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I love this jealous khushi alot

This was sooo good! I've been a silent reader of your OSs for a while now but I HAD to comment! UGHHH I just loved this piece!! It's nice to see Khushi get possessive over Arnav-Arnav's jealousy is used like crazy, so this is a great twist! I'm personally not liking Sanjana, but that's just my Khushi bias talking :) And Lavanya? I'd love to see what you do with her character! Maybe she can help her Chamkili out! Poor NK, LOL, out of it as usual. And Arnav?! How could you? Can't wait to see their banter and bickering-this one's going to be a good one! If possible, do PM me about further updates! This seems like a great read! Looking forward to the next update! And thank you for having the English translation as well :)

MINE what a possesive title. I like the jealous monster theme, it makes always feel giggly. Obviously jealous is important for the relation the correct proportion will give the relation its longness. Here now kushi is being fried want to see arnav also frying like her.

In pm can see you have more chapter in the private blog. To read CMH, MSW and Mine can I send my mail id to you? Just a doubt, as i always read from mobile, for some reason in WP it was always difficult to comment, do you have thread in IF so I can write my comment?

This is a beautiful story..

Who is lavanya's guy. Arnav or Nk?
Or is this arnav's plan to bring lavanya to make khushi more jealous.

Sanjana . Hating her already.
No jalebies for devimaiya for the whole week. Lol

Is khushi really going to help lavanya to patao arnav..???

When will she think of herself not of others ..??

waiting for the next update.
update soon.

poor khushi, she will be certifiably crazy by the end of this story

awesome story.love it.so many jeAlous lovers around.

Poor Khushi, looks like she needs to get in line!

Love this story!

Haha, Devi Maiyya certainly has to entertain some complaints now