D3 SS THE MISSION(CHAPTER16 PAGE 103)) - Page 2

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Originally posted by: shruti2306

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Originally posted by: tareyfan

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CHAPTER-1

LONDON

A girl is sitting on bed holding her mother's photo who died in a car accident a week ago

Taani-mom I miss u….kyu chale gaye aap mujhe chod kar….bilkul akele ho gaye ho mai…mom I miss u mom plz come back to me mom plzzz

Just then doorbell rings…taani wipes her tears n open door n saw a nurse

Nurse-mam u r the daughter of that lady who died a week ago

Taani-yes

Nurse-she told me to give this to u…she was writing a letter 4 u till her last breath

Nurse gave the letter n left

Taani open it n starts reading

To my angel

My baby u r the only good thing that happen with me but as it say every good things comes to an end…this time its me. My baby u never ask about ur father n brother as I told u not to ask but today I m gonna tell u but I can stop at any point because soon I'll be leaving u 4 ever. Baby go get ur brother he is a wonderful human being n a great brother. He might hate u n me n the reason is ur dad. I can't tell u what happen because I don't have time but all the secrets r their in India in our old house. Just go back to India find ur brother n ya u call him hero but his real name is s….

Taani look at the letter n turn it to find the name of her brother but nothing was there….yes her mother died while while writing her brother name

Taani cried a lot. She use to love her father but what her father did that make her mother's life so horrible. She needs to find out. She have to go to India to find the truth, her brother her hero...

MUMBAI

There is huge house n on the name plate it was written "Reyansh singhania & Rinni singhania"

Inside a room a boy age of 21 sleeping shirtless when his phone rings…he picks up

Voice-dude where the hell r u???

Rey-kya yr chilla kyu raha hai tu sw sone de na

Sw-saale mai tera half an hour se wait kar raha ho jogging track pe aur tujhe sona hai!!!!

Rey-oh god!!! Sorry dude sorry….wo…wo…ha wo dekh na rinni ne phir nai uthaya mujhe!!!

Sw-really!!! Usne uthaya nai k tu utha nai

Rey(bite his tongue…his best friend know him well)-ya sorry mai utha nai

Sw-so come fast now or else I'll leave

Rey-no no I'll be there in 15 min

Rey quickly goes to have a bath n changes in his jogging suit n come down calling rinni

He was coming down when his cell again rings n it was his dad

Rd-hey rockstar gm

Rey-gm dad

Rd-so how's rinni???

Rey-usse kya hona hai…she is fine

Rd-u don't know

Rey-what???

Rd-she fall from stairs yesterday…she called ur mother n told her

Rey-what!!!! Par usne mujhe kyu nai bataya

Rd-rey easy…wo dar gaye hogi

Rey-dad wo mujhse darte kyu hai

Rd-because u r too possessive son

Rey-dad bhai ho mai uska ok

Rd-bhai ho bodyguard nai…give her some space my boy…n ya who was guy u beat last Friday????

Rey-what guy???

Rd-rey I know u ok now tell me what happen

Rey(busted his anger)-he was checking out my baby sister n was passing cheap comments dad n waise bhi I didn't beat him I just throw some punches because rinni ne mujhe rok diya tha

Rd-rey calm down n son "some punches" I know u ok poor guy

Rey-dad r u ok rinni is ur daughter n u use to be so caring 4 her now what happen

Rd-thankgod

Rey-what???

Rd-son ur mom was next to me u know na she doesn't like when u fight….n by the way u did the right thing but take care of urself ok n ur sister too

Rey(smiles)-yes dad

Rd-ok then I'll talk to u later bye

They hang up

Rey think-rinni k bacchi mom ko complain k tune rok ab tu!!!

He was about to go in her room when he bumps to her…he saw her face n shouts in fear

Rey-ahhh

Rinni-ahhh

Rey-WTH yeh kya lagaya hai tune face pe

Rinni-god!!! Facepack hai bhai!!!!!...she goes to kitchen n rey follows her

Rey-tune bataya kyu nai???

Rinni-kya???

Rey-k tu kal gir gaye thi!!!!

Rinni-oh god!!! Mom bhi na bata diya sab kuch dad ko n then dad ne aapko bata diya!!! Arre aap log itne tension kyu lete ho!!! N bhai I didn't fall I just slipped …kuch nai hua hai mujhe

Rey-ok n ya by the way tune mom ko kyu bataya k last Friday maine kissi ko maar diya tha…awai dad mom k samne mujhe daatne(scolding) k acting kar rahe the jabke maine kuch galat nai kiya tha(pouting like a child)

Rinni-what u mean by kuch galat nai kiya tha…arre wo bechara ladka

Rey-bechara!!!!

Rinni-sorry I mean wo ladka…

Rey-tu chup kar jo kiya acha kiya saala kamina pata hai kya kya kheh raha tha tere bare mai!!!

Rinni slap her head n think-y I m even talking on this topic he will never understand

Rinni(changing topic)-aaj aap jogging nai gaye???

Rey-oh shit!!! Sw is gonna kill me now…I got to go byeee…kiss her forhead n said-u tc n ya breakfast kar lena I'll see u in collage now bye

Rinni-bye bhai..rinni smilies n thanks god 4 giving such a lovely brother

JOGGING TRACK

Sw was still waiting 4 rey when he saw a little girl of 4 years falls n started crying he was about to go when the girl scream while crying-bhai!!!!!!

Then a 7 year boy came running to her n picks her n said-oh "my little doll" has fallen!!! Koi baat nai dekho bilkul nai lage u r my brave sister hai na??

The girl nods in yes..then boy took her in his arms n left the place

Those three words "my little doll" made sw remind of his past n he was in tears…he use to call his sister "my little doll"

Sw-why!!! Why!!! Kyu yaad karta ho mai tujhe!!! Why!!!!

Just then rey enters

Rey-sw sorry dude really sorry wo actually…(then he saw sw) swayam dude r u ok???

Sw(hiding his emotions)-ya dude I m fine…tu late kyu aaya

Rey-arre wo rinni!!!! I tell u these sisters kuch bhi karte hai yr

Sw-ya I know(remembering his childhood)

Rey-huh??? How do u know u don't have a sister

Sw(hurt)-ya I don't have a sister

Rey-dude tell me what's wrong

Sw-nothing yr leave it…come on lets jog

LONDON

Taani decided to come back to India so she call Sharon

Taani-hey wassup???

Sh-I m fine dear u say….aaj achanak call??? Online nai aane wale hai kya

Taani-actually I have a news 4 u….par tu itne jaldi mai kyu lag rahe hai

Sh-arre nothing collage k liye tayyar ho rahe ho…tu bata what news

Taani-ok so the news is……………………………….i m coming back to India!!!!

Sh-what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yipeee……….oh god taani what a freaking good news!!! Tu plz jaldi aa oh god I m so excited…sun tu mere saath rahege ok n I'll make sure that u get admission in my collage n then we will have fun….we will go shopping n parties n…

Taani-woah woah woah hold on yr…abhi maine decide kiya hai aane mai thora time lagega

Sh-oh ok…but come fast n then I'll introduce u to my friends

Taani-friends ya someone special???

Sh blushed

Taani-oh my my someone is blushing huh

Sh-how do u know

Taani-oh come I know u ok….chal u go collage I'll see u soon in India

Sh-yup chal bye……..

COLLAGE

Sh was dam happy today…she enters canteen in very good mood

Boys saw her….vicky signals nil n they both shows thumps up to amar n bharat…4 of them moved to reyam

Vic-dude yeh sh aaj kuch zayda he kush nai hai???

Nil-ya baad toh sahi hai hai na sw???

Sw looked at sh n got lost in her…he was smiling whenever he saw sh happy

Rey saw sw n smiled n thinks-kitna pyaar karta hai use toh manta kyu nai hai

Bharat-arre bhailog yeh toh kho gaya

Amar(shaking sw)-swaaym tya tooch lara hai tu(sw kya sooch raha hai tu)

Sw-nai kuch nai

Vic-sw…sh itne kush kyu hai???

Sw-how do I know that

Nil-acha toh tujhe nai pata matlab koi aur ladka hai

Sw-what!!!!(jealous)zarori thore na hai k koi ladka he ho….guys kuch bhi mat bolo

Just then sh calls rey

Sh-rey come here I need to talk to u

Rey goes

Vic-sw kahi rey he toh wo ladka nai hai???(giggles n shows thumps up to rest)

Sw saw shaarey laughing n holding hands

Sw-no way they r just friends …u guys have just lost it

Vic n nil signal "v" with their fingers n said-not yet dude!!!

Sw slaps his head n said-kuch nai ho sakta tum logo ha

SCENE SHIFTS TO AN EMPTY CLASSROOM

Neha was sitting remembering her old days with Vicky…she was holding their pic

She starts crying like hell…..vicky was passing when he saw neha inside crying…he goes n stands at door…neha crying was like someone had stepped him in his heart

Neha was the only girl who can bring the best n worst from Vicky

Vicky thinks(should I patch up…no Vicky again she will start thinking about marriage n I can't marry her now)…he goes from there

Here rinni was walking when she bumps to amar

Rinni-sorry

Amar-its ok

Both smiles

Rey was passing when he saw them he thinks( hmmm so my baby sister is grown up now good…but how can I leave her without teasing her)

So he made a fake angry face n goes to them

Rey-wassup guys(fake glares to amar)

Rinni looks at rey n got scared(rinni got scared very soon n specially from rey)

Rinni-nothing I just bump to him

Rey(still glares)-oh I see

Amar(scared)-mai baad mai milta ho…he left

Rinni-mai bhi ghar mai milte ho…she also left

Rey starts laughing n said-kitna darte hai dono..

Sh saw all this…she goes to rey n hit on his head with her book

Rey-what???

Sh-why did u do this…they were so adorable

Rey-excuse me!!! Rinni is my baby sister

Sh-really!!! Don't lie u did this just to tease her…u love teasing her don't u???

Rey-no

Sh-yes

Rey-no

Sh-yes

Rey-no

Sh-oh come on rey I know u accept it

Rey-ok fine yes

Sh-u know tu amar ko dara raha tha na dekhna ek din aaega jab koi "bhai" tujhe daraega because tujhe uske behan se pyaar ho jayega

Rey-oh really aisa kabhi nai ho sakta

Sh-really n why is that!!

Rey-because reyansh singhania n loves r like poles apart

Sh-but I m sure aisa he hoga

Rey-no way n waise bhi aisa nai ho sakta because tumhara koi bhai nai hai…(winked at her)

Sh-REY!!!! How could u…(start running behind him)

All this was witnessed by sw

Sw thinks-kahi rey sh ko pasand toh nai karta!!!!...no no kya kuch bhi soach raha hai tu sw they r just friends n agar like karte bhi hai toh mujhe kya!!!!!

Huh I m done with chapter 1 hope u like so hit like guys n comment plzzz

Precap-taani lands in india, taayam n taarey meet, sw jealous from shaarey bond

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SUPERB DEAR👏
LOVED THE PART...
SWAYAM STILL REMEMBER HIS LITTLE DOLL😊
N TAANI IS COMING BACK TO INDIA
AWSMMM
VIHA PART WAS SOO CUTE
N SWARON PART WAS AMZING
PERFECT UPDATE DEAR😛
UPDATE SOON N PM ME
THANKS FOR THE PM

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Amazing update! Loved reys possesiveness for rinni! (Wish my bro was like that) it was really cute! Swayam remembering taani was awesome! N swayam jealous of sharey bond! Lol! Will b waiting desperately for taayam meet! Update soon n thnxx for d pm..
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Wonderful update, aww Taani mom passed away before she can write Swayam name so sad
Omg Rey is so possessive lol... I wonder how he will be with Taani lol
Swaron love each other but not confess their love yet hmm hope Rey can help them confess soon
U did an incredible job plz continue soon