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rinni n rey'z scene wer vry cute .. 😳vicky drunk .. 😆precap iz superb .. ! 👍🏼update soon ..thank u 4 d pm .. 😊
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Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi
awesum update ... 👏
rinni n rey'z scene wer vry cute .. 😳vicky drunk .. 😆precap iz superb .. ! 👍🏼update soon ..thank u 4 d pm .. 😊
Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J
HEY MEGHA!!!!
sorry for the late reply!!!i din't even you updated this one!!but it was an awesome update!!!!poor swayam is so confused!!he wants to beat rey up and he doesn't even know why!!!and rey and taani are falling for eachother!!!i wonder what is up with rinni??why would she be acting like that???and yay sharon accepted it!!she likes swayam!!!and he misunderstanding is finally cleared!!!poor vicky!!!i wonder how hegot to the college if he was drunk??atleast he didn't do the sholay scene in front of the whole college...that would be bad!!!i hope neha forgives him and they can finally be togwether!!!i mis viha...Great Update!!!!CONTINUE SOON!!!!!
Ok guys I have tried a total romantic update u guys may like it or may not plz tell me normally I don't write romantic scenes u all know this so this is kind of romantic update on all couples except swaron…..swaron romance will be shown in next update promise
CHAPTER-8
Taarey were standing outside collage
Rey-taani tum yahi ruko mai car leke aata ho ok
Taani-ha bilkul(rey went n here taani's phone rings she looks at her n phone it was sw calling her)
Taani-hello sw
Sw-taanya kaha ho tum!!!! Abhi tak wapas nai aae???sab theek hai na kuch prob toh nai hai??? Mai lene aao kya????mai pooch kyu raha ho mai abhi aa raha ho tumhe lene kaha ho tum
Taani-arre arre sw saas(breath) toh lelo…mai theek ho n collage mai he ho kuch kaam tha n mai aa jaongi theek hai bas 30 min mai aati ho
Sw-ok(he cuts call)
Here rey comes back n both sit in car n leave
NOW LET'S SEE WHAT HAPPENING WITH VIHA
The time neha took Vicky with her Vicky kept on saying kagu I love u kagu I love u
Neha-vicky tumhare ghar mai koi hai toh nai
Vic(looks her in anger)-kagu tum bhool gaye mai nil k saath rhehta ho toh kaise waha koi aur hoga
Neha thinks-mai bhool kaise gae
Neha-vicky keys giving to neha
Vicky-kyu do…..keys k kya zarorat hai tum toh hamesha se mere dil mai ho meri deewani(looks at her with love)
Neha just looked at him with blank face
Neha-vicky plz tell neha keys kaha hai
Vic(like a kid sit on floor)-mai nai bataoga….agar maine bata diya toh tum mujhe ghar jodh kar chali jaogi
Neha-arre not going neha anywhere plz tell keys kaha hai
Vic(showing his pocket)-meri pocket mai
Neha checked his pocket n found keys of his flat…she stops an auto n puts Vicky in it n sit beside him holding him
Here Vicky was so drunk that he puts his head on neha 4 rest but still was saying kagu…kagu…kagu..(just imagine they r sitting like this in auto)
Finally they reached outside his flat n neha pulls him out n starts climbing stairs as lift was not working but Vicky was just keep on saying
Vic-tumhe pata hai kagu mai abhi bhi tumse bohot zayda pyaar karta ho…
Neha(not believing)-vicky drunk u r
She open his flat n manage to bring Vicky in who was standing on door just looking at her….she brings Vicky in n put him on sofa n said
Neha-vicky so jao ab
Vic-nai……kagu tum mujhe chod kar toh nai jaogi na kagu…….mujhse galti ho gaye kagu….mai tumse bohot pyaar karta ho plz mat jao na….
Neha had tears in her eyes-vicky so jao
Vic-tum rahogi na mere saath kagu….hamesha rahogi na….hum shaadi kar lenge kagu collage k baad….plz kagu wapas aa jao na
Neha-vicky plz so jao ab tum
Vic-tumhe pata hai kagu tum na meri mom k baad meri life k sabse imp ladki ho…….
Neha-vicky hum kaal baat karenge so jao ab
Vicky hold her hands n while saying I love u meri deewani he slept holding neha's hand
Neha thinks-kya Vicky sach mai mujhse abhi bhi pyaar karta hai(she looks at him)…vicky tum kya ho asliyat mai wo jisne mujhse jagra kiya n kaha k mai bas paise k peeche ho ya yeh joh khehta hai k mujhse abhi bhi pyaar karte ho…..aakhir sach kya hai
BACK WITH TAAREY
Rey was driving n taani was slient….she was looking outside…rey saw her n got lost in her beauty n her eyes n thinks-kitne innocent eyes hai iske….god kya ho raha hai mujhe focus rey focus
Just then taani said-rey plz stop the car….rey stopped n asked
Rey-kya hua
Taani-wo dekhiyeh(show him beech)…chaliyeh na waha chalte hai
Rey-taani beach he toh hai what's so exciting in beech
Taani-plz na rey chaliyeh na plz….its so beautiful plz
Rey-f9 chalo…..
Both went to beech n taani stretch her arms n close her eyes n smiles n said
Taani-isn't it beautiful rey….the air is so pure n fresh its amazing(she opens her eyes) n the atmosphere is soo good n sea is so beautiful hai na rey
Rey was lost in her beauty n said-yes it is beautiful but not more than u taani
Taani looks at him n both got lost in each other eyes but soon taani decided to avoid this eye lock so she looks straight
Taani-pata hai rey jab mai choti thi na tab mai mom k saath London k beech pe jaate thi…tab mai bhai ko bohot miss karte thi rey….mai apne bhai ko bohot miss karte ho….kya wo mujhe kabhi mil bhi paenge rey….kya mai kabhi bhi apne "hero" se mil paongi…(she starts crying)
Rey cupped her face…rey-hey taani mai ho na hum mil kar usse dhundege wo zaror milega….mai ho tumhare saath
Taani hugged him tightly n rey also hugged her tightly
Rey-plz taani ro mat mai ho na mai dhunkar longa tumhara bhai
Taani-promise me rey plz promise me
Rey-I promise u taani….both were still hugging each other when rey's phone rings they get apart…rey picks up n it was rinni
Rey-ha rinni
Rinni-bhai aap kaha ho kab tak aaoge
Rey-rinni mai thore der mai ghar aata ho tum khana kha lena
Rinni-ok bhai bye…
Rey cuts phone n taani said-chale
Rey-ha chalo…
Both leave n soon they reach taani's apartment
Here sw was getting restless yeh taanya kaha gae 1 hour ho chukka hai kheh rahe thi k 30 min mai aa jaege…to change his mood he went to balcony n saw rey's car
Sw-rey k car wo yaha par uska call toh nai aaya k wo milne aa raha hai
Soon he saw taani coming out of his car n then she bents down to talk to rey
Here taani to rey-rey thanku 4 everything
Rey-hey that ok….n plz tum rona mat mai ho tumhare saath hum dhund lenge tumhare "hero" ko ok
Taani smiles- bye gn
Rey-gn
Rey went n taani goes to her flat n saw sw already waiting 4 her at the door…taani gives him smile but sw was not in a mood to smile he was tensed 4 her n was not comfortable with her coming with rey but he didn't know y
Sw-aaj kafi late ho gaye na
Taani-ha wo(unlocks her door n both enter) collage mai he ruk gaye the kuch kaam tha
Sw-hmm par tumne toh kaha tha k tum 30 min mai aa jaogi par tumhe toh 1 ghante se bhi zayda ho gaya
Taani-ha wo actually raste mai…mai aur rey beech pe chale gaye the
Sw thinks-beech peh rey aur taanya…yeh rey ko kya ho gaya hai isse toh beech pasand he nai hai aur ab Tanya k saath beech pe chala gaya
His thought was disturbed by a door bell ring n both got confused
Taani-is waqt kon hai….she open door
Guy-mam yeh aapke liye
Taani-oh thanku par kisne bheje
Guy-wo nai pata mam…he went away
Taani comes back with flowers….
Sw-yeh kisne bheja
Taani-pata nai…par sundar hai na(sw was not having good feeling about it soon his mind strikes of that BMW guy )
Sw runs to balcony to see if the BMW is still der or not n yes he was rite it was der n then he saw a guy giving money to the guy who just bring flowers…yes sw was sure k yahi BMW wale ne he taanya ko flowers bheje hai…he goes inside
Sw-taani tum coffee banao mai abhi aata ho…..taani-ok
Sw runs downstairs while saying-aaj is BMW ko toh mai chodunga nai
As soon as he reached the car was gone…sw-bach gaya saala…agli baar mil tu agar tere bmw k aise taise nai karde na toh mera bhi naam swayam shikhawat nai
Here upstairs taani was smiling thinking about rey
Taani thinks-rey kitne ache hai…meri kitne madad kar rahe hai…par mujhe ho kya gaya mai kaise itne asani se unhe apni dil k baat apne secrets share kar liye…..kya ho raha hai mujhe….kahi mujhe rey pasand toh nai aa gaye….
She started dancing on song swaar loon while setting her sofa n dinning table
Hawa Ke Jhonke Aaj Mausamo Se Rooth Gaye
Gulon Ki Shookhiyan Jo Bhawre Aa Ke Loot Gaye(opening window n feeling air)
Badal Rahi Hai Aaj Zindagi Ki Chaal Zara
Isi Bahane Kyun Na Main Bhi Dil Ka Haal Zara
Sawaar Loon Sawaar Loon
Sawaar Loon Haye Sawaar Loon(setting her dinning table)
Balam Ji Purane Hain
Nayi Si Dhoop Hai
Jo Palkein Khatkhta Raha Hai
Kiska Roop Hai(doing a contemporary step)
Sharartein Kare Jo Aise
Bhool Ke Hizaab Kaise Usko Naam Se
Main Pukaar Loon(does a cartwheel)
Sawaar Loon Haye Sawaar Loon
Sawaar Loon Sawaar Loon(looking her self in mirror n combing her hairs)
Hawa Ke Jhonke Aaj Mausamo Se Rooth Gaye
Gulon Ki Shookhiyan Jo Bhawre Aa Ke Loot Gaye
Badal Rahi Hai Aaj Zindagi Ki Chaal Zara
Isi Bahane Kyun Na Main Bhi Dil Ka Haal Zara
Sawaar Loon Sawaar Loon
Sawaar Loon Haye Sawaar Loon(sings thinking about the time they spent on beech n blushes on recalling the hug)
Yeh Sarre Koyale Bani Hai Aaj Dakiyan(talk to a koyal which was on balcony)
Kuhu Kuhu Mein Chitthiyan Padhe Mazakiyan
Yeh Sarre Koyale Bani Hai Aaj Dakiyan
Kuhu Kuhu Mein Chitthiyan Padhe Mazakiyan
Inhe Kaho Ke Na Chupaye
Kisne Hai Likya Bataye(picks the koyal n flies it in air)
Uski Aaj Mein Nazar Utaar Loon
Sawaar Loon Sawaar Loon
Sawaar Loon Haye Sawaar Loon
Hawa Ke Jhonke Aaj Mausamo Se Rooth Gaye
Gulon Ki Shookhiyan Jo Bhawre Aa Ke Loot Gaye
Badal Rahi Hai Aaj Zindagi Ki Chaal Zara
Isi Bahane Kyun Na Main Bhi Dil Ka Haal Zara(keeps on dancing in contemporary style)
Sw comes back n saw taani blushing n dancing sw thinks- (taanya ko dance aata hai wow kitna acha dance karte hai par yeh blush kyu kar rahe hai yeh chakkar kya hai)
HERE WITH AMAR
Amar calls rinni…n as soon as rinni picks call
Rinni-bhai!!!(actually when rinni phone rings at the same time rey came so rinni picks call n looks at rey so she said bhai)
Here listening bhai amar understand rey is there so he hurridly cuts calls….
Amar was sad he sits on chair n looks towards nil n simmi pouting like a child n nil finally busted out with anger
Nil-tu na ek no ka dhakkan hai
Sim-nil calm down
Nil-kya calm down…saala 1 ghante se pakka raha hai k rinni ko propose karna hai n finally jab himmat aae n call kiya toh tune bina kuch bole phone cut kar diya….teri itne phatti kyu hai rinni se
Amar-mai linni se nai lalta (mai rinni se nai darta )
Sim-toh???
Amar-tumtol nai tamtige(tum log nai samjhoge)
Nil-abbe e tereko batana hai to bata khali pile bheja mat kha
Amar-wo mereko linni toh tatose tarneta hai(wo mereko rinni ko propose karne ka hai)
Nimmi-not again!!!
Sim-amar last 1 hour se tum yahi kheh rahe ho….agar rinni ko propose karna hai toh karo na prob kya hai
Amar-ley(rey)
Nil-abbe rey kaise prob ho sakta hai
Amar-tuti ley linni ta tai hai(kyuki rey rinni ka bhai hai)
Nil-abbe e rey rinni ka tai n uska bhai hai
Sim-nil usne bhai he bola
Nil-oh acha par dude rey typical bhai nai hai u chill
Amar-tu nai samjhega mera dard…simmi ka koi bhai hota tab tujhe samjh mai aata
Simmi-mera bhai kaha se aa gaya
Nil-ha be aise dara mat simmi ka koi bhai nai hai
Simmi-toh tum dar kyu rahe ho
Now both looked at each other n llhh happen…soon amar comes n claps infront of them
Amar-mai yaha apni problem bata raha ho aur tum log apne mail age ho
Nil glared at amar 4 spoiling his romantic moment
Nil-amar tu ja abhi aur hame bhi jane de
Amar-par rinni
Sim-amar hum kal sochenge tu ja abhi…amar left n here nimmi was about to leave when a car came in full speed n split all dirty water on simmi's cloths
Sim-wth
Nil-abbe o dekhai nai deta kya
Sim-meri dress
Nil-hey don't worry ek kaam karo mere ghar chalte hai waha Vicky aur neha bhi honge toh waha tum apni dress saaf kar lena
Simmi-ok both left 4 nil n vicky's flat where viha was already there
HERE WITH BHASHI(BHARAT N AASHI)
Aashi finally manged to make bharat drop her home….aashi was sitting behind him on his bike n bharat was drving
Suddenly it starts raining n aashi open her hairs n stretch her arms to feel the rain
Bharat from his mirror saw aashi n thinks
Bharat-abbe kitne cute lag rahe hai yr maine isse aise kabhi dekha he nai …..abbe yeh mai kya soch raha ho yeh pyaar vyaar k faltu lafre mai nai padhna mujhe
Coming out of thoughts he drops aashi to her home
HERE WHEN REY WAS BACK TO HIS HOUSE
Rey comes smiling n rinni looks at him in weird was n thinks-yeh bhai itna smile kyu kar rahe hai
Rinni-bhai
Rey-ha(still smiling)
Rinni-aap theek ho na
Rey-ha meri behan meri pyaari se sis mai theek ho infact isse acha mai kabhi ho bhi nai sakta
Rinni thinks-yeh kya ho gaya bhai ko
Just then rinni phones rings n both rey n rinni saw it was……..ARUN!!!!
Note-OMG I can't believe I m almost completing 50 pages of this story thanks to all my sweet readers love u all
Precap-all couple r thinking about each other…
why arun is calling rinni???? How rey will react????...will neha forgive Vicky????
Sw went somewhere…he meet someone…where sw went???? N whom he meet????
Wanna know stay tune………
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