Simmi-mera bhai kaha se aa gaya

Nil-ha be aise dara mat simmi ka koi bhai nai hai

Simmi-toh tum dar kyu rahe ho

Now both looked at each other n llhh happen…soon amar comes n claps infront of them

Amar-mai yaha apni problem bata raha ho aur tum log apne mail age ho

Nil glared at amar 4 spoiling his romantic moment

Nil-amar tu ja abhi aur hame bhi jane de

Amar-par rinni

Sim-amar hum kal sochenge tu ja abhi…amar left n here nimmi was about to leave when a car came in full speed n split all dirty water on simmi's cloths

Sim-wth

Nil-abbe o dekhai nai deta kya

Sim-meri dress

Nil-hey don't worry ek kaam karo mere ghar chalte hai waha Vicky aur neha bhi honge toh waha tum apni dress saaf kar lena

Simmi-ok both left 4 nil n vicky's flat where viha was already there

HERE WITH BHASHI(BHARAT N AASHI)

Aashi finally manged to make bharat drop her home….aashi was sitting behind him on his bike n bharat was drving

Suddenly it starts raining n aashi open her hairs n stretch her arms to feel the rain

Bharat from his mirror saw aashi n thinks

Bharat-abbe kitne cute lag rahe hai yr maine isse aise kabhi dekha he nai …..abbe yeh mai kya soch raha ho yeh pyaar vyaar k faltu lafre mai nai padhna mujhe

Coming out of thoughts he drops aashi to her home

HERE WHEN REY WAS BACK TO HIS HOUSE

Rey comes smiling n rinni looks at him in weird was n thinks-yeh bhai itna smile kyu kar rahe hai

Rinni-bhai

Rey-ha(still smiling)

Rinni-aap theek ho na

Rey-ha meri behan meri pyaari se sis mai theek ho infact isse acha mai kabhi ho bhi nai sakta

Rinni thinks-yeh kya ho gaya bhai ko

Just then rinni phones rings n both rey n rinni saw it was……..ARUN!!!!

Note-OMG I can't believe I m almost completing 50 pages of this story thanks to all my sweet readers love u all

Precap-all couple r thinking about each other…

why arun is calling rinni???? How rey will react????...will neha forgive Vicky????

Sw went somewhere…he meet someone…where sw went???? N whom he meet????

Wanna know stay tune………

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Posted: 12 years ago
Res. Yipppeee update mil gaya 🥳
Ok now unres
Wow dii amazing update
Just loved it
The Taayam part was soo cute and funny tooo 😆
Abhi Sw ko nhi pata k Taani uski behen hai tu itna possesive hota hai jab pata chal gya woh tu 24/7 Taani ka bodygaurd ban kar uske saath rahe g 😆
Coming to Viha scene...awww drunk Vicky is soo cute...Vicky k liye ek tight hug 🤗
Don't take tension vicky kagu maan jae g...!!!!!
Neha dil ki suno...maaf kardo Vicky ko warna mujhe dedo 😃
The Taarey beach scene was adorable 😳
Rey u will surely succeed in ur mission finding hero 😊...yeh meine nahi meri rainy dii ne bola hai 😆
The swayam part was harralious 🤣 he was waiting for Taani since 1 hr...and his line Rey ko tu beach pasand nahi phir woh Taaniya ko beech par le gya 🤣
The BMW guy is surely Arun...but no fear when Swayam the possesive bhai is here 😆
Loved the song and Taani's dance was ausome...dii 5 min mein itna dance Taani kaixe kar sakti hai
The Rimar-Nimi scene was ausome...hope Amar propose Rinni soon 😉
Don't worry Amar jo condition tumhare hai soon Rey will be in the same condition...aur yeh kam megha diii kare g 😃
why Arun called Rinni??
Diii mujhe pata hai sw kaha gya...apne purane ghar!!!!!...Lol apne hi bataya tha
Edited by cuppypie121 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just read all of the parts in one go and it's sooo cute!!! 😃
The Rey-Rinni bond is super cute! I think it would be adorable if they showed that in the show, especially the way you portrayed it. Even TaaYam is really cute, especially how the don't even know their relation but Swayam is so posessive when she wears short clothes, people send her gifts, the D3 comment on how cute she is or when she blushes/stares at Rey. And in the last chapter the way he was indirectly saying it was too late for her to be out was sooo cute! 😊
And I'm sure the BMW guy is Arun 😡😡😡... I hope ReYam murder him🤢! Why the hell is he calling Rinni again 😡😲?!
TaaRey the way that Rey is falling for her and feeling jealous and wanting to talk to her, help her and all is so sweet. His insisting to drop Taani home... IDK why but I thought that was the cutest thing ever. It's so refreshing to see the caring Rey through stories like yours, especially with the current D3 track.
Please please please please please please update soon and PM me... I really can't wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊Omg... TaaRey , TaaYam, and Rey & Rey scenes were so good.

I can't wait the day for the day when TaaYam find out that they are siblings. 😛

Please continue soon.😃
Edited by CharMarfan1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update!!!!!
i love how much swayam cares for taani!!!
and he doesn't even understand why!!
i hope they find out soon that they are siblings!!
but i feel lie when swayam finds out he will be angry instead of sad...
i just hope that swayam is always there for taani!!
and the viha scene was so cute and sad...
neha doesn't even trust vicky anymore...
poor vicky keeps telling her how much he loves her...
i hope neha believes him...
i loved the song choice!!
sawaar loon is such a beautiful song!!
and it fit perfectly!!
great choice!!
i really wonder who this BMW guy is...
what does he want??
he better not harm taani...
and nimmi and rimar are soo cute!!
poor amar didn't even get a chance to say anything!!!
i hope he gets a chance soon!!!
the precap seems really interesting can't wait for the next update!!!
CONTINUE SOON!!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
yippee finally got the update..
reserved for abhi,
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nyc update...taarey hug waz cute.
thanx for pm.
plz update nxt prt asap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww sooo cute...
sweet n lovely update...
loved the way amar want to proposr rinni but couldnt...
taarey hug was cute...
plzzz update soon...😊😊

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